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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi guys...good news guys...my exam postpond for 1 week...m so happy...i can update now...finally my preparations for exams end today...and now i can update...not regularly but weekly one update...

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Rey thought that taani was sleeping. He gentaly kissed her forehead and went from there to see taani's dad...

As rey went from there taani open her eyes. So many questions were in her mind.

"kya rey bhi mere liye kuch feel karte hai? Unho ne mujhe kiss..."

She touch her forhead with her hands and her lips curved into a smile...

"kya rey mujhse pyar karte hai? Chup pagli...kya soch rahi hai...vo to tujhe sirf dost mante hai...par vo ese yug ke papa ban ne k liye...kuch bhi mat soch taani...vo as a friend teri help kar rahe hai..." taani convince to herself that rey treat her only as a friend unware of the truth that rey love her truely and madly...

Taani again sleep there...


"taani..."

Taani heard a female voice...the voice was familiar to her...

Taani saw a familiar figure.

She stand up from the bench...

She walk near her...

"ma..." said taani as she recognize her.

"ha beta..."said her mom...

"ma..." tears start to flow from her eyes..."kyu chali gai aap??ek baar bhi mere bare me nahi socha??"

"bhagwan ki marzi ke aage kisi ki nahi chalti beta...par tum apneaap ko kyu rok rahi ho??pyar karti ho na rey se??" said her mother...

"ha karti hu...par dar lagta hai...kahin me unhe bhi na kho du..." said taani.

"ek baar phir pyar ko moka do taani...mat roko khud ko... Tumhe phir se pyar hua hai...is pyar ko hath se mat jane do..."

"par ma..."

"mujh par bharosa hai na??"

"ha...hai..."

"to phir meri baat mano...pyar ko ek aur chance do...samajh gayi na meri baat??ab mujhe jana hoga...apna khayal rakhna..."

"ma...ma...ruk jao ma..."


"ma..."taani wake up ...but as she wake up she came to know that its a dream only...

she look in her watch...its 4 am of early morning...she saw rey sleeping there on a bench...

"kya me ma ki baat maan lu...ya nahi...hey krishnaji...plz help me...shoul i give one chance to love??what if rey doesnt love me?"thought taani...

she stand up and went near rey...

she look at him and then caress his hairs wid her hands...

"ummm..." murmured rey in between his sleep...

taani stand up and went to see her dad who was in ICU...

she look at him through the glass of the door ...suddenly her dad's breathing increase...he has problem to breath...

"doctor...doctor..."

taani immidgetly ran to the docter...

rey heard her voice and wake up..

"taani..." said rey looking at her...

the doctor came and start the treatment immidgetly...

taani stood near the door...tears made their way through her eyes and roll down on her cheeks...

"taani..." said rey and put his hand on her shoulder...

taani turn...rey saw tears in her eyes...she was sobbing...

rey raise her hand to wipe her tears...but before he reach upto her cheek taani hug him tightly...digging her face in to his chest...

rey was first shocked...he didnt know what to do ...should he hug her...or should he not??

he can feel that taani was shaking bcoz of sobbing...

they stood there in the same position for five minutes...rey was still confuse...

taani's grip was getting tighter...

the corridor was almost empty bcoz its very early morning...

now taani became calm...she rest her head on his chest more...the first two buttons of his shirt were open. he can feel her hot breath on his chest...suddenly he feel her soft lips on his chest...she was so much lost in the hug...

As rey feel touch of her lips on his chest his hands automatically start to moving on her back...

Slowly he move his one hand around her shoulder and one hand around her waist...now he was also lost in the hug...he close his eyes...

Both were so much ingrosed in the hug...their grip on each other was so strong...(imagine jab we met wala hug)

Suddenly rey came in to his sense...and he losses his grip...

"taani..." he call taani and hold her shoulders...

Taani came in her sense...and broke the hug...tears were still there in her eyes...

Rey wipe the tears and said:dont worry taani...your father will be well soon...

Ta:hmm...

Rey:come...sit there...

Rey made her to sit on a chair...

"plz krishnaji...papa ko thik kar do..." she keep praying to her krishnaji...

