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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys...m back again...i know guys u all r angry on me for updating so late...m sorry...now enjoy the update.

But one sad news is that my exams are near so i hardly can update any ff.

chapter : 14


Ta:why krishnaji...hamesha mere sath esa kyu hota hai??kyu esa karte ho aap??

Just then her cell rang...its an unknown number...

Taani wipe her tears and receive the call...

Ta:hello...

Someone:...(he was her neighbour)

Ta:what??

Taani's phone slip from her hand and fell on ground...tears start flowing from her eyes...she sat on the floor supporting her back on the wall...she fold her legs and her legs touch her chest...she dig her face in between her leg...she cried alot...

All students who present there saw her...some student go in the canteen and told the gang that taani is crying so much in the library...

All ran in the library...rey was the first to reach there...he saw taani in the worst condition...sobbing badly...he sat near her and said:taani...

Taani heard his voice...she look at him and in the next second she hug him tightly...she hide her face in his chest...she was sobbing so badly that she cant breath properly...

Rey wrap his hands around her waist and shoulder protectivly...

Rey:taani kya hua??tum ro kyu rahi ho??

Sharon and swayam sat down...

Swayam caress her hairs and ask:taani kya hua??

Taani tighten her grip more on rey...

Sh:taani...calm down...batao hume kya hua hai??

Rey broke the hug and wipe her tears ...

Rey:taani kya hua??

Ta:(in between sobbing)rey vo...vo...mr.gupta ka phone aaya...vo...papa...accident...hospital...

Rey:taani...dont worry...kuch nahi hoga...chalo hum hospital chalte hai...

Ta:ha...chalo jaldi...pata nahi yu...yug kaisa hoga apne dadu ko ese dekh kar???

Sh:dont worry taani...keep faith in god...

Ta:wahi to nahi hai shar...humesha bhagwan mere sath hi esa kuch karte hai...

Sw:taani...chalo abhi hume hospital jana chahiye...

Rey:ya lets go...chalo taani...

Taani stand up and shatareyam leave for hospital...

They reach in the hospital...there was mr.gupta with yug...taani saw yug there...he was standing near the operation theator...

Ta:yug...

Yug saw his mumma...he ran towards her and wrap his hands around her legs...

Yug:mumma...da...dadu ko k...k...kya ho gaya???

Taani take him in her hands...

Ta:kuch nahi beta..dadu bilkul thik ho jayenge...

Yug:sach mumma??

Rey:ha beta...aap ke dadu bilkul thik ho jayenge.dont worry...

Yug hug taani tightly...taani sat on a chair with yug...

Mr.gupta:taani beta...tension mat lo...tumhare papa thik ho jayenge...

Yug:ye sab yug ki mistake hai mumma...na yug dadu ko force karta ice cream lane k liye...aur na dadu ke sath esa hota...(sobbing)

Ta:nahi beta...its ok...(to mr.gupta)ye sab kaise hua...

Mr.gupta:pata nahi...mene sirf itna dekha ki ek car aayi aur unka accident ho gaya...car me koi ladka tha...aap logo ki hi age ka...bhag gaya vaha se...

Ta:pata nahi uski aankhe thi ya button...andha ho gaya tha kya??

Doctor came out of the operation theater...

Rey:doctor...kya hua??

Do:dekhiye unhe blood ki bahot zaroorat hai...unka blood group o+ve hai...aap me se kisika blood group hai o+ve??

Ta:yes doctor...mera blood group hai...

Do:aap jaldi aaiye andar...

Ta:yes doctor...she stand up to go in but yug dont allow her to go...

Sharon go near them and said:yug..beta mumma ko jane do...agar mummaandar jayegi to aap ke dadu thik ho jayege...ok???come to mom now...

Yug:pakka dadu thik ho jayege??

Sh:ha...

Yug went in sharon's hand...and taani went in to give blood...

After some time taani came out...she was feeling little weak after giving blood.


ACTUAL FLASHBACK:


Yug:dadu...

Td:ha...kya hua??

Yug:yug ko ice cream khani hai...(with cute pout)

Td:beta...mumma aate aate le aayegi...

Yug:no dadu...yug ko abhi chahiye...

Td:mumma le aayegi na...

Yug:plz dadu...plz...plz...

Td:ok...me lekar aata hu...tum ghar se bahar mat jana...ok??

Yug:ok...

Taani's dad went to buy icecream for yug...

He went near an icecream parlour .

Td:four chocolate flavour icecream...

