#2:Arhi FF-WMB,Chp 8-11(#3 link,pg 145)

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Take_That

@Take_That

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#631

The workaholic Devil is making her work on Sundays too! Poor Khushi!

What is this Choco Gupta up to now?

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Divya

@..Divya..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#632

Res
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Nice update !!
Arnav drooling over khushi...
He wanna kiss her :p
loved that part <3 <3
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm...

Edited by divyav - 12 years ago

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#633

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*****EDITED*****

aS USUAL IT WAS A HILARIOUS UPDATE OF YOURS...

Firstly she entered his cabin & as he was about to bark he looked at her & then completely lost...

Then when he came back to his senses cursing his mind for lusting over her while khushi first thought that she was looking fat? like seriously? Then hairy legs 🤣

And then taht bollywood ishtyle dropping into arms of hero...erm here arnav...

Khushi eyes closed, his hand on her waist...then her inviting lips...almost kiss.

then BAMMM

Chocos entry in a grand way ...disturbing their 2nd almost kiss 🤣🤣🤣

And arnav's excuse -"Their was something over their" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I loved the updateee!!!!!!!!!!! Totally!!!

I wish this to be updates soon but i won't mind if you update just 4 him or making you mine.

Cause i Love all your works 😊

Edited by dj_arshifan - 12 years ago

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#634

2nd...

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fallen from the bed while laughing

and if i get any fracture..the whol blame goes to rotten LOL

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

khushi,s and ASR,s monologues...omg...hilarious..

loved it..

chocho kabaab me haddi na ban...you spoiled their second chance of kiss..Dammit😆

ab lo butter chiken..

i am worried if your mommy fixes your alliance with smoochie or not.for this SIN😆😆😆

Edited by mbbsrocks - 12 years ago

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Mary

@MaRyLoVeArShI

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#635

awesome update

cont soon

thnx for pm

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sugarhugs

@sugarhugs

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#636

AMAZING..SUPERB..😊

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852464

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#637

Amazing Update...😊

Loved It...

Continue Soon...

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#638

Loved the update to the core 😳

waiting for the nxt part

thanks for the PM

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#639

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loooveeeddd the ARSHI-fied update
ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA was checking out him secretary!! :O
the update was hilarious 🤣
and they were about to kiss but choco ne bich me bhangi mardi :P
beta thoda ho jata to tera kya jata ???
i loved the way you described KHUSHIs appearance!!
and the excuse ARNAV gave was just outta the world!!

Edited by tushi0310 - 12 years ago