Manzilmukuls' Writing Index - Page 10

Originally posted by: empusa

love you stories :)

Originally posted by: SaneWhispers

Read Love is not for sale just last night, since the topic is closed i cant comment their... so hence i found this place better...
I started it somewhere in Ramzaan this year but look at me could only complete it yesterday rather today morning!
the last three chapters had me glued could not drag myself to sleep unless i completed! I am a super slow reader... maybe its because i like to cherish and enjoy every single line as i read... cant help it!
First of all Sorry Kuku for this late reply..And OMG😲It's so wonderful that you read such an old story of mine .Honestly I was just a bit learning at that time..I am so glad you actually wanted to write about the experience you had while reading it!! FEELING ELATED and thanks so much for the wonderful words of appreciation🤗
Cming to the story... It was marvelous wuld be an understatement... i truly liked its pace and the shape it caught with time... the feelings from pain to hungar to lust to anger to love to freedom to repentance to finally unison...beautiful beautiful!
Aww Those are some awesome words😳😳😳I tried to play with certain emotions which could touch the hearts and I am glad that it stroke the perfect chord with you😳
From the little Nirja it started to end up in a strang and self maid Gulal! Keser, his life, his out bursts, his love and his care and then the final decision to return back to the path of righteousness... superb!
The little Kaju was cute... even though the name is umm diff!
HAAHAAHAH😆There is s story behind that name during Gulaal times we had one of my friends who used to joke about the kid's name being KAJU LOL..😆An old joke thus I used that name which was popular in the forum ROFL😛
Their passion and the silence speaking for the emotions in their hearts was touchy.
The effect the language had on the story shadowed all the way to the end!
Then again i dont see such men around these days, may be they dont manufacture them any more! every girl wishes to find such men, i am glad i can at least find them in our creativityz!
Lol yes Such men are very hard to find😆but fantasy gives us a liberty to create such men .
BTW i am glad that you enjoyed the flavour of the language.I try to use lots of local lingo with my stories to give it a more real feel...😳
I was impressed by the strong willed Gulal and her battle for her self respect...
Gulaal of this story is indeed one of the most wonderful souled woman I 've tried to create.Even she is one of my all time favourate heroines😳
i love how you moulded the whole concept so beautifully.
moreover the Alcohol and Zehar part was commendable.
All in all lovely effort!
thankyou for writing this!
will be reading other works soon dear!
Love Kuku!

Originally posted by: nneeiill

so we end up here...in FF forum

piu agle updates kab milenge yaar..

i love ur this thread..its a khazaana for all