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aman

@aman93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

intrstng strt... desire to love or passionate heart beat r gud...

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Shreya

@Secret_Giggle

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

nice story. I think it's title should be passionate heartbeat.

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Pritt B

@-Pritt-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Ooo I'm excited Shahi! :D I like the background info and everything!

I like Passionate Heartbeat!

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Billu-Maamma

@Billu-Maamma

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

characters are really nice..continue soon.

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Titli

@afterlife.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Hey plz carry on!It's a nice concept...n don't forget to PM me 😊

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

I like the title, Passionate Heartbeat.

I like the concept of your story and my mind is already asking questions. Did Madhu want to marry? Is RK planning on divorcing her soon? Can Dips get killed in chapter one?? Sorry, but i intensely dislike that character!!!!

Pls continue and best of luck!!

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Ekta

@HaymurS

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Nice shahi
the painful impact wl fit i thnk.

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shravanikrishna

@vaani21

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Very good start! shahi👏 I liked the concept.

I got a very practical title which is not Poetic.Hope u will like it.

It is "Unusual and Cute Will"😆

Thanks a lot for the FF Shahi.😃

I like the title "Passionate Heartbeat"😳

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840216

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Hey bhagwaan ek aur ff thnx for it. Title should be love is a painful cup of tea

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830409

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Hey shahi superb ff sai me.
I likePainful impact .

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