Arhi: Valley of Flowers #2 Chapter 13 in thread 3

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Huny

@huny.thebest

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

brilliant update dear...

n congratz 4 the new thread...

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

congrats on the new thread
and nice part
continue soon

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Why Kavi Why?? Are you not satisfied with the problems Khushi is facing that you add Shyam again to the list too? How much poor girl can handle?
Or is it your majboori that you can't portray Shyam as good??

I will hold on to that silly legend to have my wish come true. (I mean mandirwali) and also the sindoor symbolism!

ASR takes khushi for granted as his anytime/anywhere punching bag! Well high time you got your facts right Raizada! But both seem to have deep rooted feelings for each other. (Khushi's feelings we already know) Which make them comfort each other!

It's sad for Khushi as well as Anjali to have Shyam turned out like this!
Oh.. When is next Wednesday coming????

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

I thought you have made Shyam as good in this story at least.. But NO!! He'll remain a pervert lusting over someone else's fiancee/love.
This is already so complicated and now this Shyam will add fuel..
Brilliant update Kavi..
The mandir scene reminded of teej sindoor scene - that was also in the Shiv-Gauri mandir😊
Arnav keeps insulting her time to time but still cares for her. He acts on his own whims and fancies.
I wonder what these Mami, Buaji and Shyam will end up doing for her - I mean to trouble her more..

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Crinklez

@Crinklez

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Great update.

I absolutely love your stories, the characters and the events. You leave me wanting to read more.

Please update soon.

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kiran1992

@kiran1992

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Good job dear...
This FF s gettn more interestn nw...
Can't wait 2 read more...
Now I hav 2 wait till next wed...
😭

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

OMG!!!

Where is this all going?

ArHi scene - as always - amazing!! :)

my my .. mami and her rantings!!

Nani- as always true to her character ... sweet and only one concerned for Khushi...

Anji - Arnav - ohh i so feel for Anjali!! that mother of theirs ... root cause of all issues!!

Now coming to Shyam!! aha!! again true to his character!! was wondering how come no firework from his end so far!! but no disappointment there!!!

ouhh he and his lusting for Khushi ... will anything change ever?!?

why should it be Khushi who will suffer all the time? ouhh!!

Thanks for the update Kavi...

P.S. do change the title name in thread 1 as it was not known that thrd 2 was created at all!!

~Leena

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Neel

@neel123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

wow. this is getting very interesting.

shyam- tu kab sudrega?

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

The mandir incident, a sign from God? First NK and now Shaym, Arnav surely has competition. Hope Khushi has a easy life ahead.

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Sayali_23

@Sayali_23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Hey Kavi...

was waiting for my next installment of Arnav... and you didn't disappointed me

So Khushi and Arnav are destined to be married... this is the second sing... first one being sitting under the match-making tree and now carrying Khushi to the temple... 👍🏼

So Arnav and Anjali's father is alive and Arnav blames him for everything bad happened in thr life 😕

why Shyam is always sooo creepy in all your stories?

I just finished your earlier two stories... loved them... u did a fab job👏👏

Edited by sayali_d23 - 12 years ago