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..Amrita..

@..Amrita..

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

flawless...luvd it...jeevs has his handkerchif & viren has her bracelet...awesome & the love the dialogue WE R EACH OTHER'S DESTINIES...wonderful dear...do write more

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

totallyy beautiful n wonderful...lovedd itt..awesomeee updateee... do continueee soon n pls PM me..greatt goinggg... absolutelyyy WOW!!!!!

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Jennifer

@jenna_p

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Beautiful concept...Superb writing😊

Loved it..

Virika were indeed destined to be together..Loved the connection that u wrote ...

thanks for the PM...

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little.angel56

@little.angel56

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

hey!

can i just say that this is like one of the best written piece i have ever read? the present and the past were mixed so perfectly that it moved in front of my eyes flawlessly!

how they met after 20 years and "Viren weds Jeevika" o my gosh, i haven't seen such a well written story before.. infact the whole idea was so nice and refreshing! Virika are destined to be together, forever and always!

you should write so often now! i loved it a lot ❤️

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BloomingAway

@BloomingAway

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Loved it

Aaw they've known each other form childhood

Absolutely love It

Amazing story

Thanks for the pm

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Ayesha

@--Ayesha--

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Awesome update.
Lovely so beautifully writter.
Wow dey met 20 year before yuppp bcos of destiny dey r now virika.
Awww how cute viren kept d braclet wth him sooo long n jeevika d handkerchief.
Suprb update😃