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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Caught up with this one after ages and the last chapter def had me in splits!

And i like the way tables been turned - Shyam is the one with the limp! Well done!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

omg man she shall be the death of him surely
he never seems to get her alone for long
poor man and he planned so well
but it seems it just aint his luck to have her more to himself
and you feel for him man
no you really do
all that planning down the drain
and anji had fallen for shyam over the phone
well who would have thought right
and he has the limp koi nahin
so their parents are alive i see
shame that they were they way they are
wow arnie sure was going for the kill but that didnt happen for him
but khushi was glad for the relief she got
sorry for late reply am really behind on all stories and trying to catch up
cheers for pm

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

omg I loved this... this is sooo awesome :D... pls pls update soon... i was hooked to it yesterday... i read all the 8 chapters in one go :)

wow Shyam limps for a change n seems like a good guy... loved lav too... and all 3 A's and NK and obvi khushi, payal and Anjali...

actually i just should have said i like all the characters :P

wow waiting to knw khuhsi's reaction when she comes to knw tht they r not a gay couple :P and Arnav's reaction :D :D can imagine "WHAT THE?!?!?!?!?!?" 🤣

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45678

@45678

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

red ur whole ss. its truely awesome. i loved it. its hillarious. please pm me the next one

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Deepa876

@Deepa876

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Hey just read all of the 8 chapters & I can easily say that u r now on my fav list of best funny writers on the forum. Your writing seems so effortless ( though I'm sure it's not ), full of comic & funny situations. Poor Arnav trying like a crazed man to patao Khushi. Can't wait to see the reactions of both of them when they will realize the actual truth behind Khushi's reluctance to show any romantic interest towards Arnav :) ha ha ha that would be a fun day indeed. Also NK's reaction would be a sight to behold I'm sure. All of your characters are so sweet, nice & yet goofy in their own ways. Shyam with a limp...hmmm interestingly different.
Plz do update soon, am dying to read more. Hope u keep getting inspired & keep writing such awesome stuff always. Also can u plz pm me when u update next. Thanks :)

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Im back and finally read Chapter 7 and 8.

chapter 7: Arnav and his wicked Ideas ... Loved what he chose as Khushi's punishment... Only if Khushi knew Arnav's intentions...😆 I love NK... Hez pretty sharp... picked up on Arnav and Khushi and Aakash and Payal... n now Aman knows as well... This is getting very interesting...

Chapter 8 : Loved it...! Things were going so well for Arnav but then Aakash Aman NK and a mud cake happened... 😆 Nk had some guts teasing Arnav like that...

So Shyam has a limp and that is why he is hesitant to meet Anjali... This just keeps getting better and better...

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

When are you updating?? Haven't seen a update on this story in ages...

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shona-li

@shona-li

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Hello readers, sorry for the lull in updating. Currently I've been going for job interviews which is where my time is spent mostly. BUTTT I have been writing intermittently and can promise the next update will be a Maha update! I aim to post it by the end of the week so watch this space! In the meantime, I have written another OS a while ago, 'Young and Beautiful' which if you haven't received a PM for, are free to check it out on my first page links. It's super long and something different. Either way let me hear your thoughts! See you again at the end of the week and thanks for waiting so patiently 😊