New Arhi FF: Next stop? Part 2 pg30, note-72

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Bewakoof

@Bewakoof

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Wow!

You're great Sabi!

2 din me dhanadhan 2 updates??

Great!

Wow! Superb update!!!

hahahahhaha...

OMG! Khushi is unique piece! 😆

"Do I look like Naxalite?" 🤣🤣

buahahahaha...

I laughed out loud and my family around me looked at me weirdly as if I've gone mad 😆

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daljeet

@daljeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

wow beautiful. Lol had a hilarious time. Hahaha I laughd my head out when I read the line where it said ASR never liked it when somebody else spoke a valid point gaainst his own and then came the Dammit. 🤣

OMG! It has been a long tim since I used that ROFL smiley. I used to use it often for your story😉

The berth exchange wow our Arnavis afterall a gentleman. But then Kushi you should have behaved properly letting him sleep. Hahaha poor Arnav

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BornToShipArShi

@BornToShipArShi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#303

2nd chapter within a day😃

arre wah!

aww it was so sweet of arnav to feel khushi's discomfort 😳

and khushi on the other hand chattering away at night and arnav cant sleep🤣

and the discription of the ceiling fans was hilarious and really true 🤣
the naxalites blew up the tracks😲and khushi asking arnav all the questions😆

Arnav finally turned around to face her "Do I look like a Naxalite?"

Resisting the strong temptation to say yes, Khushi bent down to look out of the window.

God!🤣

i luv even this SS of urs😃

ab PU kab update hoga?😛

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#304

Ohhh Man... They are stuck and will take the longer route ... Yay 👏👏👏.

Noone makes funny as funny as you do Sabi.

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#305

I never expected a fast update from ur side so 2nd part was really a surprise. I loved the chapter..

Kushi unknowingly irritating Arnav, her non stop chatting, her discomfort, Arnav's consideration, Non stop questioning of Kushi when the train got stopped ,the response of Arnav, everything was just perfect.

Thanks for the PM

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Wonderful SS in your inimmitable style ! Pl continue and thanks for the PM

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Penny

@penny25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#307

OMG ROFL!!!!!!! hahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I just cant believe dat u updated so soon...!!!! seriosuly dis stry shud be named Khushi's expressway..dats y i miss u bcoz we know dat u're ultimately d uncrowned queen of Humour on If!!1 damn dat y i stalk u're writings bcoz i can't help myself wanting to come across atleast somethin by u..to laugh nd cheer up my mind..plz never quit writing..!!! i'm a fan of it!!!1

Omg how come asr bcome so considerate towrds a random strnger but ultimately chivalry speak for itself..!!! but lol SLEEP WID ME.!!!

d strnger aunty nd even more stranger khushi talk bout d former's DIL nd arnav's enug 🤣

Maza toh tab ata jab khushi Yes bolte arnav k question par k wether he is naxali!!!! d look on asr's face wud have been priceless!!!!

khushi's is such a drama..talking as if d Super woman saved d day!!!1 hahahaha!!!!!

somewhere i feel d journey cudn't get more interesting wid d change of path...!!1hahaha!!!

more drama to unfold...u can change dis one into an FF too!!! u can write PU after u finish wid dis one..till d tym iu can just write dis one..

hume toh behan tumhare writings se matlab..chaye yeh ya chaye woh!!!!😊😊😉😉

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yush-swt

@yush-swt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#308

wow...u updated soon...but it was a fun ride...prince william and is khushi, kate middelton...he he..that was lovely...truly your style...and arnav is a darling but khushi oh god she s such a cutie...loved this...

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Cannot thank you enuff, for the speedy update, Sabi!!!

The ambiance, the description of the eldery couple, the very chivalrous ASR,the mundane discussions about pickles, and,DIL's,a very creeky ceiling fan, and amidst all this a Dairy- milk- munching, Khushi...I loved it , all...the characters are in their element ...the retorts are hilarious...

Ah! they have taken a detour, meaning some more time, together...am sure it is going to be very eventful...

Your writing is disparate..it never ceases to bring a smile on my face, thank you for brightening up my life...and, also for the PM ..much appreciated...