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@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#531

Holla guys

I need one help in writing some intimate scene between the leads.

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They just started falling for each other, just initial feeling. Though they don't know neither about their own feeling nor other. They come closer suddenly, feel the touch of each other and eventually eye lock.

How to explain their feeling here??
What should be the correct way of describing it?

Thanks a lot

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#532

^

Uhm, Here is something! I can't write much romance, but anyways :D

He was walking towards the hallway when he saw her coming his way. He felt a different sensation within him whenever he saw her. She affected him in ways she couldn't imagine.

The situation wasn't different on her side too. His one look was able to speed up her heart beats. She couldn't help but feel nervous whenever he was near her.

Both crossed each others path, their hands bruised slightly against the others sending electric jolts in their body. Their eyes met, they felt nothing other then them existed in the world & kept staring at each other wishing this moment to end for eternity.

Edited by dj_arshifan - 12 years ago

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Gunjan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#533

ummm...can somebody help me writing a funny scene i want to update my SS and had started writing the update par then i got stuck because i wanted to add a funny scene according to the situation but i am really bad at comedy...i can't write funny scenes and i wanted this particular scene to be funny just without affecting the storyline.

warning : do only accept to help if u know how to handle a crazy confused soul like me becoz half of the time even i donno what i want thus making the other person who is trying to help me confused and nothing helps then ! last time when i asked help here somewhat same happened so telling u before 😆

- gunjan 😃😳

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: ..Gunjan..
ummm...can somebody help me writing a funny scene i want to update my SS and had started writing the update par then i got stuck because i wanted to add a funny scene according to the situation but i am really bad at comedy...i can't write funny scenes and i wanted this particular scene to be funny just without affecting the storyline.

warning : do only accept to help if u know how to handle a crazy confused soul like me becoz half of the time even i donno what i want thus making the other person who is trying to help me confused and nothing helps then ! last time when i asked help here somewhat same happened so telling u before 😆

- gunjan 😃😳

Merese puchi bhi nahi tu :/

Chal scene bata, i will elp u. I can write comedy :D

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Gunjan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: dj_arshifan

Merese puchi bhi nahi tu :/
Chal scene bata, i will elp u. I can write comedy :D

tu pata nahi kaha gayab thi and i am not in a hurry to update par monday ke baad karna hai yeh you remember ki update hai ! pata hai na kabse update nahi ki

😆 i know u r good at comedy par donno if u can handle this confused soul par u can try 😃

scene unki date ka hai yaad hai na NK and la go for dinner bring khushi and arnav along so khushi and arnav r shocked to see each other there and then i have to write funny and also like they r jealous to see how happy NK and la r when they r still not confessing their love toh main aage kya likho

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: ..Gunjan..

tu pata nahi kaha gayab thi and i am not in a hurry to update par monday ke baad karna hai yeh you remember ki update hai ! pata hai na kabse update nahi ki

😆 i know u r good at comedy par donno if u can handle this confused soul par u can try 😃

scene unki date ka hai yaad hai na NK and la go for dinner bring khushi and arnav along so khushi and arnav r shocked to see each other there and then i have to write funny and also like they r jealous to see how happy NK and la r when they r still not confessing their love toh main aage kya likho

I will write soon, but don't rely on my writing :P

I will PM you :)

Edited by dj_arshifan - 12 years ago

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Gunjan

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Posted: 12 years ago

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@ diamond

huh..why don't reply on ur writing ..matlab 😕

waise ok i am not in much hurry

and wait me PMing u the part i have written till now becoz that doesn't need to be changed and ya title update ka dekhna usse match bhi karna chahiye update

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Debu

@crazy2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#538

Thanks a lot for helping me always..This is really helpful guys..

I wanna help again, can I get this one too?😳

Situation: how to describe the Hero is taking care of Heroin? She is injured in her leg and he is doing her bandage though she is reluctant to take help from him. But he orders to keep her mouth quiet.

Thanks Again🤗

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Zoah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#539

This is such a good idea! Thank you :D

I've written a story story'ish, it's half way through but I can't seem to progress it after a certain point. Any help would be much appreciate. I'm just a scrap/PM away :)

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Zoah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: crazy2012
Thanks a lot for helping me always..This is really helpful guys..

I wanna help again, can I get this one too?😳

Situation: how to describe the Hero is taking care of Heroin? She is injured in her leg and he is doing her bandage though she is reluctant to take help from him. But he orders to keep her mouth quiet.

Thanks Again🤗

If it's a sort of scene where the protagonists bond, then maybe you could describe the plight of your male lead as sort of vulnerable. His face gives away nothing but stillness while his eyes screams the vulnerability of seeing his beloved in pain. He is blabbering in anger because he doesn't want to reveal that he care for her. Meanwhile, the girl is reluctant due to the proximity she shares with him and here you could describe her heartbeats and her thoughts at the closeness.

Does that help?

If not, apologies :/

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