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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

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There is a piece of you that's here with me it's everywhere I go in everything I see

You hurt me more than I deserve and I love you more than you can ever love me

Edited by Kalyaani - 12 years ago

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

La!

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He shows up now !! After hurting her so much ?? And asks her how she could forget everything ?? Does he remember what he told her in his room ??

He asks her why she went away ?? He pushed her away ! And he is angry that she went away ??

And he'll say "I didn't mean it... gusse main aake maine kya keh diya mujhe patha hi nahi chala...aur jab realize kartha hun tho... "

Aur jo dard tumne usse diya uska kya ??

Such an angsty chapter yet not very angsty ! The mere presence of a certain Raizada makes up for everything even after all the damage he does ! I wonder how !

Poor Poor Khushi... He made her doubt herself !! He made her question her actions ...
And she still believed it was probably her fault :(

She saw him everywhere :( Talked to him like he was really present and didn't even believe when he actually showed up :(

It broke my heart and I'm sure it will break his too if it's already not broken !

Imagine her state ... But I'm sure its gonna hurt him more... Every tear that she sheds.. He was responsible for making her lifeless and he's gonna hurt more !

Though I should really not be very happy that Arnav showed up... I am... Exactly like how Khushi is...
I think she's going to forgive him !

Immediately!! Don't they say To forgive is the biggest punishment ever !

Arnav may probably not be at fault at all... He may have had a really good reason for whatever he did but still it doesn't make up for the hurt he caused her !

I knew Payal is going to have a hand in whatever happened or is happening now... When she came to know that Khushi left with Shyam and Khushi had wanted to talk about something important with payal .. though it wasn't about herself... Payal doesn't know that ! Shyam calls her tells her about Khushi...

And Payal is Arnav's G ... So there must be a connection !!

Abhi Anjali Shyam wali baat bhi bahar aayegi

Update soon 😉

Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Twiggy aayi :D

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I love Payal. Bas!

It was so heartbreaking... she sees him everywhere, and then he disappears. My poor baby, Khushi,..Arnav ne usko itna kyun sataya?

He is back now, in that sext blue shirt, but Khushi - do not forgive him till he begs for it!

Zee, you are the best-est...ab sab thik ho jayega, I can breathe now :D

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RainyDays

@RainyDays

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

What ? I am on the First page ?? *Suprised *!!! Achievement, Achivement !!

Hey,
A Heart breaking start with a truly heart warming and cute ending ...!!
It really broke my heart seeing Khushi's State ... Crying for her Love , Smiling for her brother to keep him relived ...
The thought which came was ' Will the pain continue due to misunderstanding ??' But when was reading abt Khushi's hallucination ..was so so happy that 'He. Came!!! , He came for His Khushi !!' But , But again it broke my heart that all was a dream ...
The memories was downright romantic ...!!! But the reality and tears really hurting ...

And I think Payal informed Arnav abt Khushi's state but then why will Anjali come ?? Hope to get the answers by Arnav's viewpoint ... And know what Payal did ??
Hope that Shyam Anjali reunite and clear their. Problems...
When Khushi saw Arnav 2nd time, I knew it was not a dream for Anjali was mentioned abt earlier.. And this time I was literally smiling a 1000 watt smile ..
Loved their talks and Khushi's unintentional confessions abt her hallucinations !!
Khushi should not forgive him with one Kiss.. He deserves a lot more for hurting her ... I know he must be in pain hurting her but still he should have talked it out ...
["Forgot? Forgot what? Forgot whom? You? I tried. I
tried my best to forget you. Par yeah dil maanta hi
nahi hai" she looked at him, with tears brimming in
her eyes.
"Toh matt manaao na" he pleaded.] - Cuteness truly Personified ...!!

Hope he has something planned for earning her forgiveness ...
The end was sooo good and intruiging ..
Wonder what will happen next ...?
Waiting Impatiently ...!!
Jaldi Update Karna , Please ...

