Arhi SS: Finding Love #2: COMPLETED - Page 53

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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update. Loved it. eagerly waiting for the next part to see what is really going on in his mind.
Of course, this is your story and you can take it any direction you want, but in my opinion, he should be supportive of her. Getting to go to Harvard is not a small thing, and he should know that better than anyone , since he went there himself.
And a relationship does not mean giving up on your dreams. If she gave up that dream of hers in order to be in a relationship with Arnav, sooner or later , regret will creep in and start affecting their relationship.
Of course that is my POV.



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mem1

wonderful update. Loved it. eagerly waiting for the next part to see what is really going on in his mind.

Of course, this is your story and you can take it any direction you want, but in my opinion, he should be supportive of her. Getting to go to Harvard is not a small thing, and he should know that better than anyone , since he went there himself.
And a relationship does not mean giving up on your dreams. If she gave up that dream of hers in order to be in a relationship with Arnav, sooner or later , regret will creep in and start affecting their relationship.
Of course that is my POV.




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I LIKE THAT!!! 😉 Something to think about.
Edited by Nidsubh007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really really nice update!!
Arnav should have atleast listened to Khushi properly!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow amazing update loved it,thank you for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anony_mous



I hate that reaction from Arnav. Why can't he let people talk/complete what they have to say?

I assume that this would bring some twists and turns in the story and hence the chapter was a crucial one. I am all for it as too sugar coated a story is not what I want. But try and keep the genuine real reactions and events like you have till now.

I love your writing but just make Arnav handle Lavanaya in the way it should be handled, with all his brains. Lover's tiff I can take. Her going to Harvard, them breaking up all is okay. But ASR not using his famous brains, I PROTEST 😃




ASR's brain is more famous then he is! 😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a sad update, but it was well written😊

I felt really sorry for both Khushi and Arnav. Wonder why Arnav left to meet Lavanya. Waiting for your next update, as I can't digest the fact Arnav & Khushi are not on good terms😭

Awesome writing.

Update soon😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww. poor Khushi. Arnav just ignored her.
I hope nothing happens between Arnav and La.
Wondering what is going on in Arnav's mind right now.
Thanks for the PM. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG U r cruel to leave such a cliffhanger!!

what the hell just happened??
Arnav is so upset?? OMG when will u post update 15??

--- Is ASR's brain processing sth?? Heavy computing going on and hence no response to Khushi??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wth!? A quite arnav???
Well...thats new!
Continue soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shree10

OMG U r cruel to leave such a cliffhanger!!

what the hell just happened??
Arnav is so upset?? OMG when will u post update 15??


After reading the last 5 pages of comments I've realized i'm super mean! 😆

Part 15 hopefully by Tuesday! Thanks for your comments Shree!

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