1#Arshi FF:NEVER WISHED YOU TO BE MINE...parts 1-8 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
The lady was Sheetal 😲
I thought it was khushi
Interesting
Continue soon
thnx for d pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
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hey hi.,
thanks for the pm
sweet & lovely update
you r really a very clever writer
the way you have plotted the story
the way you have written the update
shows Ur talent in writing
u have played with the words
in such a way
it will leave the readers in anxiety & eagerness towards the next update
in the prolouge you have described abt khushi's love towards arnav
But in the update-1
you have showed the love of one person towards the other
the love received person is arnav
but the love transmitter
who is she
khushi??
or
sheethal??
is khushi working for the sheethal grp of companies
if so why??
y she is away frm arnav??
ufff
many questions are rising in my mind
plz update next part pretty soon
eagerly waiting for the update
update soon

Edited by vajram - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23


I alrdy knw its gonna b awesum 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: -saranya-



I alrdy knw its gonna b awesum 😊


awww
its becoming very hard to write a comment now
if can't reach ur expectations
then i am very sry😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: vajram



awww
its becoming very hard to write a comment now
if can't reach ur expectations
then i am very sry😳😳



hey vajram dont think that ever...i get boosted up when ever i see comment
of my buddies...

i dont know whether who ever read this liked it or not..
i am only concerned my bunch of sweet buddies...my saran,kuts,vajram
teddy...so on
love you all
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: vajram

res😳😳

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unress😳😳
hey hi.,
thanks for the pm
congratulations for the start of ur journey of writing FF's
i hope it should get a big success
sorry sorry sorry
for late reply
you might have seen me online
but i am not
yesterday n8 my net have got strucked
even i have not logged out my account
just a few mins ago
it started working normally
hope u'll forgive me
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coming to the teaser
teaser is very very interesting
ARSHI are together only for 15 days
why??
how??
what is the reason??
and more questions are rising in my mind(gutter-mind activated )
khushi loves him to the core
how sweet
she can also spend her life by this love on him
but
what abt arnav
i am very curious to know abt this
how will story will get mould
plz continue soon
eagerly waiting for the next update
update soon





wow its beautiful comment...

loved it...

overwhelmed with your response my friend...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: -saranya-

i'l try to read dear...
but mom case is not evn properly diagnosed so im not in a clear head wht will happen next...hope she gets well and gve back my life to me... 😭


no worries dear...take your own time...
we all are with you...

Edited by anamika90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: -saranya-

edited...


this is my detailed comment aftr tat fateful day i dint feel like emoting myself at all...but with ur frst step in here i cnt afford to shut myself... 😊
aftr all im the frst to like and comment on ur frst part...wich im so proud and happy about...
wish u all success fr ur wrk...😊
actually party time... thought of cooking sumthng sweet fr u but i ended up like ths... 😛 😛

so here update...

those initial lines held so much love...and the way u described her...
i thought its kushi...but u ditched me... milky white skin???? 😲 😲 sheetal!!! tats my dolly's description... 😭 😭

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well well well...i'l stil spare u cz u brought out suspense fr us to grow intrst...
hope ths jorney to be an awesum one... im afraid if i'l be here wit u or not...but anyways i'l wish u the best inspite of wer im and hw im... 😊

now tat just part 1 is out... i hv to wait why the hell sheetal having sindoor?? why the hell she hav arnav as her love??? is she gonna create sumthng big...??? wher is arshi???? oh my god...

im waiting...
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wow saran...
beautiful and cute comment must say...😊
never had such cutie pie response...
i loved pouting baby...

now towards the update...yup there is a mystery...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: vajram

to be edited

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edited
hey hi.,
thanks for the pm
sweet & lovely update
you r really a very clever writer
the way you have plotted the story
the way you have written the update
shows Ur talent in writing
u have played with the words
in such a way
it will leave the readers in anxiety & eagerness towards the next update
in the prolouge you have described abt khushi's love towards arnav
But in the update-1
you have showed the love of one person towards the other
the love received person is arnav
but the love transmitter
who is she
khushi??
or
sheethal??
is khushi working for the sheethal grp of companies
if so why??
y she is away frm arnav??
ufff
many questions are rising in my mind
plz update next part pretty soon
eagerly waiting for the update
update soon



hahaha...
will reveal the mystery soon...may be next part...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
aww
ths was amazing part
i must say very very well written 👏

someone s in deeply luv wth arnav
d lines were too emotional
nd really a very heart touching




i just loved it


m confused
s ths lady khushi
or s ths sheetal



waiting to know more about it
nd m glad that u r writing ur story
all d best

luv u my dairy milk

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