ARHI FF-THE MIRAGE -Thread 3 Chap-37,p 146 - Page 85

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anukat

Authors Note-1

Long time ... hence this note! Also its been a long time and I am beginning to find people have forgotten the previous occurrences that shaped the characters!
Before I say anything else let me thank all of you for your support and interest in this FF! Without your support it would not have been possible!
And this is just a writer's view to let you know... what I feel when I essay a character... well your view of the same is yours and as respected!...so do please discuss and comment if you feel like! No offence meant and none will be taken too! I hope I am clear about that now!

So a revisit ... especially on these issues:

1. Khushi's character
2. Jethwas and their financial status
3. Arnav's stand point
4. Deepthimaan and his character


Personally, I have no issues with your storyline or your characterization. Being a writer and reader, this is what I think is the clash between both.

As reader, we get impatient with the characters esp if they are being stubborn and at the end of the day we all judge by the chapter, because we dont know how story will unfold in the future. But when the story gets unfold, everything seems perfect and justified. Until then, we all have to have patience trusting the writer.

As writer, no one would understand my characters and their expressions in my story better than myself and its demanding if we expect the same from readers. Make no mistake, each individual reads the story with different tone and imagination, which often leads to misunderstanding of characterization.

I have faced this problem many times in my FF but thats the way it is. Everyone have opinions and please dont get disheartened and dont take it to your heart. Eventually people will love your reasons.

Dont get demotivated. We all love your story. Sorry I couldnt comment on time as I was little inactive for last few weeks.

Love your story. As always, love your Arnav :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I totally agree with you on your note. It's an amaizing story and you are a wonderful writer. I like how you potrayed Arnav and Maan, and their relation.
I recently started reading your another story "Vishali'.It's amazing too.
Thank You!
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you for reviews.. I hope its clear out many things.. Well i belive khushi is vry strong woman.. I like khushi's character in dis story .. There is nothing abnormal about her character or the way u portrait it.. Neither arnav , deepu nor any other characters in ur story r abnormal. they r so real .. Thats y i luv dis story and luv day way it goes ..
So keep rocking ..
Okay nw about da chapter.. I hope khushi wnt go back to square one.. She hav to b strong dis time.. & support bothe arnav & deepu to win dis battle..
Convo between arnav & deepu was great.. Luved it.. Glad that deepu is back..
That new character was interesting ..
Btw wt was that parcel?
Waiting for next update eagerly will it b triller or romantic ?
xoxo
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Posted: 12 years ago
anu ... hey chill ... its a brilliant piece. brilliant story and backdrop. its ur story to tell and u cant please everyone. take it at ur own pace. those who want to read will read, others will stay away. u have a brilliant concept here
hell i swoon every time arnav says 'rani sa' i can imagine barun sibti with his chocolate molten eyes and the killer smirk..
even khushi is so regal in demeanour
dont fret
i say
kuch to log kahain ge
logon ka kaam hai kehna
chodo bekaar ki baton mein
kahin beet na jaye raina
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anukat

Authors Note-1

Long time ... hence this note! Also its been a long time and I am beginning to find people have forgotten the previous occurrences that shaped the characters!
Before I say anything else let me thank all of you for your support and interest in this FF! Without your support it would not have been possible!
And this is just a writer's view to let you know... what I feel when I essay a character... well your view of the same is yours and as respected!...so do please discuss and comment if you feel like! No offence meant and none will be taken too! I hope I am clear about that now!

So a revisit ... especially on these issues:

1. Khushi's character
2. Jethwas and their financial status
3. Arnav's stand point
4. Deepthimaan and his character


1. Khushi is being talked as spineless, selfish unrealistic and recently good friend segad has even said Jethwas didn't give her any proper values.
Well friends! Khushi is what she is not just because of her childhood loss and being lonely! She shared with Deepthimaan remember? And Pramodji and Malathi JijI etc! She is not a dud!

But My question is how many women see another women being molested...
A man brutally murdered infront of her eyes and cut into pieces?
Suffer repeated attacks on life and not only her life but her husband's life?
Get stabbed and save their beloved!
Get repeatedly stalked and followed and infused with a sense of doom!

We are forgetting all this! Plus Arnav married her not for love! Ok fine! He reconciled! But its not a must that she should jump at it especially when she was considered a gold digger!

With due respect to all Arnav fans( I am one too) Just because he is ready she need not be! You cannot rule a heart! But she already loves him and thats why there is a problem! Just mull over it you will find that she suffers by not sharing as she is conservative but holds back coz she knows the enemy better! Yes she and Arnav can win it out together! But one needs to build trust it does not come overnight! She earned Arnav's trust and Pursuit is his earning of her trust! Just think about it as to how callously we rate a woman! She has to always be the one to comply! Even in the story Arnav did not confess and never intends to! But she should! You tell me which world we are in!

2.Jethwas and their status!

Most of you raise questions about how a royal family can be so short of funds! Guys I personally know many such who cannot survive if they do not work for a living! And the Jethwas were in deep financial mess and thats why Khushi got married to Arnav remember?... to save her home SeeshMahal!!!
Guys there are two ways be on the commercial side and be cash rich and be on the right side and live modest for the Jethwas! They chose the later else Khsuhi would have earned millions selling assembly and parliament seats! Even Arnav says that in one of the chapters!

Now Security! In countries like India!!! Can you ever imagine this kind of security? An ex-prime minister of the country was gunned down by her own body guards! Plus this is the country side where everything is bought by money as people are dirt poor!
Jethwas are not cash rich! Arnav is pumping money now and thats why Shashi is at a disadvantage! Plus now security is handled partly by government appointed security council again... infiltration is just easy!Thats what has happened now! How do you think so many attempts on life are happening without the police knowing! I personally went through a course of regulatory administration for which I was made to work with The Criminal Investigation Department and there I found that every single fact is recorded and is known! Both to teh government and the party concerned and since our state structure has loop holes they play around! Believe me... Every single crime is known and tracked and the culprits identity known by someone called aprofilogist... lets not go into that! What I mean is nothing happens without the police knowing it! nothing! Ignorance is maintained to protect Individual privacy and political propriety and gains thats all...

I Am sorry I am upset with the readers writing whatever they feel without even looking t the whole story! I doubt they read it at all! Sometimes and although I welcome criticism I cannot take distorted versions of my character doing rounds!
To be continued...




thnks for the note di...

but i think the very reader commented has just jumped on THE PURSUIT without reading MIRAGE...

and for me the story is perfect clear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I hav always said dis again i want 2 mention it Mirage n Pursuit r unique stories which has got everythng like a balanced diet every character ads spice to da story...i completly agree with u n a big thank 4 giving such a wonderful story.JAI HO WRITER SA KI
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Posted: 12 years ago
I can understand your irritation / frustration !!

But speaking of myself i am very happy with the pace of the story and really enjoy the updates !
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi di
very nice update
seem story is talking any dngerous mode.
or it is time for some romantic and intense twist
whatever i will wait for it like always
pls update soon
waiting
bye.

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Posted: 12 years ago
i am all okay with the updates di ... update soon

-sanchari
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Anu,

Read the last 3 chaps in one go!
and after a long time i felt ... we are back in action! i dont know if it was the entry of deeptimaan that caused the change or what?
but i felt happy reading the same...
I really really feel for maan! :( but is he gonna waste his life like this... i mean is it an easy thing to do? i cannot fathom such life! its so constricting!

okie ARHI... ouh nooo!! we are back to sqr1... are we?*sigh*
Arnva bituwa... i hope this time you shake her up completely full and final! this has to stop ...

Thanks for the updates!

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