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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc lukin 4rwd 2 d nxt update :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow,nice update.lvd d frndshp bnds.excitd fr taarey mtng...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved Sam and Sharon's introduction.😳 And taani's parents But atleast she has her friends to cheer her up. 😳 Also LOVED the way taani and samrat became friends.👏 Also loved Taani's nickname.😳

Loved swayam's lines specially foxy at fifty.😆😆

Precap sounds interesting.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey

Oh wow di!
The precap looks real amazing.. First meet, first fight and first dance too? Eagerly waiting! Update real soon!!



Thanks alot...but pls dont call me di... im just 15..lol 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vijichandran

phir se wait karna hoga... itz tooo difficult... bt nythng for taarey...😳😳😳



ya sorry about that... but i am gonna update soon
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Originally posted by: paruls

Loved Sam and Sharon's introduction.😳And taani's parentsBut atleast she has her friends to cheer her up.😳Also LOVED the way taani and samrat became friends.👏Also loved Taani's nickname.😳


Loved swayam's lines specially foxy at fifty.😆😆

Precap sounds interesting.😳


thanks alot
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: samihatabassum

nyc update dear... luvd the bonding between shaniam nd reyam... very very excited 4 the precap do update soon nd plZ pm me ... o I frgot 2 tell thnx 4 the pm ...😊


thanks and you are welcome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys sorry for keeping you waiting so here is the next update.

Taani smiled wickedly at her friend which left them terrified.

Sharon:(whispering to sam)what is she thinking about yaar?
Sam:(whispering back to sharon) i dont know dude. but i know one thing for sure. humari watt lagayi.

Taani heard all this but pretended not to hear anything. sharon felt taani's gaze on her.

Sharon: what t?

taani: you cant come like this.
Sharon looked down at her kurti and jeans.
Sharon: what is wrong with what i am wearing?
taani rolled her eyes.
Taani: nothing dude. but where we are going we have to wear something a little different.
Sharon was really confused now. More than that she was terrified. she knew taani's clothe choice was different from her's since the real taani was a lot less conservative than sharon.she looked over at sam who gave her a reassuring nod. she looked back at a eager taani. and gave her a slight nod to indicate a yes but taani's reaction was very overpowering. she dragged sharon to her room leaving sam shocked.a little while later taani and sharon came down. sam's mouth dropped looking at them. both were clad in a short cocktail dress. taani was wearing blue while sharon wore red. both were looking extremely beautiful. taani and sharon giggled at sam's reaction.
taani: sam dude close your mouth you already have a girlfriend.
sharon burst out laughing uncontrollably while sam smiled sheepishly.
Sam: oh please aisha is more beautiful than you two combined.
Sharon: ya right... if she was what is she doing with an idiot like you.
Now if was taani's turn to burst out laughing. Her stomach ached as sam chased sharon around the house.
sam:( panting) oh god how are you running so fast wearing high heels and a dress.
Sharon: ( stopping) dude you are pathetic.
Sam stared on while taani went to stop the upcoming fight.
Taani: ok..ok...before world war 3 start shall we go sharon.
Sam looked down at his t-shirt and jeans.
Sam: girls i feel under dressed.
Taani: chill yaar. no worries... anyway you are not coming.
Sam: what you guys cant alienate me like that.
Taani: sorry sam... girls night out...
Sam looked at sharon who stuck her tongue out at him.
Taani: anyway theres another reasom. sam have you forgotten about your saturday date night with aisha.
Sam slapped his forehead.
Sam: oh god... how can i forget?
Since sam and aisha lived in different countries every saturday they would have online dates.
Sharon: we really do not want you to lose this girl. if not you will go into devdas mode again.
Sam gave sharon a deadly stare and then stared dreamily into blank space.
The girls coughed to snap him out of his aisha dreamworld like they often have to do.
Taani: so shall we go.
Sharon nodded nervously and they left. she prayed that they will survive taani's terrible driving and sat in the car clutching for her life.

Scene shift to rey and swayam

swayam glance over at rey who was staring blankly into space. he considered talking to him but did not see the help it would do him .for two years he had been bottling all the pain inside him. when alisha dumped rey he thought that it was because their relationship did not work out little did he know that she was actually seeing roy. rey's friend at same time she was with rey because of his money. when rey found out about it he was devastated. the pain resulted in the new cassonova rey. swayam tried many times to help rey forget her. but rey really did love her and swayam only managed to distract him. he just prayed that rey will really forget alisha. swayam hoped his prayers would be answered but he never knew they would be answered so soon.

Scene shift to sharon and taani

taani pulled the brakes and sharon literally fell forward. she undid her seatbelt and ran out of the car like her life depended on it. she wanted to kiss the ground but stopped when she realized where she was. she read the neon sign above her head. 'time to party' slowly everything fell into place and she realized she was outside a bar for the first time in her life .she ran over to taani.

