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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: fantaarey
WOW
accha likh
tumne abhi tak jitne FF likhe hain usme se
yeh aur So far away ,10 reasond meri fav hai
pls...
dono update karna aur pm bhi

thanks for the lovely comment...

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#732

Originally posted by: shivkush
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Haayee.. Again I read ur FF in 3 days only, and that too both threads( first I've read where is my diary by u in 2 days only!) Yeah so I was saying that I m running out of word that kaun se wrds me iss ff ko describe karu.. All I can say is that please keep this work up and give ur best and I always love ur ff.. Sorry yaar jyada bada comment nahi likh sakti, have to go. Achchha ek rqst to kar sakti hu, PM karne ke liye.. Are yaar mein 2-3 din me pura FF read karti hu to please tum nhi PM kar diya karo whenever u update next parts of ur any story.. As I m newbie here.. Please Yaar.. And yeah I TOO MUCH LOVE UR ALL FF AND STORIES!!😉</font>

thank u so much...i will pm u for sure...

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#733

Originally posted by: cuppypie121
Lovely story
Read all of it in a go
Yug is damn cute
Love the chemistry of angry bird and akkdu 😆
Waiting for taarey confession
Awww yug ne rey ko papa bana liya
My fav character is yug
When will vihan's truth come out
Hope rey's mom plays an imp role in taarey's love story
Continue soon

thank u so much...vihaan's truth will out soon...

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AjnabeeHaseena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#734

HEY GUYS...FIRST OF ALL SORRY...VERY SORRY FOR UPDATING SO LATE. I WAS BUSY. HOPE U ALL CAN UNDERSTAND.

CHAPTER 20

PS : ADD THIS ACC FOR PMS.

Taarey were talking about the dance competition of the college. Rey's mom was coming in their room to take yug's toy car. She heard that taarey are in couple dance competition.

Taarey saw her outside the room.

"are ma...aap ..aaiye na andar...kuch kaam hai aapko??" ask taani as she saw her there.

"vo bas yug ki toy car yaha reh gayi thi vo lene aayi thi." said she..

"oh...ha ye lijiye..." taani take the toy car from bed and gave it to ma.

"all the best for the competition." said ma

"thanks ma/mom" said taarey together.

"vese me yaha nahi rahungi to watch your dance."

"kyu ma?? Aap kahin ja rahi ho??" ask taani.

"ha vo...rey ke dad ka call aaya tha. Ek imp meeting hai so mujhe jana padega kal." said his mom.

"oh...ok ma..."said taani.

"achha me chalti hu...yug niche mera wait kar raha hai." said ma and went down.

Here taarey were alone now. Taani sat on the couch and rey lay down on the bed.

"taani kal subah 8 baje Rehersals hai...so jao.." said rey..

"ha rey...aap so jao...me yug ko dekh kar aati hu.." said taani and she went down.

When taani came down she saw yug playing with dadi. She smiled looking at the duo. Yug was in her lap and both were playing with a stuffed frog.

"yug beta...so jao ab...its late.." said taani coming near them.

"ha mumma...bas thode der khelne do.." said yug...

"nahi...dekho its 10:30...aur kal dadi ko bhi vapas jana hai...unhe bhi jaldi uthna hai na..". Said taani.

Yug was shocked hearing that his dadi is going tomorrow.

"what?? Dadi aap kal ja rahi ho??" asked yug

"umm...ha beta...mujhe kaam hai vaha par..." said dadi..

"mujhe aap se baat nahi karni..." said yug and he ran into his room.

"are yug...ruko to..." taani try to stop him but he didnt stopped.

"tum so jao ..me yug ko samjhati hu.." said dadi and she went after yug.

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Dadi came in yug's room. She saw him sitting on his bed. He was angry. Anger was visible on his face.

"yug..." said she but he turn his face in another direction.

"yug...apni dadi se baat nahi karoge??"

"nahi...yug aap se baat nahi karega...aap kyu ja rahi ho??..."

