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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww it was greatt luved itt
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww sho cute update yaar.. loved it... :) update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awesome
reyam part was emotional👏👏👏

it was interesting😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys,
Thanks for d comment everyone,
Enjoy reading...

Taarey ff:Towards Love-Part 5

Rey:lagtha hai keys andhar reh gaya
Taani:lagtha hai huh?(and stares at him)
Rey:aise ghoorna bandh karo?
Taani:ab taali bajao aapke liye..
Rey:taunt karna bandh karo k..
Taani starts to walk..

Rey:kahan jaa rahe ho
Taani:apke shaadi ka baand wale ko bhulane
Rey:what
Taani:ab apko main 10 baje ghar jaane koshish hi karoonga na
Rey:par hum mumbai se bahut door hai
Taani:what
Rey:phikar mat karo maine swayam ko bataya hai,humare ek meeting hai,
Taani:mujhe unke koi phikar nahi hai..
Rey:accha,(teasingly)kyun
Taani:woh,unkeliye sharon haina
Rey:tumare liye
Taani:mereliye
Taani seeing rey's smile..
Taani:mereliye main hoon
Rey:pagal
Taani:kuch bhola
Rey:nahi to..

Rey and taani walks at the opposite side of the road..
Seeing taani getting cold rey removes his jacket..
Taani:kar kya rahe ho ?
Rey:jacket uthara raha hoon?
taani:main andhi nahi hoon
Rey:pata hai,tumhe tandh lag rahi hai,isliye
Taani:oh heloo,mujhe nahi chahiye apka koi jacket waket.
main teek hai..
Rey:isliye aise kaampkar chal rahe ho
Taani:main aise chalthi hoon
Rey:ohoh

Rey:yeh atitude dena bandh karo and yeh jacket lo
Rey moves towrds her and put the jacket on her..
Taani tries to resist.
Rey:teek se kade raho..
Taani finaly wears it..

Taani:thank u
Rey:kya bhola?
Taani:behre ho
Rey:nahi,tum phir se bholo
Taani:kya
Rey:jo tumne pehel bhola..
Taani:behre ho??
Rey"usse pehle
Taani shouts:Thank u
Rey:u r welcome..
smiles
Taani:yeh kadoos muskuratha bhi hai kya..
(Sach main huh iske sir par koi chot lagi hai)
Rey:aise kyun dekh rahe ho
Taani:oh helo ,mujhe ap mai koi intrest nahin hain
Rey:wow,tum pehli ladki ho,jisne mujhse yeh kaha
Taani:mujhe main dimmag hai
Rey:saath saath akad bhi hai,im impressed huh..
Taani:huh
Rey:aise kyun
tumhe aaj tak koi intrsting laga hai?
Taani:nahi
Rey in mind(beta tera waat lagi hai iisse badlthe badlthe kahin main pagal na ho jaon)
Taani:kya soch rahe ho,yahan ruk jaogi to jaanwar bhi kadoos ban jayega..
Rey:watever
Taani was kicking d stones on her way while walking but misses one step and was about to fall, rey catches her..
Rey:sambal ke chalo
Taani in rey's arm..
("Taarey eyelock)

Rey breaks off the positon:teek se chalona..
Taani:toh intne der se main baitkar movie dekh rahi hoon kya
Rey:eerr god yeh ladki
Taani:kadoos
Taani:ab 12 baje gaye..
Rey:mere paass watch hai..
Taani:Accha pata nahi tha mujhe
Rey:tum mujse teek se baat nahi kar sakthi kya.
Taani:ab bhi kya javed akthar jaise baat karthe hai mujse
Rey:isliye maine kahan tha na
Taani:kya kaha
Rey:mere dost ban jao
Taani:mujhe koi dost wost ki koi zarroart nahi hai..mereliye mere
(Remmebrs her fyt wth swayam)
Rey:mere?
Taani:main hoona
Rey:accha..
Taani:dekho woh truck wahan pe pada hain..
Rey:toh
Taani:to jaake poochleejiye na
Rey:kya
Taani:aapka shaadi ka date..
Rey:what

Taani:ofof jaake poochleejiye mumbai jaathe hai kya
Rey:main iss main nahi jaane wala
Taani:ha,main aapke liye yahan private jet bejtha hoon..
jao jaake poochleejiye nahi to
Rey:nahi to kya?
Taani:puri raat main baat kartha rahoonga..
Rey:nahi baba
main jaatha hoon
Taani smiles.
Rey smiles seeing this..

Taani:mere moof kya dekh rahe ho,jao
Rey goes and ask the truck driver..
Rey comes back to taani..
Taani:kya hua
Rey:chalo
Taani:maan gaye
Rey:kaun
Taani:aap kya aapke shaadi ke taareek poochne gaye the,nahi na...
Rey:woh driver maan gaye taani..