Sharon: what are we doing here?
taani: PARTY!!!
taani screamed whiled sharon covered her ears.
Sharon: you know i dont drink taani.
Taani: so you think i am devdas. even i dont drink. anyway drinking is not the only thing people do in bar. we are gonna dance sober babes.ok yaar.. You need to know about a few rules. 1) do not talk to a guy who flirts with you. 2) do.not drink anything that you do not see being made as it may be spiked and lastly dance like there is no tomorrow.
Sharon looked once more at taani pleadingly but knew taani would not budge. so she entered the bar with a highly excited taani.

Scene shift to swayam and rey.
They were entering the bar when swayam's phone rang.he talked a while and looked at rey with alot of guilt.rey recognized that look anywhere.
Rey: dude...please dont tell me that you have to go to work now.
Swayam: i am really sorry dude ... but i just need to sign a few papers i will be back in an hour or so..
Rey: first you drag me here and then you leave?
swayam: please dude...you go in and i will come in an hour.
with a final stare rey entered the bar.

The first thing rey did was to search for his next victim as was his practice. but this time it felt different like a strange magnetism. He scanned the crowd of people on the dance floor when his eyes caught a beautiful blue dress. he tried to find the girl who was wearing it but everytime he did a person blocked his way. a strange feeling over powered him he drew closer to her. finally he saw her but her face was covered by her hair as she was dancing vigourously. he drew closer and finally he caught a glimpse of her. everything went in slow motion. there was extremely loud music playing but he could still hear his heartbeats. he had never seen anything more beautiful in his life. he found himself mesmerized after a long time. meanwhile taani felt a heavy gaze on her. she turned her head slightly and felt her heart skip a beat. she stared at the mysterious eyes which was on her which was filled with pain. strangely she felt the need to comfort him to let him find solace in her. she shook the thoughts of head and walked over to the table where sharon was seated. rey found himself walking after her.

Rey:(to himself) dude snap out of it. Time to work your magic.
He sat next to them leaving them puzzled he smiled at sharon who smiled back awkwardly and then at taani who glared qt him. rey got confused as that never happened to him.before.

rey:(to taani in a husky voice) do you believe in love at first sight or should i walk by again?

Rey stared at taani expecting her to blush, but what happened was quite the contrary. taani burst out laughing and it went on for about 3 minutes. She gasped for air.while sharon tried to control her laughter.

Taani: with a pathetic pick up line like that walk by as many times you like nothing will happen.
This time sharon really could not control her laughter.
Rey was highly shocked , insulted and impressed.
Rey: wow... attitude ... i like it... anyway you are not like what you look like...
Taani: and what might that be?
rey: a bimbo.
Now it was taani's turn to get insulted and sharon's turn to get shocked.
taani: bimbo? What do you mean?
rey: definition of bimbo a attractive girl who is empty headed.
Taani: i know what it means!
rey: wow... why are you getting so hyper miss? am i affecting you that much? may i know the name of the person i am affecting?
sharon got scared for the guys safety as soon as she saw taani's stare.
sharon: t lets go...
Rey: well t... I doubt that is your real name.
Taani: it is the only name you are gonna get out of me.
Rey: well then i am rey.. but my real name...
Taani: i dont need to know it.
Rey: fair enough... can i get you a drink.
Taani: no thanks i dont want drinks..
Rey: oh i see you are one of those girls.
Taani: what girls?
continued on next post.
Edited by angelitha98 - 12 years ago
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Continued...
Rey: ( causually)you know the hypocrite type... Narrow minded and orthodox but puts on a mask in front of the whole world about being modern.
Words could not describe how infuriated taani was.
Taani: who said i dont drink... i .. I am just not in the mood now.
Sharon was shocked as she knew what was coming next and knew that it was next to impossible to change her mind.she slapped her head in frustration.

Rey: right... ok i better leave...
Taani: wait how about that drink.
She could not believe those word escaped from her mouth. but now that she said she had to do it. sharon looked away in confusion.rey smiled at her and ordered a few shots
Rey: drink up. shot.. gauranteed talli... but i am sure you knew that.
Taani smiled and held the glass nervously... in a sheer moment of pride she gulped it down. it tasted terrible but soon she felt a rush of addrenaline rey drank with her. she grabbed another then another soon both finshed 7 shots while sharon looked on in amazement.
rey: wow... Not ba...
before he completed his sentence taani got up and went to the dance floor unsteadily.
Song playing: party on my mind.
Taani sang the females part and danced hip pop to it with amazing technique and precision . even rey's drunk mind could perceive what an amazing dancer she was. he joined at the males part and both danced. all eyes were on them as they marvelled at their sizzling chemistry when they were done in a moment of passion rey pulled her close to him by her waist and to taani's suprise she enjoyed it. their lips were inches apart when...

Ok guys done... thanks for reading there might be some mistakes but pls ignore as i have no time to correct. and if you liked it pls hit like and comment.

Precap: taayam meeting and rey and taani's parent talk
Edited by angelitha98 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pls pls pm me when u update . read it totally. it is awesome.

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