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After an hour...

Doctor came out of ICU...

Taani ran near the doctor..

"papa kaise hai doctor?"asked taani...

"dekhiye miss taani aap ke dad..."

Rey:kya hua doctor...

"dekhiye hum ne bahot koshish ki par hum unhe bacha nahi paye...m sorry...he is no more..."said the doctor...and gone from there...

"that cant be true...papa nahi ja sakte..."she was stepping back ...

"taani...sambhalo apne aap ko..." said rey and went near her...

"DHHAP..." taani sat on a chair like a body without soul...

Rey call swaron and inform them about the death of taani's dad...

After that rey saw her sitting there lifelessly...

Rey bent down on his knees and said:taani vo chale gaye...hamesha ke liye...

Ta:nahii...nahii...ye nahi ho sakta...papa nahi ja sakte...vo abhi aayenge...abhi...

Rey:(he was also crying now) taani...taani hosh me aao...vo ab nahi rahe...

Ta:kyu???kyu chale gaye vo...ek baar bhi nahi socha mere bare me...yug k bare me...hum kitne akele ho jayenge...

Rey:tum akeli nahi ho taani...me hu tumhare sath...

Ta:aap hamesha to mere sath nahi rahenge na rey...

There was an awkward silence...

"kyu taani...kyu me hamesha tumhare sath nahi reh sakta...?kya tum kabhi mujhse pyar nahi karogi...i want to be ur life partner ...not your friend only..." thought rey and answer very heavy heartedly: ha...ye baat bhi hai...

After listening rey's answer...

"kya aap humesha hamare sath nahi reh sakte rey? Shayad me hi galat soch rahi hu...aap to as a friend meri help kar rahe ho..." thought taani...

Ta:always...always god do this to me...always he take away my love oned ...why???kyu rey??esa kyu hota hai hamesha mere sath??

Rey:sshhh...taani...plz calm down...me hu tumhare sath...hamesha...forever...jab bhi tumhe meri jaroorat hogi...i will be there...

Ta:sach??

Rey:sach taani...and its my promise...

Taani flung her hands around his neck ...and rey hug her back...

"i love u rey ...but i know aap mujhe sirf apna dost samjhte hai ..." thought taani digging her face in between his neck and shoulder...

"i love u taani...kash me tumhe bata sakta ki how much i love u...but i know u consider me as a friend only..." thought rey caressing her hairs with his one hand and tighten his grip on her waist from another hand...

"mumma..."

Taani heard the melodious voice of her son who was the only loved one for her...

"yug..." said taani and broke the hug...

She saw yug coming there with swaron...

"mumma...dadu...kya hua??aap ro kyu rahi ho??"

"dadu ab kabhi wapas nahi aayege beta...kabhi nahi...vo hume chod k chale gaye...hamesha k liye...ab hum akele hai beta..."

Taani can said only these lines and then she pull yug in her arms and cry...

Yug broke the hug and run in to the ward...shareyam ran after him...

"dadu...ut...utho na dadu...open y...yo...your eyes...dekho yug aaya hai..."said yug in between his sobs...

Again he said: "dadu i promise i will never tease u...kabhi pareshan nahi karunga ...promise dadu...utho na..." he shake his dadu...

"vo naho uthenge yug...vo chale gaye...ab hum akele hai...akele..." said taani...

Yug turn to her mumma and said:"hum akele nahi hai mumma...aap ke liye me hu aur mere liye aap ho...hamare liye papa hai...mom hai...swayam uncle hai...hum akele nahi hai mumma..."

"ha taani we r here for u..." said shareyam and joined in the hug ...

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After two days of the death of taani's dad...

At taani's home...

Taani was sitting on sofa.Thinking about the dream...rey was not at home...he was gone to buy chocolates for yug...yug was in his dadu's room...remembering their memories...

"kya ma sahi keh rahi thi??kya mujhe rey ko batana chahiye ki me unse...but agar uske baad vo mere dost bhi nahi rahe to...nahi...me unki dosti ko nahi kho sakti...nahi kho sakti..."

Suddenly the door bell rang...