"dekho beta...i promise me kuch dino baad aapse milne aaungi...pakka promise..." said she..

"sachhi me aaogi na??" ask yug

"ha...aaungi..." said dadi while tickling him..

"oww ...ha ha ha...dadi...stop...ha ha ha ha..." yug was laughing...

"abhi bhi naraz ho kya??" ask dadi..

"nahi..ab naraz nahi hu..." said yug..

"ok chalo so jao...yug is good boy na?"

"yes...yug is good boy...good night dadi..."

"good night beta.." she kissed his forehead and switched off the lights and went in her room.

Here taani come in her room. She saw rey sleeping on a side of the bed. She smiled looking at him. She went near him and sat near the bed.

"aap sote hue kitne cute lagte ho rey...bilkul chote bachhe jese.." said taani in very slow voice. Then she kissed on his cheek..."good night rey.." and she too lay down on other side of the bed.

After a minute taani felt a warm touch on her palm. She look at her hand and saw rey's palm was on her palm. She smiled and slowly intertwin her fingers with his fingers. Rey who was in a deep sleep , felt her touch and smiled in his sleep.

Taani slept holding his hand in hers.

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-Next morning-

TaaRey were still sleeping. Mrs. Singhania left early for delhi. Kaka started to make breakfast.

-TaaRey-

Sunrays came in from the window and this disturbed rey. He slowly open his eyes. He try to stretch his arms but he was not able to. He look beside him and saw that taani was holding his hand with both her hands. He turned at her. She was still sleeping. Rey was facing her front body. His hand was near her face so he can feel her hot breath on his hand. Her hairs were falling on her face. And it was distrubing her. Her eye brows curved as she feel her hair locks on her face. Rey smiled at her. He move closer to her and slowly tuck her hair locks behind her ears. She smiled in her sleep. He hold her hand put it near his face. He kissed her hand and close his eyes. Taani felt his hot breath and she move her fingers and it touched his lips. Rey look at her. He let go off her hand. Slowly taani open her eyes and find rey looking at her. She smiled at him.

"good morning rey.." taani greet him with a lovely smile. She sat in the bed and rub her eyes.

"good morning taani.." said rey. He stand up and went in the washroom to freshen up.

*********

Just two days are left for the competition.

TaaRey were practicing their duet performance. All were sitting with the support of RH mirror. Vihaan and kriti were also there.

Taarey end there dance and they were so close to each other and were lost in each others eyes. They came in their sense when they heard clapping sound.

"omg...u both were too good guys." said sharon.

"thank u shar ." said taarey together.

"ok chalo shar .. ab aap logo ki bari...group dance practice.." said taani.

"ha ha..." said all and they practiced.

Here taarey were sitting against the mirror. Taani was feeling little tired so she rest her head on rey's shoulder. Rey was feeling happy. He was liking this.

*********

Gang was in the the canteen after the rehersals except rey. Rey was in vp sir's cabin to discuss the things about the competition.

Here taani was with gang. Talking with them and eating pizza.

Rey came there after meeting vp sir. He inform all about the venue of the competition.

"wow...ab sirf do din...phir competition...i m so excited." said simmi

"we too..." said all...

Rey sat opposite to taani.

"guys yar...humara to lecture hai abhi...chalo..." said vicky...

"me to bunk maar rahi hu...mujhe aaj lec nahi bharna.." said taani..

"mujhe bhi nahi bharna..." said rey..

"ohk then...hum sab to ja rahe hai..."said all...

"ok bye.." said taarey and all left to attend the lecture.

"tumne lecture kyu nahi attend kiya??" ask rey ..

"bas mood nahi hai lec attend karne ka...aur aap ne??"

"mera bhi mood nahi hai.." said rey while eating his sandwich.

Taani who was eating oizza look at rey. She was staring at him. A smile was there on her face. Rey felt an intense gaze and he look at taani. She was staring at him. He smiled at her. He wave his hand in front of her but no response from her. Rey call her...