Owner of the icecream parlour pack the icecream. Taani's dad paid the bill and was going back...

At the same time vihaan was going some where in his car...he saw taani's dad ...and his face become red with anger...he remember the evening when he and his daughter slapped him...he want revenge...

Taani's dad was crossing the road when he hit him and clash...

He drove away...

Mr.gupta was there ...he saw vihan's face...

Crowd gathered around taani's dad...his body was covereded with blood...he was unconcious...

Mr.gupta immidgetly called ambulance...he took yug with him and reach the hospital.


It was evening now ...

Doctor came there...

Ta:doctor papa kaise hai??

Do:dekhiye hum abhi kuch keh nahi sakte...unke hosh me aane ke baad hi kuch keh sakte hai...

Taani sat down on the chair crying...

Doctor went away from there...

Rey came near taani...

Rey:taani...plz tum tension mat lo...

Ta:pata nahi rey krishnaji humesha mere sath hi esa kyu karte hai??humesha har koi jis se bhi me pyar karti hu mujhse dur chala jata hai...

Rey:nahi taani esa nahi hai...

Ta:esa hi hai rey...

Rey:nahi taani...

Just then swaron and yug came near taani...

Yug was sleeping in sharon's hand...

Ta:sharon tum yug ko lekar jao...apne ghar sula dena aaj...

Sh:thik hai taani...swayam kya tum mujhe ghar drop kar doge??

Sw:ya sure chalo ...

They leave from there...

AT NIGHT:

Taarey were sitting ...

Rey:chalo taani kuch kha lo...tumne kuch khaya nahi hai...

Ta:nahin rey mujhe bhookh nahin hai...

Rey:taani...chalo kuch kha lo...agar tum kuch nahi khaogi to me bhi kuch nahin khaunga...

She look in to his eyes and get lost in his honey brown eyes...

After few seconds she came back to her sense...

Ta:aap kha lijiye rey...

Rey:nahi...tum chalo mere sath...

Ta:ok thik hai chaliye...

Both took their dinner...

Here with sharon and yug:

Sh:chalo yug...dinner time...

Yug:nahin...yug ko nahi khana hai...

Sh:kyu??

Yug:aaj yug ki vajah se dadu esi situation me hai...

Sharon bent down and said:nahi beta esa nahi hai...

Sh:no mom esa hi hai...

Sh:nahin beta esa mat socho...chalo dinner kar lo...varna me aap ki mumma se complain kar dungi...

Yug:nahin mom...plz...mumma se complain mat karna...

Yug and sharon took their dinner and went to sleep...

IN THE HOSPITAL:

Taani was sitting on a bench in hospital...

Rey was standing at a distance...

He saw that taani was feeling sleepy...

Rey went near her...she was going to fall...but he catch his from her shoulders...taani wake up...

Ta:rey aap ...vo me...

Rey:taani...tum so jao...

Ta:nahin rey vo papa...

Rey:uncle thik ho jayenge taani...tum so jao...

He made her to lie on a bench...

Rey:close your eyes taani...aur so jao...

Taani closed her eyes...rey caress her hairs some time...then he thought that taani was sleeping now...he kissed her forehead and went from there to see taani's dad...

Taani open her eyes and think:kya rey mere liye kuch feel karte hai??

Precap:

taani's dad's condition become critical...

Taani in rey's home.

Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
love it..superb

the emotional update..well done
Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute and emotional update.
loved the way rey, swayam and sharon take care of taani.
do cotn. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb .. !! 👏 👍🏼

taani'z dad accident .. 😭 ..
datt bloody vihaan .. 😡 🤬
luvd yug alot .. ❤️ he'z shho sweet ... 😉

w8ng eagerly 4 d nxt epi .. 😃

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

All d bst 4 ur examz .. do well .. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing n emotional update! Loved it! Hate vihaan he is such a creep!!! Thnx for d pm... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part dear
and emotional too
hope tani ke dad thik ho jaye
yug is so swdt i just love sharon the mom
awesome part do cont son
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tat bloody vihaan,disgusting! Bt it ws ltl emotional bt lvd d care tkn by rey & swaron.Prcp is hinting smtg! Wtng fr it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional update dear... rey is really caring... bloody vihaan... i will kill him yaar update soon and pm me thanks alot 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh such a cute update loved it
i m hating this vihan!!!!
do continue soon dear plz😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very emotional and sweet update😭😊
That Viaan😡😡😡
How st of shareyam😳
Updt soon😊

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