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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Part 64

After waiting for arnav for another half hour,Khushi decided to call him asking him about his whereabouts,"Hello,Arnav where are you its 9 already?"asked Khushi in concerned tone."Khushi i am on the way,detective called me for informing details,the guy who was with you that night is being traced by him."replied Arnav."Ok i will heat the food till then and drive slowly,you are giving me further details later."said Khushi."Yes madam."replied Arnav in teasing tone.

Shyam said loudly on phone"Rishi,you are not coming back here till i tell you,everything is going out of my hands right now."Rishi replied"But i am already in train to delhi."Shyam said angrily"You fool do you have any idea what will happen if you get caught."and throw away the phone in anger after cutting the call.Pratap heard all this and said in slow tone"Control yourself just few minutes before only we have returned after bidding last bye to bade sahab,take rest."Shyam gave an angry glare to Pratap and left the house.Pratap thought I cant give the letter to Arnav today,How will i pass it to him without Shyam's knowledge.

At Rm,"Mujhe mamu se milna he aur mami se kehna he mere liye dher sali chocolate le aye"said Shreya in her baby tone."Ok Shreya dont cry i will take you there tomorrow morning ."said N.K.Anjali said picking up Shreya"Now happy,its time to sleep and i and nani will also come with you two."N.k and nani smiled and retired for the night.

Arnav opened the door with other keys and without making noise turned to enter the house when he saw his wife in her long white sleeveless night gown without robe,Arnav gave a sheepish smile to Khushi as she raised her brow and asked"Why you entered your own house like thief,Mr.Raizada?"with her hands crossed on her chest."Actually I stopped by to buy my toiletries for our trip."Khushi replied in tone laced with slight anger,"I bought that already when i was returning from Spa as i have to pack for you as well as me and dont lie as you cant."Arnav closed the distance between them and said slowly"I had gone to buy jalebis from your favourite shop,i thought i will surprise you."Khushi smiled and said"I was standing in the balcony and noticed your car so caught you."kissing his cheeks.

Edited by priluvsmonaya - 12 years ago

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priluvsmonaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Hope the update is not too short,no updates from 5th June to 19th June coz of exams.Wl try to update before 5th.
hit like and drop comments.Hopefully you wl continue loving my ff after the break.

Edited by priluvsmonaya - 12 years ago

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Neen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Awesome update.
Hope the detective soon traces shyam and pratap wil be able to pass the letter to arnav. Arnav entering in his own house as thief and getting caught by khushi was cute.

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rehnu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

wow loved it loved it and loved it

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priluvsmonaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

I dont want to give any lecture but wanted to tell u i m seriously disappointed with response to my story as no. of readers have increased thats what i-f screen shows,but only 13people(including common names)have gave response😭.I dont want to hurt anyone's emotion that those who read my updates hit like and comment(i wont mind positive criticsm but no bashing),Its time all who are reading my ff and want me to continue come out & respond.Its no blackmail & i m serious.I know i am not good writer,thanks to all who supported me.I will continue rest of the story after my exams,please readers think from my point of view,Sorry if i hurt anyone.I am not in mood to write or else i would have updated,I know i m irregular but i have exams.😔😒

Keep smiling and reading.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

came across this ff recently. Read all d chapters in one go .lovely update. Please pm me when u update

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priluvsmonaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

Part 65

Short Update.Ignore mistakes.

Arnav handed her the packet of jalebis and said"I will be back after taking shower."Khushi nodded and opening and munching the jalebi left to reheat the food in kitchen.Arnav smiled and muttering unbelievable left to have shower in their room.

They finished their dinner chatting about their trip and Khushi describing her Spa visit and arnav quietly listening her chatterbox wife and giving answers in monosyllables when required.After packing Arnav's clothes,they both slept in each other arms.

In one of the corner of bar Shyam was emptying cheap bottles of whisky and beers,that was how Pratap found him,he went near him and said"Its late we should go back home."Shyam nodded no and crying in anger said"Why i am not getting success in my plans to destroy him,i even lost baba today and couldnt do anything."Pratap said putting his hands on shoulder"We will talk in the morning."and paying the bills left the bar after Shyam.

In the morning,Arnav and khushi were having breakfast after completing their shower and were wearing t-shirt and jeans, when the doorbell rang,Khushi got up to opened the door and was happy to find Anjali,mami,Shreya,nani and n.k.Shreya kissed her cheeks and said"Where is mamu?"Khushi pointed him and after Hugging others and closing the door joined the family.

Edited by priluvsmonaya - 12 years ago