Th#5 ArHi : Piece By Piece: Message For Readers [Pg.99] - Page 4

Originally posted by: ArShiFever.

Congrats 4 d New Thread 😊

Originally posted by: ducky_anne

I just read the whole thing, and all I can say is amazing. I had tears in my eyes the whole time. You have a really creative mind to think up such a great story! Please do update soon, and I sent you a buddy request as well, please do accept and pm when you update!

Originally posted by: -LiveCrazily-

Just catch the story yesterday and read it.

If I say I m not crying I am wrong and if I say I always want someone should write something like this on Arshi and I m wrong again

I follow and read many FF on Arhi actually they are only couple which FF I love to read. But no one able to write what you give us in form of Piece by Piece.

Piece of Piece story of "a Son or Sons (Aarav and Advay) mother and father_

its story of hatred

its story power of love

its story beautiful relation Mother

its story bonding of mother with their children

its story redemption

its story of pain of four lives.

Its story of devotion

Its story of self respect of a girl

Its story of feeling

Its story of scattered family

Its story of family reunited after dark night

What I say I cry more when Aarav met khushi how can a son hated his mother. That's most painful part .

Advay Singh Gujral what I say about him. He's son of his mother only he's a son who want to revenge from them who caused a pain to his mother. I don't know how he get to know the truth but if khushi tells him he never get this hatred toward Raizada.

Here I want to mention during all chapter i assumed advay as advayi because I always wish arnav khushi have a daughter 😆😆😉silly me so during story i assumed khushi have a strong daughter and she just like her father but its oky with u I love how u portray character of advay and his feeling toward his mother.

Arnav singh raizada. This man deserve this hatred but 25 years are enough but now I feel its time he gathered his strength and bring his family together redeem himself. NK so right he need not to clarify his sisters mistakes now see where he is

Khsuhi enough pain she need to open up for her son and for herself now and most importantly she deserve happiness and now aarav is here so may he can do this for his mother.

Aarav I never though you brought him in story'Gupta house scene was awesome how he feel alone and incomplete without his mother. He's son which every mother dream and ever girl also :P

Zaina I find her cute , love her and advay bonding I just want to request don't mixed it with Aarav. May be Zaina a girl you choose for Advay and keep her for him only

Ready to read more about your story

Update soon

Iqra

Originally posted by: ankitamishra201

happy holi !!!! thnx for the beautiful story so far ...waiting for the next part :)

Originally posted by: balsimransobti

my blushing model will u take my lyf fr updating😳

m impatient nw

Originally posted by: balsimransobti

waitng fr update

Originally posted by: balsimransobti

Oh i frget BABY mama iz bck nd she lvs u i patchd up wd chasby coz i cnt lose hr i nw m selfsh bt what to say i realy lv u bth nd i think i lv bth of u mr thn chasby lvs me md u

Originally posted by: balsimransobti

m waitng chasby i realy need to talk wd u
watz d use of a no if u r nt gng to reply chasby