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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
aur koi option bhi nhi hai

kyunki iss story ki writer main...😉 to jo meri marzi aayegi wo hi likhungi...😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: chulbuliannu


</div>aur koi option bhi nhi hai<div>
kyunki iss story ki writer main...😉to jo meri marzi aayegi wo hi likhungi...😆😆



hahahaha to jaldi jaldi update kro... ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: devildiva21



hahahaha to jaldi jaldi update kro... ;)


sabr sabr ka phal mitha hota hai re😉😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Very nice di,
kitna romntic tha bt sapna tha. Riya kitni pareshan thi, salt k badle sugar...he...he..
Arjun ne aisha ki complain ki and uska ghar mai no-entry. Ab kaise propose karega riya ko.
Loved to see the new side of arjun. 'Tum dinner karti ho', he ..he... Kitna funny question tha.
Riya ko dinner date par pucha great.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2 abhi padha.. Very nice and amazing story. Pata nahi arjun kaise kahega..
Haaye rathod ne kitni romantic and cute stlye mai i love u kaha n aisha usse toh samajh hi nahi.
Arjun and riya r in pub, accha hai. Arjun kisi ladki k saath flirt kar raha hai n riya is so J . Pee kar talli ho gayi.. Ab arjun ko kaha le jayegi...
Actually i luv ur dis naughy arjun
he...he...he...
''Ab ye mat puchna k dinner l iye hum resturant ja rahe hai''- pareshan khud hai n riya ko daant diya... N wo gaana , thats like mauke pe chauka , dono ko kitna irritate kiya..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
hello dr update krdo kitna w8 kraogay aap😭
hm pr taras khayo
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
lovd it so much.
continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
PART 3


(Riya ka gussa kafi high hai aur wo jealous bi feel kr rhi hai' aur full drunk hai..aur pub se nikalne se pehle usne apne sath ek bottle le li hai'..arjun ka dhyan uss pr pub se nikalne k baad jaata hai..Bottle dekh kr')

Arjun : Riya kya hai ye sab'Ye bottle do'mujhe'😡😡.(arjun riya k hath se bottle le leta hai'.)

Riya (in tali tone) : sir pls aap meri bottle de do..acchi baat nhi hai ye'.mujhe abhi aur peeni hai'itni peeni hai k mujhe kuch yaad hi naa rhe'.(ye kehte kehte riya arjun se bottle lene k chakker me arjun k upper lagbhag gir si jaati hai..Arjun riya ko sambhalta hai..)

Arjun murmuring : Ye to gayi kaam se''.isko jealous krne k chakker me kahaan fas gya main'.waise hi badi muskil se meri baat manti hai'.aur ab to ise chadi bhi huyi hai to bilkul nhi manegi'Arjun Rawte kahaan fas gya tu'.😕

Arjun to Riya : dekho riya tumne already pee huyi hai..maine tumhari baat mani aur ab hum wahaan jayenge jahaan tum kahogi'aur tum meri baat mano..ye bottle mere pass rehne do..

Riya (kuch sochte huye) : thik hai'..pr ye bottle meri hai to mujhe wapas de dena'ise fek mat dena..

Arjun (irritate hote huye) : nhi fek rha isse..ab chale'.

Arjun though : kya kismat hai meri'jaise taise krke ladki ko dinner pr chalne k liye manaya..fir gadi kharab ho gyi..isse jealous feel karwane k chakker me isne to pee li'ab isko sambhalo aur iski bottle ko bhi (bottle dekhte huye..)

Arjun : hum jaa kahaan rhe hai riya..dekho dhyan se chalo tum gir jaogi..(arjun riya ko sambhal rha hai..riya ko kafi nasha chad gya hai')

Arjun though : agar ye iss tarah se chalti rahi to pakka kisi gadi k niche aa jayegi..accha rahega main road se jaane ki jagah hum log andar galiyo se chale'

Arjun to Riya : riya hum log yahan andar galiyo se chalte hai..dekho main road pr kitna traffic hai'aur hum log to paidal hai naa..

