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shreyasonia

@shreyasonia

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Totally loved it 😊
I did feel sorry for Khushi when she was imagining him everywhere and double guessing her decision (for leaving)

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#282

wow, what an awesome chapter!

I hope the distance between them both in the last few days only makes their relationship stronger :D

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

i feel like hugging you for this update...and for giving a biiig smile on my face😃
in the start i was like oh no i hate it when khushi is being hurt for no fault of hers...the way you describe shyam shows how a brother is-not able to see his sister hurt...
phew the seperation track is not tooo long...
i felt very bad for khushi she was hallucinating...but in the end he did come na for HIS khushi...
hope anjali and shyam talk and sort how their problems...
khushi dont forgive him very easily...so arnav knows the full truth about shyam and anjalis relationship na??so mu is cleared...
hopefully in the next update we all get to know what was the problem between shyam and anjali
continue soon

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cheval

@cheval

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Omg this isss sad felt lkke cryjng shyam I can say is a nice brother jn this really wana knw wat payal did for now anji n arnv r in london

Just cant wait to read mooore

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kooltoad

@kooltoad

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Oh my god zehra, that was so so beautiful and touching... Read it twice and cried both the times... Khushi is so innocent and so in love with him and so so hurt because of how he asked her to leave him and the break up... And arnav must be feeling like hell seeing her in such a condition and remorseful too... Uske dimaag ki batti finally jal gayi kya, change of heart kaise hua? G ki wajah se ya for anji ka sach? Whatever I just want my khushi to be happy and out of her present state of depression ASAP but not without giving him a good bashing or some punches, some tough questions, some resistance, some kisses and a tight hug...
U hv described her state without arnav so sensitively that I just cudn't handle the angst and sorrow but loved the way it was written...

Now the expectations are definitely very high for the next update as to how arnav is going to make it up to her... Update soon, dying to read it... :)

PS - Shyam took a lot of time to understand the reason behind khushi's heartbroken state... Kudos to payaliya, sorry G urf jiji... And I am happy finally anji and shyam r face to face to solve their mysterious problem and love story... :)

Edited by kooltoad - 12 years ago

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aysh05

@aysh05

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Is it ok that I had tears in my eyes for feeling Khushi's pain?

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Really felt for Shyam he seemed so helpless in helping Khushi he is a great brother. Cant wait for her reaction when she realises he really is there

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#288

awesome update

poor poor khushi

she needs a really big hug

its sweet and supportive of shyaam how he never pressurized her into telling him why she is upset and crying

aww bless khushi she is imagining him everywhere and when he actually is there, she thinks its her imagination but she doesnt want it to end

what he did was wrong, no matter what reason, khushi wasnt at fault and he shouldnt have treated her like that

i love payal, she makes khushi her number one concern

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Yayy, Payal ki Jai Ho! Atleast your story has given some meaningful role to her, good one. Shyam's brotherly concern was very heart warming and Khushi's illusion was very disturbing, I wish I can go and hug her & say "Dont worry Khushi, sab theek ho jaayega" 😭 BUT so glad that he finally came and I am so eager to read more about Arnav's Khushi Cappuccino. Brilliant update 😃