"taani???" and taani came in her sense.

"ha..kya...kya hua??" ask taani innocently.

"kaha kho gayi??" ask rey..

"umm...kahi nahi...bas ese hi.." said taani and she again start eating her pizza.

Rey smile at her innocense.

"shayad ye bhi mujhse pyar karti hai." thought rey and he ran his hand through his back head hairs.

"unm...taani.." said rey ..

"ha rey...??"

"ek kaam karo...tum ghar jao...vese bhi ab classes nahi honge...yug bhi akela hoga.." said rey..

"ha...me bhi yahi soch rahi hu.."

"me tumhe ghar drop kar du??" ask rey..

"nahi me auto se chali jaungi." said taani..

"ok chalo tumhe clg ke bahar tak chod deta hu." said rey and taani nod in yes.

Rey paid the bill and both started walking. They were walking beside each other. While walking their hands brushed with each other. Both felt like current ran down their spine. Both avoid looking at each other. They reach near the clg gate.

"rey aap kab ghar aayenge??" ask taani..

"me bas ek do hours me aa jaunga...kuch kaam hai..??" ask rey..

"nahi nahi...kuch kaam nahi hai...bas ese hi...me chalti hu." said taani and start walking from there.

"taani.." rey call her back..

"ha ...kya hua rey??" ask taani

"kuch nahi vo bas..." said rey...he came closer. He put his right hand on her left cheek. Taani closed her eyes with his sudden touch. Rey place a wet kiss on her cheek. He look at her. Her eyes were closed. Her cheeks were red due to blush. He turn and go from there. Taani put her hand on her cheek where rey kissed her. She open her eyes and look at his back walking away from her. She saw rey looking back at her. He was smirking at her. She was not able to look in his eyes. She smiled and lower her gaze , turn away and start walking.

"she blushed...she smiled...she was feeling my kiss...she loves me.." thought rey...he again look back at her. She was walking. He again turn.

"rey kissed me...am i dreaming?? No...it was real...I think he loves me too." think taani and she turn ones again and look at his back. He was going in the college.

*******

Two days went in practice and practice. Taarey are now aware of each other's feelings.

It was the day of competition. All were standing near college gate waiting for the bus to arrive.

Taarey were standing beside each other. All were little nervous but taani was more nervous. She was looking tensed because she is going to dance on stage first time. She was bitting her nails. Rey saw this.

"nervous ho??" ask rey.

"hmm...thodi si." said taani not looking at him.

Rey took his hand in his.

"sab achha hoga...trust me.." said rey..

"i trust you rey." said taani .

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Precap:

"me kuch kehna chahta hu taani.." said rey.

"ha rey...kya hua??"

"vo me ab yug ke dad hone ka natak nahi kar sakta.." said rey.
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"taani vo ladka yahi hai jisne tumhare papa ka accident kiya tha." said gupta uncle

"kya?? Kon hai vo??" ask taani..

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"leave me vihaan..." taani try to push him hard but his grip was so tight.

"vihan chodo mujhe..." said taani. She was punching him on his chest with her tiny hands.

"aahh..." taani screamed as he torn her sleev...

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@navk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#735

awesome update
precap was little bit scary

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tamanna-azaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#736

awsum upddate..
taarey scene was sooo nice..
theycame to knw both feel for each other..
precap is interesting..

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Mon_tr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#737

Mindblowing chapter.precap sounds interesting n scary too.hope taani thik hogi.egarly waiting 4 nxt update.do update soon.

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sirivalli

@sirivalli.t

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#738

awesome ff...

read all parts in one go...

loved it...

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yoyoaishwarya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#739

Awesome update 😛 after long time
Its very dear to me I was waiting 4 this to update 😛
Taarey scence were too loving 😛
That kiss in last was 😳 loving
Yug n daadi convo was loving n convincing
Omg !!! Precape is little scary
😡 vihaan want to kill him
Giv him to rey he will do it
Update soon thanks 4 pm 😛