Riya (kuch sochte huye in her talli way) : good idea'hum log ab galiyo se jayenge..(dono galiyo ki taraf mud jaate hai..riya cont')aap jitne khadus dikhte ho naa utne asal me ho nhi'.😊😆pta nhi ye sadu face bana kr rakhne me aapko kya mazaa aata hai..😆😆

Arjun murmuring : ye meri tariff kr rhi hai ya taana marr rahi hai kuch pta nhi chal rha''( Arjun ne ek hath se riya ko padka hua hai'aur ek hath me uske bottle hai barish shuru ho jati hai'arjun asman ki taraf dekhta hai..)

Arjun : ye hi hona baki tha..ab ise iss halat me lekar kahaan jaun'iski condition dekh kr koi ghar me bhi nhi ghusne dega apne'(arjun barish se bachne k liye idhar udhar dekhta hai'.use ek ghar ka aagan nazar aata hai'ghar ka darwaja andar se band hai'.) yahi sahi rahega..barish me bighne se accha hai..wrna ye bhi bimar padegi aur main bhi'.

(arjun riya ko zabardasti wahaan lekar jaata hai..)

Riya shouting : mera hath chodiye..mujhe barish me bhigna hai'..jb dekho apni marzi chalate ho'😡😡had hai yaar'

(Arjun is like kahaan fas gya main)

Arjun to riya : ssshhh'.riya koi ghar me se aa gya to hume yahaan se jaana padega..tum chup chap nhi baith skti

Riya (again shouting) : meri awaz hai..meri marzi main kaise bhi baat karu'.aur main zor zor se hi baat karungi'

(arjun kuch keh pata iss se pehle riya ki awaz sun kr ghar se koi nikal kr aata hai aur unhe jaane k liye kehta hai'.koi aur option naa dekh kr arjun aur riya ko wahaan se jaana padta hai'.barish tez nhi hai..pr ho rhi hai..)

Arjun murmuring : aise to dono hi bimar padh jayenge..koi rukne ki jagah dhundni padegi..

(Chalte chalte arjun ki nazar ek road side cycle repairing ki shop pr padhti hai'shop band padi hai.. pr uske aage thoda bahut shed ka space hai'.arjun riya ko lekar wahaan jaata hai'.arjun uss shed ka door pr thoda sa zor lagta hai to door open ho jata hai'.arjun riya ko ander le jaata hai')

Arjun to himself : ab ise jitna bolna hai bolne do..koi nhi hai mere alwa sun ne wala'..aaj ki to sari planning fail hai'ise kuch keh bi dia to ise samjh nhi aane wala'.

Riya again start shouting

Riya : meri bottle de dijiye sir''aapko pta nhi main subah se kitni pareshan hu'..sab aapki galti hai'.

(arjun surprised k usne kya kia hai'.)

Arjun : maine kya kia????????

Riya : kya kiya?????? Sab kuch aapne kia aur aapko nhi pta aapne kya kia???????😆

(arjun abhi soch hi rha hota hai k uss se kya galti ho gyi..tabhi riya..)

Riya : ohh sorry sorry'.sapna mera'.maine dekha aapko'.to aapko kaise pta hoga k aapne kya kia'.

(arjun smiles k wo riya k sapno me bhi aata hai..)

Arjun with a sweet face : accha main tumhare sapne me aaya tha'.waise sapna kya dekha tha tumne'

(Riya arjun k saamne se hat jati hai..aur uski taraf back kr leti hai..)

