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_disha_

@_disha_

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#401

Conflict of ideologies and brilliantly depicted !

The tussle between heart and mind for both Arnav and Khushi is taking a toll on them which is evident with his dreams and her irrational behaviour and mood swings.

Like i mentioned earlier i was not fond of Anjali meddling with Khushi but then as a sister she just wants what she thinks is best for her brother ... i understand though not agree.

Payal on the other hand speaks when spoken to and thats what i like about her , she gives her opinion not being biased to any one party.

Then the party happened which leads to Khushi lashing out due to her insecurities seeing Arnav with Lavanya ...however better sense prevailed eventually and she apologized to Arnav. This whole incident clearly gave Arnav what he was looking for "an opportunity" and i am sure this pending talk will be beneficial for both.

Its not love Khushi is running from its merely the fear of the unknown !!

For her all this is new and she is scared to take the plunge but when she does she is going to be 100% in it ... Arnav i don't know quite what to think right now...he knows what she wants and he is not willing to give her that but still the pull she has on him is not going anywhere ! Waiting for their talk !!!

Edited by _disha_ - 12 years ago

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#402

Was waiting for this... So, both are in the same position after break up... I felt like Arnav really moved on in his life,,,... But, after reading the complete update.. I am sure its not like that...

Loved the update... As usual, my star is Payal... I wont give that tag to anyone else...

And now waiting for their confrontation...

Superb update dear,...😊

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710617

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

I loved it.. U kept the flow very fast... It was very real and I could picturize the scene as I was reading.

Dil hai ki maanta nahi..

I absolutely did not like Anjali's interference in the matter. Asking Khushi to give the relationship a go...I also love how Khushi gave her back politely..

I love the mature PayAl in this story... She was cool and frank..a good friend without egging her on..giving her fanciful dreams...

Edited by msin - 12 years ago

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citi

@citi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

So real and human. Her thoughts, reaction, jealousy and then self-recrimination are just like it happens. The awareness, heaviness of knowing what could have been and is not, and a certain amount of expectation from the other as also awkwardness are spot on.

What Anjali did was unfair...how can she hold out hope, however half-hearted it may be, to this girl on behalf of her brother. i like the strength and straight talking of Payal.

Your writing gets smoother with every update.

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

Both their feelings are depicted wonderfully...loved it..looking forward

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

Interesting chapter..

But I don't like Anjali's interference in Arnav Khushi matter..

Eagerly waiting for next chapter

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

"Human beings need a lot of things to feel alive: family, love, sex. But we only need one thing… To actually be alive. We need a beating heart. When our heart is threatened… We respond in one of two ways. We either run… Or… We attack. There's a scientific term for this. Fight… Or flight. It's instinct. We can't control it. Or can we?"

Arnav and Khushi both are reacting in a very natural way. Khushi is running away from him because talking about him and being near him is a constant reminder of her heartbreak. Of her failed relationship. A relationship which ended before it even started. Yes she made the decision herself but then that was the logical part of it. When it comes to matters of the heart, logical decsions often lead to pain. She is not going to find solace anywhere.

The dream beautifully depicted Arnav's state. It's the first time that someone has affected him so much. He's bound to react in this way. He can't seem to let go of her as she's the first one who came so near.

Moving on is easier said then done.

"You can seek the advice of others, surround yourself with trusted advisors. But in the end, the decision is always yours and yours alone. And when it's time to act and you're all alone with your back against the wall, the only voice that matters is the one in your head. The one telling you what you already knew. The one that's almost always right."

Khushi will give it a chance. Everyone deserves to be happy. Yes, she would have to bend her rules. But then rules are made to be broken. Love is a strong emotion. It's going to make her do the unexpected. Seeing him with someone else surely triggered her but Arnav has stepped in to take things in his hands. Women do get carried away with emotions but now that he's here, i hope they talk things out.

Edited by IronButterfly - 12 years ago

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

what a update...both are suffering ,they need to speak to each others as they say lack of communication can create a misunderstanding ...thank god arnav got sense ...next update will be very interesting

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#409

Don't like this Anjali. Interfering woman! Why can't she mind her own business?

Love Payal! She is the most sensible person in this story. Always gives sound advice(when asked) and minds her own business.

Poor Khushi is in a fix. She loves Arnav who doesn't believe in marriage. She has to decide soon what she wants from him.

Arnav is not wrong , when he goes out with Lavanya. He never lied to Khushi and has always been open about what he wants in a relationship and how far he will go .

Again a cliffhanger. You've promised to update soon so I'll wait for the next one.

PS.-Thanks for everything.

Edited by 1chilly - 12 years ago