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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#931

Nostalgic of hospital hug.
The back off was awesome. And that punch.
Reminded me of Arnav's punch on shyam's face.
So is she going to Arnav's house to stay?

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#932

Khushi hugging Arnav to find the comfort reminded me of their hospital hug on the show. *sigh*
Khushi wanted to be upset on him, blame him much like he expected but couldn't do so.
Naniji was supportive, I have always liked her on the show and here.
Vikrant came. Arnav don't leave Khushi here with Vikrant hovering around to force her.
I liked the cold 'back off' and then loved the punch that followed.😊
You asking us to stop muttering for stopping here? You know how difficult is that - It's like a movie stopping right at climax and refusing to play.

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merry777

@merry777

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#933

Awesome just read whole chapters in one go. Eagerly waiting for the updates

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meem17

@meem17

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#934

Loved it
Dishum dishum
Tu mera hero asr...
Khushis behaviour was surprising but welcoming

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#935

What a beautiful story. Read it all in one go !! Please PM me also for the updates

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#936

amazing part...

nani ji supported khushi...

she is so polite...

OMG khushi hugged arnav...

found her solace not bad...

vicks OMG kamina...

i hope khushi go with arnav n nani...

update soon...

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#937

you are one of the best writers on IF. I so enjoyed checkmate. Now I love this story.

thankyou. hats off to you.👏

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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#938

superb update vi in vi style

will miss u for two weeks come back soon

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Anu179

@Anu179

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#939

Thanks for the update...you spoil us...it had many elements of surprise...Khushi hugging Arnav reminded of the hospital scene in the show...but thankfully here Arnav reciprocated the hug...I think it's very natural, she had some fulfilled moments with him just before the tragedy struck her...what surprised me was Vikrants tamasha...no one in Khushi's neighbourhood watched the news???...I was waiting for someone in the neighbourhood to click...and vocalise Arnav& Khushi's marriage and halt Vikrant's gundagardi...have to wait for next update...intezaar intezaar intezaar...

Have a safe and fantabulous holiday...don't miss us...we though will terribly miss you and ur cliff hangers...🤗

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UandI4Ever

@UandI4Ever

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#940

The update was amazing!!! I loved checkmate since the very beginning and now i love this ff too! I cant believe i didnt read it earlier but now that i read it all in one go, i want more but knowing there wont be updates for the next weeks, i wish i had gone slower and read a part a day. Will eagerly be waiting for an update!