New Arhi FF: Next stop? Part 2 pg30, note-72

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clairvoyance

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

next stop is amazing

firstly i wanna appreciate u for touching a differennt plot

or always khushi meeets arnav in road or in some accident

so u tried different

Ok...i got attached to it cause

i love train journey rather than flight and such instances do occur wen the co passengers are sometime interesting and sometimes not

a lot of bonds and relations r formed in train

let me tell u one incident

last year i was traveling with a cousin bro from in train and in my opposite berth was a god looking boy.We didnt talk but i heard his frends calling his name...

i searched him in Facebook and sent him a fb request too 😉 and now we r frends

i think technology is so fast...ha it been some 10 yeras back noone wud hv dared to appraoch frendship on first meet

neways good luck for the FF

update soon

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saucechips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

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Firebolt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Sabi, Sabi,Sabi...

There are writers that make you blush.

There are writers that make you giggle.

There are writers that make you smile fondly reminiscing.

You, my love, are a lethal combination of a little bit of everything!

You've characterised Arnav and Khushi so, so well here. The entire train sequence was so graphic and vivid!

Khushi's enthusiasm, Arnav's lack there of, the sweet granny, the overly creepy ceiling fans, the ambience - Everything was perfectly set up and extremely easy to visualize.

Mark of a talented write I'd say!

So now they're stuck.

Oh goodie - only good things can come out of this, surely? 😉

~Shriya

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daffodils06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

if u ask how soon is soon..i wud say today...or atleast tomorrow...please update soon...

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saucechips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Firebolt
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Shri, my love, the 'my posts' section of my IF, here's hoping to mend those eight pieces of broken heart. Mujhe farq padta hai dammit!

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daffodils06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

that came as a total surprise..i just read ur note and then posted and wat do i c next u updated..this is my lucky day i guess..
but i c it is not a lucky day for arnav..
u explained the train journey so wonderfully..v do com across different people during journeys..
ur khushi is so adorable and she has already decided that arnav is prince William..
so they are taking an an alternate route to lucknow and that means more time with each other..

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Firebolt

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: saucechips

Shri, my love, the 'my posts' section of my IF, here's hoping to mend those eight pieces of broken heart. Mujhe farq padta hai dammit!

We have passed the turbulence zone.

*goes back to six paged paper presentation* 😭

'Twas so good. The chapter.. :')

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