7 DAYS ( STRANGE LOVE STORY) Part 3 on pg#30

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Madhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Thats really a long time..its okay will wait come back soon😊

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Surbhi Jain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

plz come back soon

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@Kryan_SanDhir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

This was short...

Please please update soon and come back soon with a very long update..

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madurifan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

😊ressy

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This FF has a very diffrent concept.. N i sum hw don't like Viren coz he is being so rude to Jeevs..

But I am sure one day he wl regret this..

I am waiting badly for all the other challenges..

Hope Jeevs wl win but i am sure there wl b sumthng dramatic in store..

So i shud wait till august k i w..

Pls pm me frm next..pls😛

i wl surely give u comments..

Edited by madurifan - 12 years ago

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Virika_EHMMBH

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

sorry for commenting late. . I started reading your updates now. They sound awesome and very interesting. Thanku for pming me and pls continue

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Surbhi Jain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

july coming to an end so please update soon dear

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aayushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

😊plz pm me too
loved the story
and the whole concept
plz update fast
😊 😊 😊

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sumayyah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

amazing
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Hammi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

sorry for late update

Part 3

J: no

J: I will do it... And she went out and she was standing there

Viren was shocked

V: (in mind) mae b dekhta hn kb tk yeh khari rehti hai yahan I know she won't be able to complete this task itni garmi hai and then he left from there

J: what he think of himself I will show him that I can do this...

Gia: viren whr is jeev??

Viren told her everything

G: what are you mad you left her there alone?

V: so what? If she has no problem then what is your problem... And he left from there

Gia was tensed for her...

On the other side

Jeevi was feeling hot

J: uff itne garmi..

On other side

Virat: viren don't you think it's unfair I mean tmhein usse udar nhi chorna chahye tha

Viren: no it's ok for her, she has so much attitude and I didn't forced her it was her wish

Virat: but still...

Viren: virat now stop taking her side please and come let's go out for lunch

Virat : ok

Everyone was having lunch except gia she was thinking about jeevs, gia tried calling jeevs but her bad luck as jeevs left her phone in her bag

G: oh no now how I will contact her?

Viren was enjoying with his friends

G: how can somebody b like this?

IN night suddenly rain started

Everyone was enjoying it

When virat said wow garmioun mae barish ka maza hi alag hai

2 hours later still rain didn't stopped

G: oh no jeevs and she ran to viren

G: viren itne tezz barish ho rhi hai itne dair sae plz challo jeevs ka pass pta nhi who kese hoge plz

V: don't worry gia uski tension na lo woh theek hoge tm jakar sojao

G: it is easy for u na? agar wahan tmhara koi apna hota tb bhi tm aese hi behave krte?

V: chill don't shout ok?

G: argh and she left

After 4 hrs still it was raining

Virat: viren look I think you should go and check her you should appreciate it that she is still there she already won don't you think? It is not easy to stand there for whole day n night I think tmhein ab yeh challenge khatam krna chahye and please go and get her plz

Viren: but..

Virat: please for me..

Viren: ok

It was 4:30 AM

Viren reached that place he was shocked to see her...😲

END... waiting for the response

Edited by koolgurl - 11 years ago