Smitar's OS 2: Finding Khushi Part 8 Pg121(Mar 15)

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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

This is great .. I read it for the first time and already hooked..
Please PM me whenever u update. I've sent request😊

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Chinnu

@Phoenix_413

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Hey Arnav ur in love...realize it and Mami pls investigate through manorama bond and find out that girlwa is Phatti sadi

That was a brilliant update di !!! I loved it 🤗

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naturalla

@naturalla

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

that was really awesome yaar👏 ...update the next part soon😉

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Wow, I am enjoying reading your version of what could/might have happened after the fateful diwali night!
You have captured Arnav and Khuhi's pain and anguish beautifully!
Loved it😊

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

just read all all 4 parts...

in parts 1 and 2.. very nicely describes arnav's anger

in part 3, just love the way you write their conversation and show their emotions... and background music and advertisement.. just fantastic

part 4, now arnav feels guilty bad mouthing and now he decides he wants khushi in his life again

superb... loved it

very beautiful written... and love this concept

thanks for the pm

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

i loved it

it was superb smita di

the new series of OS are damn fantastic and interesting

i loved how the advertisements prefectly blended into the present situations of arnav and khushi

gr8 piece of writing cont soon

waiting for more from u

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: IPKlover
Smita, you do know how to pull at our heartstrings!!!! That was one fantabulous update...Khushi's turmoil and resolve...Arnav's unspoken love...I wish he comes back and takes her away with him 😳

And how you blended all the old advertisements was just genius!!! 😃

awww
such a nice chapter