ArHi FF: Checkmate Epilogue thread (12th mar upd)

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abavi

@abavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
what an epilogue
loved it
arush kissing sana
arnav n sid fighting
then praising arush n sana
just awesome

Thanks Vrinda, I am glad you liked the bickering... I am happy you liked the last part of the epilogue the most...

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abavi

@abavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: thulasi_arshi

couldn't edit my res comment do no y😕
wow..fantastic epilogue ❤️🤗
arushnaughty boy❤️u rock it👍🏼son of ASR🤗🤗
like arshi..arush + sana=aruna😉😆how is it🤪
ya..arnav is correct..one year arush spend with sid na?😉
going to read ur DG😊

Ha.. no problem, you can leave as many comments as you want...[secret keep it to yourself] I personally think Arush got influenced by another man at RM... (NK) But I didnt mention it between Arnav and Sid bickering... will spoil their fighting mood you see...

Thanks so much for the regular feedback Thulasi...

See you there at DG thread😃

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ardy03

@ardy03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

wow!! such a beautiful epilogue..loved the last scnerio..and plz plz count me in ,in your new ff.

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abavi

@abavi

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ardy03
wow!! such a beautiful epilogue..loved the last scnerio..and plz plz count me in ,in your new ff.

Thanks so much Ardy, Haa Sid - Arnav pair has become everyone's favorite... I should plan on a dostana type FF soon then😆 just kidding...

If you havent read DG already, here is the link https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3464980/arhi-ff-destiny-games-2-updated-new-thread

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

wow! very cute epilogue...

the journey with checkmate was lovely...

i love to read ur ff's...

leap of five year...

u started wid akash n payal...

i like u give them space...

anjali's daughter name really uncommon...

like it...

khushi 9 moth pregnant...

n yes her famous mood swings...😆

all r happy...

dhruv n khushi bond was lovely...

sid n la back...

arush like sana...he pecked on her lips...😆

really yaar ASR ki beta so fast...😛

arnav n sid still fight like tom n jerry...

khushi handling both ASR cutely,,,,,,,

really beautiful ending...

yes gonna miss it...

u r a very good writer..plz never stop ur writing...😊

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Anuradha

@lovebarun...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Hai Dear, One of the most beautiful stories I have read. great job.. keep writing

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Aww the whole epilogue was so so good.

You explained about each and every person...liked that a lot!

They attended birthing classes together!

OMG...Arush is surely Arnav's son...Sana ko kiss kiya!😲 Arnav's befuddled response was damn funny!😆 So was the Sid and Arnav fight!👏

And when Arnav turned the tables on Sid, he didn't back out from taking credit for arush's good behaviour..that part had me grinning😆

A brilliant epilogue😃

Will miss this FF...sigh

Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago

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Praniiii

@Praniiii

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Omg it was so funny...I loved it...please write other funny stories...

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rdforfun

@rdforfun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

I thought about the ff first like a good start

then wat a twist

then perfect ending

now no words for epilogue

u rocked

loved ur writing style

by the by hope u will update DG soon 😉

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joe_arhi

@joe_arhi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Perfect way to end an amazing story 👏

5 yr old boy speaking abt girlfrnd and boyfrnd- Unbelievable... To top dat the reaction frm arnav and sid dat was awesum.. Great dads 😆. Poor arnav he has to go thro all of the khushi's antics but he is the best hubby 😳..

A special thanks to u for this amazing story. U r an amazing writer. This FF was different, interesting and kept me guessing all the updates but never guessed it rite. Thank you for such an amazing FF..