"shayad rey honge..."thought taani and went to open the door...

She was shocked as she saw the person ...

"aap yaha???"...said taani...

??:ha me...dekhiye aap ne last month ka rent nahi diya hai...

Ta:dekhiye mr. Sahay me jaldi hi aap ko rent de dungi...

Mr. S:kab degi aap rent??ab to aap ke papa bhi nahi rahe...

Ta:dekhiye aap mujhe thoda time dijiye...me rent de dungi...

Yug heard some voice and came outside...

Yug:kon hai mumma...

Mr S :aap ka beta bhi hai...par mene to suna hai aap ki ahadi hi nahi hui hai...to ye beta kaha se aaya??

Ta:dekhiye mr. Sahay its my personal matter...aur me aap ka rent jaldi hi de dungi...

Mr. S:achha...kaise degi aap rent??(he hold her hand little below her shoulder very tightly)

Ta:aahhh...plz chodiye mujhe...its paining...

Mr. S:mujhe mera rent chahiye...aur vo bhi...

But he couldnt complete his sentence...someone grab him and punch him hard...

He was rey...

"how dare u hurt her...??" said rey punching him one more time...

"rey chodiye unhe...jane do..."said taani...

"ye lo apna rent...aur chale jao yaha se...we r leaving from here..."said rey throwing money on his mouth ...

"chalo taani yaha se...tum mere ghar me rahogi ab se..." saying this he hold her just below her shoulder and "aahhh..."

"sorry..." said rey

Ta:its ok rey...but me aap ke ghar...

Rey:chupchap jao aur saman pack karo...(said angrily)

Taani went to pack her and yug's stuff...

Hello guys...i know u all are so much lost in the update...but its over ...

Precap:

Rey slowly move the icecube on her hand where she was hurt...but both were looking in to each others eyes...
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They were coming closer after each second...

Taani turn her face a little...

His nose touch his cheek...he gentaly rub top of his nose on her cheek...
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Rey was facing her back...he can saw the water droplets on her hand...

He bent a little and kissed on her hand where she was hurt...taani closed her eyes...the touch of his warm lips was decreasing her pain...


Ok guys...i know in last ch precap i show taani in rey's home but already this update islong...so it will include in next chapter...now be ready for taarey romance...from next chapter ...their lovestory will become more intensive and aggressive...stay tune guys...

Plz liike and comment...

thank u...



Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yepee
1st aai

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unres
tannius dads death ws so sad
jst hat da landlord
hw dr he hrt taani
bt atlst uski wajase taani & yug rey k ghar rahsakte
precap ws awsmšŸ‘šŸ‘
Edited by chand91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it dear do continue soon plz😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres--

awesome update pari loved it so much

taarey hug was so awesome

but taani's dad no more it's so sad

taani in rey's house it will be treat to read

now update soon
Edited by taareylove - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god tanni's dad is no more😲
why is god being so crel to her..😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww...it was soo sadd... 😭
poor taani and yug...
the scene was really emotional...
the thoughts runnin thru taarey but they culdnt say it...jus cuz dey were scared of how the other will react... *Sigh*
the sahay guy...so meann! ughh!
but glad dat rey came...
and now taarey will be together...
precap seems really interesting...


and yayy...aapke exams shift ho gaye... 😊
so pakka ab aap ace karoge exams mein ... šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜†


btw...forgot to mention...this update was amazingg...
i really love the way u express emotions and emotional turmoils in scenes...
its always a treat to read them 😃
Edited by Mohit_monaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Di di di...
It was so heart touching Rey consoles taani n dere hug n taani Rey both love each other bt nevr utterd a word n precap god urgely waiting 4 d next update n ya update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it, loved it a lot...n d precap wow...update soon šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just wish rey aur taani ek doosre ko accept kr de...
kab se tarsarahe hai dono???
ab toh yahi time hai... to bring out their feeelings...
pls update soon!!!
loving this story sooo much!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum .. šŸ‘ šŸ‘šŸ¼

really sad .. taani'z dad iz dead .. ! 😭

precp iz intrestng .. 😃

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

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