SwaRon OS:[UPDATED] Siren back for her Lover Boy

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Sunil

@Suni1986

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

i read both part n they r amazing

sharon nd swayam romantic moment which disturbed by hyper taani
swayam taking sharon sight to calm down d situation.
Sharon also take his site after hearing hurtful words for swayam

n taani insulted her by telling sharon past behaviour with swayam.
Swayam consoled her to calm down then tease her to make cheerful
finally swayam happy after seeing cheerful sharon

sharon n simmi convo nd swayam concerned for her was amazing.
Sharon jealous cuz of swayam n aashi
nice

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sakshi gupta

@sakshiswaron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Suni1986
i read both part n they r amazing

sharon nd swayam romantic moment which disturbed by hyper taani
swayam taking sharon sight to calm down d situation.
Sharon also take his site after hearing hurtful words for swayam

n taani insulted her by telling sharon past behaviour with swayam.
Swayam consoled her to calm down then tease her to make cheerful
finally swayam happy after seeing cheerful sharon

sharon n simmi convo nd swayam concerned for her was amazing.
Sharon jealous cuz of swayam n aashi
nice

Thank u so much dear!! Its really very sweet of u!

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saheliforever

@saheliforever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Superb update yaar!! I just love the BIN BADAL BARSAT concept<3
the sharon- simmi convo. Is super adorable!!
Swayam ka cute wala msg.. Just loved it<3
sharon ka wife wala tough look dena nd swayam ka huby. Ki taraha dar jana, i was hillarious! I clearly visualize d whole scene!! Superb!!
Nd last the jealousy wala part was just perfect.. I just loved the way sharon console herself that 'swayam sirf aashi ko sikha raha hai' so adorable<3
plzzz.. Update the next parts also.. Nd thanks for d pm.

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swaron_addicted

@swaron_addicted

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

superb os dear👏

actually now a days holidays chal rahi hai and meine aaj hi padhi just loved it to the core.. i really wish kash esa hi hota but gud attempt plzz write more os😳

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: sakshiswaron

Thanks for the WONDERFUL and ENCOURAGING comment!! 😃
I loved how u quoted some of the lines, i cant believe u liked that 'bin badal barsat' conept, i found it a little cheesy, but i knew that in SwaRon's sweet love story it wud fit nicely!

Thanks again...😳

@red

chessy hona toh swayam ka borth right hain... 😉😉😉

and happy that u liked my comment

i said what i felt