PERFECT KILLER/last part page 37 - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome promom cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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just looove your story so far 👏 👏 👏
plzz continue soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
amazing part
and fab promos
cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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heyyy...great start!! i read your other story...game time and game time returns...and they were awsum!!!

this story sounds sooo interesting!!! and the promos are just wonderful...

continue sooon...



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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok i havent been continueing all that fast but next part comeing in a few mins 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 2

10:00am

we see sulben beside kripa bed trying to wake kripa up

s-kripa wake up your new teacher is here

k-screw home schooling why cant i go to a public school with people my own age

s-not again,how many times do i have to tell you.public school is dangerouse for you. besides i think you will like you new 12th grade teacher

k-tell me one good reason why i would like my 12th grad teacher

s-well, i was thinking about how you said you wanted to be around people your age so i hirded a collage student to home school you. he is only a feew years older then you but he is a nice boy who is top student in the whole collage

kripa wasnt really listening she was just excited to know a collage guy was going to be her teacher

k-is the guy cute

sulben was taken back by kripa reply

s-look kripa he is here to teach you not to date you

k-ya,ya, teach not date

again kripa wasnt listening. kripa got out of bed and went to her closet to find some thing cool to wear

s-kripa again your not listening

k-yes iam

s-realy what had i just said

k-something about teaching and dateing

s-KRIPA!!!listen to me. if you want to keep your new collage 12th grade teacher,you will follow the house rules, as in no leaveing the house after 8:00 pm, no boyfriends, you must be in bed by 10:00pm and no calling anyone on the phone buy me or your new teacher about questions on your homework, got it.

k-got it

s-ok good, now get dressed and come down stairs to meet your teacher

k-ok

sulben leaves the room and kripa gose to her closet and wears a pink dress skirt then a pink dress coat over a white shirt, and curls her hair and then heads down stairs. down stairs kripa sees sulben talking to a guy. kripa couldnt see the guys face because he was turned the other way

k-father iam ready

sulben smiles

s-kripa meet your new teacher

the guy turns around and kripas mouth droped open for 2 reasons the guy was angad the same guy from the bar and 2 he looked hoter then last night. he was wearing blue faded jeans with a green shirt and white long sleeves that came out from the inside of the shirt, and to top it all off he was wearing sun glasses that covers his eyes with black shades

a-hello miss.sharma

k-hi

s-well i have a fundraiser to go to so i will be back around 6 and, me khanna you shouse be finished with class around 5, right

a-yes, my work will be finish around 5pm

s-thats great, now kripa remember there are gurds right out side the house, if you need any thing just go out side. this is the first time i am leaveing you alone at home, are you sure you will be ok

k-father iam going to be fine! just chill and go!

s-ok

sulben kiss kripa on the cheek and then grabs his brif case and runs out to the limo waiting out side

inside the ministers house

a-so where do we study(with a big grin)

k-in the study room

a-cool

angad grabs his backpack and follows kripa to the study room.inside the study room it was made out of all glass windows where angad and kripa could see about 12 guards right out side watching them

a-her kripa do you think we can go to a place with out so many gaurds watching

kripa smiles

k-i think i know one place

kripa leads angad to her room were there was a huge window but no gards any where to be seen

a-wow, huge room. is it yours

k-yes

a-how come there arent any gaurds out side of your room

k-i made a deal with my father when i was in 3rd grade

a-what kind of deal

k-as long as i make strait "A"s in home schooling there are to be no gaurds with in 10 feet of my room

a-oh, you probly spend a lot of time in this room

k-i do

a-well the lets get to work

k-work, work, work, is that all you can think of.

kripa lies on her bed and hugs a pilliow

k-tell me mr.khanna how much is my father paying you to be my teacher

a-4,500 a week

k-well, i will pay you doubble to not make me work and just hang with me

a-i dont need money i am already a billionair

k-then why except a job with such little pay

a-because someone else is paying me 100,000,000 pounds to kidnap you

k-WHAT!!!!!!


hope u like this part 😊
next part comeing soon
comeing up- angads helper 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok every one sence i havent been posting in a while next part comeing in a few mins also
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
hahah nice! wonderful part.... what a evil angad 😆

-Ruby
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 3


k-then why except a job with such little pay

a-because someone else is paying me 100,000,000 pounds to kidnap you

k-WHAT!!!!!!

a-you heard me

kripa gets up from her bed and runs for the door but before kripa could make it to the door angad grabs kripa around the wairst and slams her to the ground. kripa now starts screaming

k-help!!!help!!!

a-easy there, your room is sound proff no one can hear you. trust me i know this because i checked before comeing here

kripa couldnt handly so much shock and presser of angad on top of her and kripa fainted. as soon as kripa fainted, angad called in a guad form his cellphone. a guard comes in kripas room but we can only see his feet

guard-sir, you called

a-are job ended up easier then i thought, prithiv

the camra zooms up to the gaud's face and we see it is prithiv

a-prithiv you take kripa to my house and keep her in the basement and will try and get my self fainted so no one will think i kidnaped the ministers daughter

p-ok, meet you at your house

prithiv carries an unconshios kripa out the window so the guards out side wont see, as soon as prithiv left with kripa. angad hit him self with a glass pot some books and sharp corners and continued hitting himself untill he couldnt move any more

6:00pm

sulben came home and asked one of the guards outside were kripa was

guard-in her room

s-and her mr.khanna left yet

guard-his car is still here

s-(thinking)what would angad still be doing here

sulben gose to kripas room to check on her. as sulben opens th room door he sees kripas things all over the place and angad fainted on the floor. sulben is shocked and runs to angad yelling

s-angad!!!angad!!!

sulben shakes angad a bit but it wasnt helping

s-GUARDS, DOCTOR, SOMEBODY!!!!!!!

sulben runs out the door and brings a whole bunch of guards police and some doctors to check on angad. one hour later angad starts wakeing up. as angad wakes up he see sulben some docters and a whole bunch of police around him

a-sir is kripa alright were is she

s- that is what i was going to ask you mr.khanna do you know were kripa is

a-no i dont

s-WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU DONT KNOW!!!!WHERE THE HELL IS MY ONLY CHILD!!!!

sulben looked like he was about to kill angad at the moment so the police held sulben back and one other police officer started talking to angad

police-sir can you tell me what happend

a-i was in miss. sharma's room and we were just about to study when miss.sharma turns and has a shocked face so i turn around to see what see is looking at and soon as i turn around some one hits me with a glass pot. i couldnt see because of the suprise. i get up again to fiuger out what was happening and i hear miss.sharma scream my name yelling "help!!!help!!!" then some one hits mean with some books and sharp corners of desks and suchs places

police-can you descrip how the person looks

a-like i said i didnt see the person because of the suprise. i dont even know if the person was a guy or a girl.

police-ok you are free to go, and watch out were you go for now on. the person that attacked you might come after you to.

a-ok officer

police-oh heres my card if you remember something or have questions or even have a problem please call right away

a-sure

angad takes the card the police officer took out and then left the ministers house. as soon as angad was about a mile away from the ministers house he gives off a huge girn on his face

a-(thinking)another kidnaping succeful...after all iam the perfect underworld kidnapper

angad again grins in happyness and then drives to his house

hope u like this part
next part comeing soon
comeing up-angad becomes the perfect killer 😉

ok every one that is right now confused all iam saying is right now angad is considered by the underworld as a perfect kidnapper. in the story you all will find out how angad becomes a perfect killer
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG love the story! i love how angad just came out and told kripa he was paid to kidnap her lol!!! plz continue soon that was awesome!

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