Behind the Mask - ManVeer FF [Ch. 23, P. 36] - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Wow simi Di. That was awesome.
I just read it all in one go. U really write beautifully
Love the concept and the way story is progressing.
Keep it up and do pm me please.


Love
Tammy.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Wow nice update sory fr late finaly manyata ko uday ne dhund hi liya... I wnt to see Udaymaytat love nokzok... Plse cntinue soon n thnx fr pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
wow simi .


beautifully writtern.


keep it up.
Edited by anjuroopak - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Fantastic update 👏
Beautifully written !
I could imagine everything very well !
The dialogues were superb !
I think Manyata went quite ahead with her rant !
Egarley waiting for the update !
Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !


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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
thaank uu dear for postinggg!!!!!!! oh my god silent uday is sach mein deathly!!!!!! wnder wat will uday say to manyta!!!!! bechari manyta us buasa ke baaton mein hi vshwas kar rahi hai,hpe she gets to know the truth soon,and usse pehle hope uday gets to know the truth!!!!!😊😊😊 will be waitng for ur nxt chappy
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
awesome but please update soon love it and hope uday and manyata fall in love soon.I know am being demanding but already had too much of manyata running behind of akash in DEK but still keep the nok jok between uday-manyata,and thank goodness u made J a positive character cause I would've been one reader less just want a different set of villains and u r giving it by making manyata's bausa the villain other than that u are an amazing writer and thank you for ur ff and pming me love u for ur story it's different in a really goood way
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: simisworld

NOTE: So I go through phases with songs where I just listen to them on repeat. One of the songs that came up earlier today on my itunes is Allah Maaf Kare. Now, it's been a few months since I've last heard this song but as I am currently in ManVeer la la land as i write this FF; can we talk about how this song describes them to a tee? I'm so sad there is not a VM for them (at least none that I could find). I did find an amazing Arshi one that someone made but of course IF won't allow me to paste the link as I'm a newbie. [If you youtube it, it's the one by MsSrockzify.]


Anyway, there are only two main verses to this song (male ones) and all I can think about when I hear them is Udayveer.

Yeh din jawaani ke, dil ki kahaani ke, aise bitaata hoon main;
Tere khayalon main, apne sawaalon mein, uljha sa jata hoon main...

--> We are just about getting into this phase of the FF where Uday's character would be singing this and very soon we will be getting to...

Maana, zamaana, yeh deta hai taana yeh todha awaara hoon main;
Joh bhi hoon, jaisa hoon, aisa yah vaisa hoon, ab toh tumhaara hoon main...

--> Hai...Oh how I can't wait til I get to write about this emotion!

In the meantime, anyone want to make a kickass VM on this song for me and post on the thread?

Updating soon!

Simi

I would but don't know how to make a vm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
wow simi dear...😃

awesum updates...👏👏

loved both 9B n 10..👍🏼

sorry exams goin on so couldnt comment...😭

bdw do cont soon...

n thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
and about the note,i dnt know how to make vm so cant help u in dat
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
hey dear.
ur story is really awesum nd outstanding.
great job 👏 👏
i read all the chaters of this story in one go.
it was such an interesting story. i thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
looking forwardd to uday-manyta meet in the next chapter.
plz update soon
waiting egerly.
if possible, plz pm me as well, whn u update next chap.

saloni

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