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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

deethu... its different .. yet amazing 😃

meko starting me toh samajh hi nhi aa rha tha...

ki kaun kisse baat kar rha h 😛

swaron are already hooked up.. 😊

n kriya is tomboyish... cuteee 😛

aate hi iske... flirting shuru.. rey ... mmuuaahhh 😉

oopss... bahot tension hai na inme...

hahaha... bhang chadha ke bhi superb dance...

even i'm loving this song too... kitna mast h na...😛

sabko shaq padva diya... gud gud...😎

ohhh god... itni badi baat hui thi .. 😲

rather misunderstanding... trust factor was lost na 😳

but he is really sorry...

sab baatein maan rha h ...

awww... true lover 👏

sabke samne kisss... omg epic ☺️

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

deetha that was not at all a crap...

n i mean it...

that was actually really good...

starting ki kuch lines me samjh nhi aaya k kon kon hai...???

but as the story progress samjh gyi...

rey ne kriya k sath esa kiya tha...

n their dance n all...

n finally the patch up...hayee...

sabke saamne kiss n all...😳

awsm dear...

Edited by ..Roop.. - 12 years ago

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Sunil

@Suni1986

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

I read both versions nd they equally amazing in their own way

I always love kriyam bond was d most bt sharey too nice.
Swayam know kriya very well nd she want to be in her besties arm.
Swayam dropped her at home by giving hug n pull her on his bak
kriya feeling rey staring her with that look

krisha convo was awesome.
Kriya nd sharon dressing totally diff.
Then tulli kriya ka dance in holi nd rey also join her.

Rey entered in her room bt kriya pounced bak as hungry tigress.
Then their convo was nice.
Rey use her as bet bt when she go away frm him, he came to knw her importance in his life.

Rey agreed with all saying by kriya nd she ready to give him cuz she still love him lot

Edited by Suni1986 - 12 years ago

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Riya Kapoor

@RiyaArShaKapoor

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Ye toh maine phle hi padh liya bt eror aa gya tha toh muje alas aa gya..aise coment krne mei double aalsi hu..update ekdum fadhu tha..bole toh ekdum bindass..phle thoda confusing lga strt ka bt 2nd tym padne mei samaj aa gya..beautifuly writen as per d song..in vaibhavi mam's style bole tho ra..rapaat..rapchik..rapchundus..bapka os tha..ekdum dhansu.. 😆 Imagining vrush as sharon was superb idea...

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

luved the ending!!...kiss.aur woh bhi sabke samne...wat guts!!!mana parega!!!! really nice job!!!luved this Os it was definietly different then the other ones...and luved how you changed the charecters!!Really a pleasure to read!!