TaaRey FF- Laila & Majnu *COMPLETED*

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So I have this habit that if I get an idea, I have to write it down. So I decided to start another SS. If I have enough inspiration & get enough responses I might continue this. But for now I am just doing the first chapter.

Summary: Singhania & Shekhawat. Best friends. NO. Worst Enemies. YES. But one catch, Rey & Swayam are best friends. Though they hide it from their parents. So when Swayam's little sister, Taani, finally moves to St. Louis, there is some clear chemistry between her & Rey. So what happens now??? Will they be able to be together or will they have the same ending as Romeo & Juliet??

What do you guys think?!?!?!?
CHARACTER SKETCH BELOW!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice Concept ! Do Continue and If Possible PM me!
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CHARACTERS!!!
Taani Shekhawat- Daughter of Sameer Shekhawat. Sister of Swayam Shekhawat. Bubbly, fun, cute, caring, takes no crap attitude. The ideal girl. Loves to dream. She is a beautiful painter. Wants to live her life her own way. Best friend is Anysia, Neha & Simmi.

Reyaansh 'Rey' Singhania- Son of Ranvijay Singhania. Overprotective of Neha (& in the future of Taani). Brother of Neha Singhania. Handsome, charming, caring, friendly fun. Lives his life the way he wants to. Loves to dance. Best friend is Swayam , Vicky & Nil.

Swayam Shekhawat: Son of Sameer Shekhawat. Brother of Taani Shekhawat. Over protective of Taani & Anysia. The perfect guy, there is no fault of his. Loves to dance. The nicest guy you will ever meet. Tends to obey the rules, except for being best friends with Rey. Best friends are Rey, Vicky & Nil. Boyfriend of Anysia.

Anysia (Pronounced- An-ees-iya) 'Anys' (Pronounced- An-ees)Kalsi: Sister of Vicky. Loves to dance & paint. Quiet, shy, caring, cute, tends to go with what people tell her to do. Girlfriend of Swayam. Helps Swayam & Rey sneak and hang out. Best friends with Taani, Neha & Simmi.

Vicky Kalsi: Brother of Anysia. Overprotective of Neha & Anysia. Loves to dance. Funny, outgoing, stupid at times, loves to make people laugh. Helps Rey & Swayam be friends. Best friend of Swayam, Nil & Rey. Boyfriend of Neha.

Neha Singhania: Daughter of Ranvijay Singhania. Sister of Reyaansh Singhania. Bubbly, VERY filmy, cute, caring, friendly. Super lovable. Loves to dance. Girlfriend of Vicky. Best friend of Taani, Anysia & Simmi.

Nilesh 'Nil' Kotian- Funny, life of the party, talented rapper, good friend. Loves to dance. Helps Rey & Swayam be friends. Best friends with Vicky, Rey & Swayam. Likes Simmi.

Simmi Malhotra- Cute, funny, friendly, an amazing DJ. Loves to dance & DJ. She and Anysia have their own DJ group together. Best friend of Taani, Anysia & Neha. Likes Nil.

Chapter 1- Pg 1 (below)
Chapter 2- Pg 3
Chapter 3- Pg 6
Chapter 4- Pg 7
Chapter 5- Pg 10
PROMO- Pg 14
Chapter 6-pg 17
PROMO- Pg 18
Chapter 7- Pg 20
PROMO- Pg 22
Chapter 8- Pg 23
LAST CHAPTER-Pg 25!!!

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Edited by mymy_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please please continue soon
nice concept n character sketch😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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So this not going to be a very long story. Probably like 10 chapters at most.