Edited by RainyDays - 12 years ago

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Loved d update
looks like things are going to be back to normal
am excited to know how exactly is she gonna
react to Arnav's presence in real
pls update soon
Thanx for mailing 😊

Edited by --MISHTEE-- - 12 years ago

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Mini17

@Mini17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Res

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That was one heart wrenching update!

Felt really bad to see Khushi in that state for no fault of hers. My heart cried with Khushi when she asked Arnav to not touch her fearing he might disappear.

Finally Arnav is in London. From his talks I gather that he doesn't want to break off with Khushi so I guess the misunderstanding is sorted out.

The surprise is Anjali is in London as well. It would be really good if they too cleared their problems and move on.

I hope we get the much needed answers regarding Anjali-Shyam in the coming updates.

Is this SS coming to an end?

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

This, in an eerie way, reminds me of a song called "Possibility" by Lykke Li.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3yOp3AC9_9c[/YOUTUBE]

The song was used in the movie New Moon of the Twilight series (Worst mistake of my life, that movie. I assure you. But I like the song 😆)

and here is a quote, which I thought fitted the chapter -

"At the end of the day it's about how much you can bear, how much you can endure. Being together, we harm nobody; being apart, we extinguish ourselves."

- Tabitha Suzuma, Forbidden

Not much to say about the chapter, but only that I await the next one. All this rona dhona is not my cup of tea, the confrontations that follow is 😆😉 Oh, Shyam in the beginning broke my heart - Its more torture to see your loved ones hurting, then see being hurt yourself

-Vee

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago

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vrinda16

@vrinda16

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

My spot Zehra...be back after reading

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Mindblowing update Zehra...the way u described Khushi's state of mind, her hope Arnav would come for her, hallucinating his presence around her & in everything she does, then the heartbreak on realising that it was all just a figment of her imagination & that reality was just too bitter for her to accept, the inability to live without him around was all just beautifully described...Shyam realised it slowly that his Chutki though tried couldn't put up her old self before him, he didn't probe her despite knowing that someone had broken his sister's heart very badly...Arnav my boy...here's a brother u'll have to win now or whenever after he gets to know u were the one responsible...I really wanted to know what Payal & Khushi spoke & how much...was that talk responsible for Arnav's coming? But then what abt Anjali? Y was she there? Hope to find answers in next update...Aww Khushi hasn't realised that this time Arnav was there for real...Khushi don't give in easily to him after what he has made u go through...Relent but only after u make him toil a bit

Edited by vrinda16 - 12 years ago

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happysingh

@happysingh

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

nice update😛

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#130

This chapter is a perfect example of the Kbler-Ross model. Khushi is going through the stages of Grief.

She is in Denial when she she thinks that he will come for her after seeing her missed calls. It is because of this denial that she has started having illusions of him. That is what the human mind does to comfort itself.

She is seeking Isolation because she wants to mourn for her loss.

She is Bargaining by hoping that if she goes back things might be okay or by talking to him she might persuade him.

She is feeling like a coctail of emotions. So much going through and there is nothing she can do about it. So she is just questioning herself like her decision to come away.

She's going through depression as she's disconnected from everything else. Arnav is the focal point of her thoughts. Her crying and aloofness is the reaction to her situation.

And just when she was about to go through the last stage of Acceptance you have made us all happy by bringing Arnav back to her.

He better give solid reasons for his jerk like behaviour but then that is Arnav.

Shyam played a very strong role in this chapter by being Khushi's support. That's what siblings do for you. His constant efforts in trying to make things better for her even though he himself was going through so much emotionally.

The line i liked best in this chapter is 'He knew she was hurting and was hurting because of some reason – a reason she didn't want to share now, a reason if said aloud might hurt her more.' So true. Because sometimes acknowleding things make it seem real and reality is quite painful.

I have a feeling that we are moving towards the end of this story. Beautiful chapter and very well written. Please excuse my psychological crap, got carried away.

Edited by IronButterfly - 12 years ago