An ArHi SS: Scandalous *Thread Three*

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amimus

@amimus

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#961

Juhi I have no words to describe your updates. It is fantastic and I so love this story .

I wonder what has shocked Khushi completely . Has Lavanya come back an din Arnav's cabin and are they hugging .

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berdine

@berdine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#962

Originally posted by: amimus

Juhi I have no words to describe your updates. It is fantastic and I so love this story .
I wonder what has shocked Khushi completely . Has Lavanya come back an din Arnav's cabin and are they hugging .

OH no!!!

shub shub bolo

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#963

Here is the link to Thread Four.

Hope to see you all there!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3507193/an-arhi-ss-scandalous-4-completed

-Juhi

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Samyxx

@Samyxx

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#964

Awesome and Amazing update...

But what is it in the end??

Is it a good thing or a bad thing??

Cant wait to find out...

PLease update soon...

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amv63

@amv63

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#965

Oh yes the scene works, Juhi😛 I think the diya scene is among everyone's list of favorite ipkknd scenes!!! And as usual you have taken it to an altogether different level!! You bring out the underlying passion with beautiful sensitivity. Thank you.

I think Khushi is showing immense courage...for a relatively sheltered young woman to take the step she has is commendable. And I'm not talking about the sex here!!. I mean the decision to stand up to her Buaji, leave the family home, and make a career for herself with the aim of supporting her family financially, despite the apparent "scandal" it will cause In Laxmi Nagar and Lucknow!! There is still a belief among many people in our country, unfortunately, that daughters are not meant to work outside the home because that would mean the parents have failed in their duty to support them and get them married off at the earliest😡

For Khushi the issue is made more complex by her growing feelings for a man she doesn't even know too well. She's risking her ideals, her beliefs for a man who does not share her views on love and commitment. Although I love the conviction with which she is working to change his mind!

And Arnav...for the first time Arnav is considering how his actions have affected Khushi, how he has turned her entire life upside down. He is less controlling, more willing to let her set the pace in this relationship, to see things from Khushi's point of view.

And now, he has disappeared. I'm going with a wild theory here...you haven't mentioned him taking his shots in a while. You havent said what they are, but I presume it's insulin? Did he forget to take a shot in the, um, passion of last night? Is his disappearance linked with that? Another favorite ipkknd scene? Please? ExPel please?

Loved this chapter Juhi. It was just perfect in terms of Khushi's understanding of what she wants in life, her decision to work, her refusal to accept any favors from arnav, her move to consummate this relationship because she wants to and not because she feels coerced or compelled to.

Edited by amv63 - 12 years ago

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#966

Excellent part!! Thank you for such a long update :)

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tashi26

@tashi26

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#967

Wonderful update...the diya scene was very nice...I loved it in serial and as well as in your update...waiting eagerly for the next part...

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-Shalu-

@-Shalu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#968

How can we not like your version, loved the update. It's great that Khushi decided to stop worrying about the consequences and to live for herself. Oh no, the cliffhanger made me anxious. :( PS: I think you need a new thread for the next chapter, so congrats! :D Thanks for the long update and pm.

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Anjali

@acklesmanic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#969

When we say that the wait for your updates are totally worth it, it would be a major understatement.
Loved the update. Loved the manner in which u have capture khushi's situation, her sense of independence, her love for her family, Arnav and all so beautifully. Loved their conversation where they talk about how they need each other by their side. As of their kiss by the palms, there was something so domestic about it when Arnav says that his woman should kiss him before he leaves for work. Nice to see NK being such a great friend to khushi.loved how Arnav lets her choose for herself even when it came to matters like as trivial as the clothes for her photo shoot. And coming to the lunch and the dinner, they were just awesome. Loved how the both of them are fighting tooth and nail for what's right according to them. Loved how u have incorporated the diya wala scene and also led it to something totally unexpected and wonderful😳. Waiting for more...!!!
Love,
Anjali
Oh yeah i think my siggy works well with her state of mind in the beginning of the chap..😳

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#970

Love how things are progressing between Arnav and Khushi. I love that you have allowed Khushi to progress to a self realization phase. She comes from a very conventional and traditional background but when Buaji threw her out, it was almost a blessing because now she is finding out who she and what she wants in life.

What is going on with Arnav? I will not try to guess but I feel really bad for Khushi...she was so happy and now she is full of worry and self doubts ...I hate that.