Riya : aap naa bade bade'..bahut bade kharab insan ho'.sapne me'sapne me aap aur main'..(ye kehte kehte riya ruk jati hai'.) main nhi btaungi k maine kya sapna dekha tha

Arjun though : ye btate batate kyun ruk gyi'aisa kya dekh lia isne sapne me'.😕

(arjun riya k saamne jaakar khada ho jata hai..uski aankhon me aankhen daalta hai'.aur romantically kehta hai')

Arjun : mujhe nhi btaogi'.k aakhir tumhare sapne me hum dono kr kya rhe the'(firstly riya blushing'then wo arjun ko halka se dakka dekar khud ko chuda kr jaane lagti hai pr jaise hi wo arjun ki taraf back karti hai uska balance bigad jaata hai'aur wo arjun k upper girti hai..iss se arjun ka balance bigad jaata hai'aur dono gir jaate hai'Riya arjun k upper girti hai')

Arjun : dhayan se riya..(suddenly arjun kuch soch kr riya ko pakad leta hai..riya uthne ki try krti hai pr uth nhi pati)

Riya : chodiye mujhe''..

Arjun : aise nhi..pehle batao tumne sapne me kya dekha

Riya : nhi batungi aap mujhe chodiye'.

Arjun : fir tum meri baahon me aise hi baithi rahogi..tab tak nhi btaogi

Riya (kuch soch kr..) : pakka naa aap chod denge'.uske baad'aur aap pls hasna bhi mat'pakka vada karo

Arjun : ok pakka vada..main tumhe chod dunga..aur hasuga bhi nhi'.

Riya : ek aur shart

Arjun : ab kya'''

Riya : aap apna face naa dusri taraf karo..tabhi btaungi..wrna mujhe sharm aayegi

Arjun though : aisa kya dekha isne k ise itni sharm aa rhi hai

Arjun : thik hai'.(arjun dusri taraf face krta hai..riya iss ka mauka utha kr bhagna chahti hai'wo uth kr bhagti hai..pr arjun use pakad leta hai'aur uski aankhon me aankhen daal kr..)

Arjun : arjun suryakant rawte ko dhoka dene ki koshish'Riya mukherjee'tumne aisa socha bhi kaise'.ab to tumhe sb batana padega k sapne me kya dekha..aur koi shart nhi chalegi'

Riya : agar nhi bataya to'.

Arjun : hmm nhi bataya to'..to fir tumhare sath jo hoga uske liye tum khud zimedar

Riya : matlab??????

(arjun riya k face k closed jaata hai..riya apni aankhen band kr leti hai'dono ek dusre ki saanse apne face pr feel kr skte hai..arjun bhi apni eyes close krta hai..tabhi riya arjun ko piche ki taraf dakka deti hai'.)

Riya : thik hai main batati hu..(riya arjun ki aankhon me aankhen dalti hai..fir blush krti hai..aur aankhen band krke pura dream bta deti hai..aur alarm clock ka sahi time pr bajna bhi'ye sun ne k baad arjun riya ko chod deta hai pr uski hasi hi nhi rukti'.)😳😳

Arjun thought : ye ladki sach me pagal hai'ek sapne k liye itna pareshan hai..pr iss se mera kaam aasan ho gya'ye ab bhi mujhe chahti hai'.ab to dil ki baat kehne me mujhe derr nhi krni chahiye..pr isse samjh aayegi iss halat me'.(tabhi arjun ki nazar riya pr padti hai'riya bottle kholne ki try kr rhi hai')



part 4

Edited by chulbuliannu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
awesome update :) loved it
poor arjun now he has to take care of riya and also her bottle 😆
loved when arjun said "ye meri tariff kar rahi hai ya taana maar rahi hai kuch pata ni chal raha" 🤣
everything is going wrong with arjun first car, then riya drunk and now rain
arjun and riya staying at cycle repair shop
riya shouting on arjun and told him that she saw him in her dream
she fell on top of arjun and he wasn't letting her go
and she told him about her dream 😆
hope arjun tells her his dil ki baat soon
continue soon
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh God !!!!!!!! bechara Arjun🤣

fash gaya riya ke chaakar me😆

i loved d dialg. ab isko bhi sambhalo aur iski botal ko bhi...lol


Arjun ka kaam aasan ho gaya riya ke dream ke bare me sunkar😉 😎


bechara arj dhara diya riya ne ki kya galti kar di hai ab usne😆

Edited by lizadavidmm - 12 years ago

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