Taani:kasie ho bhaaisab
Driver:teek hoon bbitya,woh peeche jaake bhaitna ap dono
Rey:tum inko jaanthe ho?
Taani:nahi(Trying to get on truck,but finally succeds)
Taani:aap neech kyun kade ho,
agar truck se baath khatam ho ghaya ho to aa jana..
Rey:mujhe nahi aatha,
Taani:kya
Rey:yeh sab karna
Taani:ofof,haath dedo(n extends the hand)
Rey:lo karliya ,tumse dosti
Taani pulls rey and rey falls on taani..
(Eyelock)

Driver calls out they are starting d truck..
Rey gets up..
and sits on the other side..
Taani sits on the opposite side..
Rey:to dost
Taani:main apki dost nahi hoon k
Rey:to haath kyun diya
Taani:woh
Rey;woh
Taani:aap mere boss ho isliye..
Rey:itne respect apne kaddoos boss keliye
Taani smiles..
Rey:hassi to phassi..
Taani:nahi toh,
Taani gets up..

Goes near d end of the truck and calls out d driver..
Taani:bhaaisab kitne der aur
Driver:ab 1 gante aur ji..
Rey:kar kya rahe ho tum..
bhait jao yahan,nahin to gir jaogi..
Taani:aap se ek baat poochon
Rey:ha
Taani:meeting keliye aap ki sirf yeh sunsaan sa jagah kya tha woh jagah panch gani hi mili thi
Rey:maine thodi meeting fix kee thi huh?
Taani:ab kal yeh mat bholna taani tum late kyun aayi
Rey:woh iss baat ka kya conection hai..
Taani:agar kal main der se utne waali hoon,toh late hi aaongi na..
Rey:maine toh time pe aagay tho
Taani:woh aapki problem hai,meri nahi
ReY:oh heloo madam,
aap meri nahi main aapka boss hoon
Taani:aise baar baar
yaad karne zarrooart nahi hai aapko..

They reach mumbai..
Rey and taayam house.
Swayam opens door..
Swyam:taani itne der
Taani without talking goes inside..
Swayam:taani ruko
Rey:woh ghaadi gharab hogaya tha swayam,toh highway par koi ghaadi nahi mil rahi thi,
Swayam:woh toh woh bhi keh saktha tha na
Rey:maine kaha na,main sab teek kardoonga huh,toh
Swayam:par,rey ab toh baat nahi kar rahi hai mujse..
Rey:rukh agar maine taani ko sahi samjha hai na toh tujse aake 10 minutes main baat karegi..
Swayam:tu pagaal hai,woh taani hai,

Rey goes upstair..
Knocks door..
Taani:mujhe kisse kuch baat nahi karna
Rey:tumari boss hoon
Taani comes and opens d oor.
Taani:contract par yeh bhi likha hai ki aap mujhe do pal kichain nahidoge..
Rey:nahi toh,
Rey:andhar nahi bhulaoge..
Taani:aap sadak par khade ho
Rey:teek hai main yeh hi bholthi hoon
Taani:what
Rey:tum swayam se baat kyun nahi kar rahi ho huh
Taani:aapse matlab
Rey:agar tumne meri wajas usse jagada kiya,iska matlab tumhari frnd hoon ryt.
Taani:bhaaiii

Swayam:ha taani(Smiling)
Rey comes n stand behind her.(winks at him and waves saying bye)
Taani:khaana khaya aap
Swayam:nahi
Taani :to chaliye

Precap:
Taani:mujse dosti karoge
Rey:huh
Taani:khaan main makki gussa hai kya..
Rey:nahi
Taani:to bholeeye
Rey:kya
Taani:mujse dosti karoge
Rey:ha
yeh tum teek to hona


Hmm,finally what would have happened,taani changed her mind to become friends with rey..
Wait for the next update guys...

So i hope u all liked this update..
so please spare a minute to comment,
Guys next update tab hi post jab mujhe 5 pages comments milenge..😉
Silent readers comment bhi kardo yaar...



Part 6
Edited by lachu123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum update...loved it...the truck wala scene..ROFL...culdnt stp laughing at that part...hehe =D

and loved the precap...cant wait for the next updatee... =D

thnx for the PM and update soon...hehe =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ff dear.ap kyu after goa nt update.iam waiting that ff update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
TaaRey cutly fy8 and convo love your update espc taani's shaadi dailouges...
Precap finally dosti..
Update nxt part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear
bechara rey kya kya jhel raha hai...
hehehe
ya even i am wondering kya hua taani n rey se friendship ...hmmm...thats intresting
loved ur update pls upd soon
n do pm

stay blessed!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

awesum update...loved it...the truck wala scene..ROFL...culdnt stp laughing at that part...hehe =D


and loved the precap...cant wait for the next updatee... =D

thnx for the PM and update soon...hehe =D


thanks 4 d comment dear..
vl update soon..
Edited by lachu123 - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shriya_taarey

awesome dear
bechara rey kya kya jhel raha hai...
hehehe
ya even i am wondering kya hua taani n rey se friendship ...hmmm...thats intresting
loved ur update pls upd soon
n do pm

stay blessed!



thanks 4 d comment dear..
vl update soon..

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