~CHAPTER 1~

Rey made his way to the rehearsal hall. He was supposed to meet the rest of the gang there. When he reached there he saw that everyone was already there except for Vicky and Anysia. He made his way towards his best friend.
Rey-Shekhawat what is up?!?
Swayam-hey Rey! Nothing much, but I have an announcement.
Rey-what is it?
Nil-he won't tell us till his girlfriend is here
Swayam-*blushes* shut up Nil
Simmi-oh ho, he's blushing
Neha-so cute you looking
Swayam-shut up guys!
Rey laughed at his best friend feeling shy. They just sat there waiting for the other two to arrive. Swayam and Rey were in the middle of a conversation when Vicky came running in.
Vicky-sorry we're late, but miss I need to have my milo here wouldn't let me leave.
Anysia-shut up! We got here didn't we. And I still haven't gotten my milo
Swayam-which is why I got you some!
He walked up towards her, with a cup inn his hand. He gave to her and she kissed his cheek.
Anysia-which is why I love you!
Vicky-YUCK! I AM STILL HERE!
Anysia-deal with it!
Swayam put his arm around Anysia and Anysia leaned her head on Swayam's shoulder while drinking her milo.
Nil-okay so now that your girlfriend is here can you tell us your important news.
Swayam-okay so here's the deal. You all have to help me make my sister feel welcome here.
Anysia spat her milo out all of Vicky at the end of this sentence.
Vicky-thank you Anysia
Anysia-sorry bhai, but since when did you have a sister? And why am I only finding about her now!
Anysia was now glaring at Swayam, and it made him a bit nervous.
Swayam-um…well you see. You're kind of best friends with Singhanias so I'm not supposed to mention family.
Anysia-you're using the Singhania excuse. Wow Swayam I thought you were better than that.
Anysia glared at him and walked off. Swayam went after trailing apologies.
Nil-you think Swayam would have known better than to say that with her
Vicky-he doesn't know Anys as well as he thinks he does.
They all left and Rey was walking around a corner when he bumped into someone. But before she could fall he caught her in his hands. He watched as she pursed her eyes shut in fear. She was beautiful, more than beautiful. The most gorgeous thing he had ever set his eyes on. She finally opened her eyes, and their eyes connected immediately. They didn't want to leave each other's arms. But they both realized what they were doing and snapped out of it.
Rey-sorry, are you new here?
She nodded her head.
Taani-ya my name is Taani, sorry about that. I was just looking for my brother.
Rey-who's your brother?
Taani-um his name is Swayam
Rey-oh so you're Swayam's sister.
Taani-you know my brother
Rey-I am his best friend
Taani-which one are you? Vicky, Nil or Rey?
Rey-*smirking*guess
Taani-well bhai said that Nil is short, and you're not very short so you're not Nil.
Rey-that's right
Taani-and he said Vicky was tall, loud, and crazy. You're tall, but you don't seem loud or crazy.
Rey-well that's from first sight
Taani-he also said that Rey was kind, caring, funny, and girls seem to think he's very hot.
Rey-really?!?!
Taani-well you seem kind, caring, and funny. And I can see why girls would find you hot
Rey-*smirks* is that so?
Taani-*blushes* so you're the famous Reyaansh Singhania, that my brother is willing to break all the rules for?
Rey-Swayam told you about that
Taani-we tell each other everything. But I honestly don't see what's so great about you?
Rey-what about I show you?
Taani-are you trying to ask me out?
Rey-it's not trying is you understand
Taani-hmm, smart
Rey-so is that a yes
Taani-that's a m-
Before Taani could reply there was a loud scream. Rey immediately recognised it. He sprinted towards the rehearsal hall. He found Neha on the floor with Anysia, Simmi, and Nil crowded around her. He rushed over to Neha.
Rey-Neha, are you okay?
Neha-nehi, bhai hurting it is
Rey-what happened?
Nil-um.. I kind of spilt water and forgot to clean it up
Rey-NIL you idiot!
Rey lifted his sister in his arms and took her to the nurse, with everyone including Taani trailing behind him. No one had actually noticed Taani yet. The nurse wasn't there so they waited. Neha was crying. Rey was trying to quieten her down.
Taani-umm I know how to help
They all turned towards her and at the same time she and Anysia screamed.
Anysia-TAANI!
Taani-ANYSIA!
They gave each other tight hugs.
Anysia-what are you doing here? Why didn't you tell me you were coming to Mumbai?
Taani-I have come to meet my brother. I am going to St. Louis now. What are you doing here?

Anysia-OMG that's so amazing. Who's your brother?
Rey-her brother is Swayam, but how do you guys know each other?
Anysia-you know I told you guys about this girl from Jodhpur I was talking to online. Well that's Taani, and are you serious you're Swayam's sister?
Taani-yup, is that a bad thing
Anysia-not at all, but do you want to help me play a trick on him.
Taani-sure
Anysia-basically we have to be really mad at him because he didn't tell us that he had a sister and that he had a girlfriend
Taani-wait?!?! Bhai has a girlfriend?!?!?!
Anysia-you're looking at her
Taani-WHAT?!?!?
Anysia-for the past 3 months
Taani-oh I'm going to kill him
Anysia-so plan make Swayam beg is a go
Taani-oh you better believe it
Rey-wait, does this mean we are all witnesses in this plan?
Anysia-yup, and you say anything g to Swayam
Taani-you die, and you won't get that date
Neha-umm what date?!?! And can someone please help me?
Taani went up to Neha and twisted her ankle, at first there was so much pain, but then she felt better.
Neha-Neha thanking you Taani
Taani-your welcome
Neha-and what date you are talking about?
Rey-nothing Neha
Taani-oh so you're embarrassed for people to know about the date
Rey-no
Taani-then…
Rey-fine
Taani-great, Rey asked me out
Gang (minus TaaReYam & Vicky)- WHAT?!?!
Anysia-you just met her
Simmi-and she's Swayam's sister
TaaRey-so?!?!
Taani-bhai, doesn't control who I go out with
Anysia-but you're a Shekhawat, and he's a Singhania
Taani-yes, but my parents don't live here.
Nil-oh in that case
Taani-in that case
Neha-in that case
Simmi-in that case
Anysia-in that case
Swayam-in what case?
Gang (minus Vicky)-NOTHING!!!

Precap: Rey prepares a romantic date for Taani. Anysia & Taani bond over Swayam, and they pretend to be angry at him. Rey's parents come to stay with Rey for some time.

HOPE YOU LIKED IT!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reading this was funnn...
Finally Taani is not that SHY, BECHAARI types anymore atleast in one story & she's JUST AWESOME & straight forward & seems like she's blunt, right on face. I LOVE THIS.
OMG, cant wait for next update. & plz continue. u r doing a great job.
pm me plz.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg...its great...taarey first meeting and date...eagerly waiting for next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow yaar damm interesting yaar
awsm luvly n i think i will soon
fall in luv with it haaye it is perfect n taarey
r naughty haaye thr will date each other wow
cant wait thanks for PM n do put nxt prt soon
n yeah do PM me plzz n put it soon yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
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like it???????

loved it!!!!!
pls pls pls continue...soon
waiting for next upd

it was nyc
luv at first sight thing between taarey
wow...rey is sooo fast!!!!!
liked it
bt ab reys parents kyu yaar
i mean thode tym ke baad aate toh
nywys loved it
n would really lyk to see it continued
pls pls
awesome concept
pls continue
n pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really interesting =)
please do PM me whenever u update =)

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