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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: satana

atlas atlas there cum a terrific update frm u dear...u hav made it again inthz stry dear...nw u nt nly gud in writting comedy stories...also u r too gud in emotional part...i am just loving pari infinetly...nd geet wat she does s exactly ryt...ny nd maan desrves thz...poor geet..conti son dear...

Aww thanks babes😉 😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sri91

emotional update...
But i couldn't find any wrong on geet...
Felt too bad for geet...
Wat ll maan do..
Continue soon...

thanks dearie😉
ofcourse😆 😆 😆 geet s not on wrong side😕😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

that was nice

gud way 2 react
when they both behaved cruel to her
she must also behave lik ean unknown person
but dev n his worries made her speak her side of truth..
very emotional..
paris words were like needles pricking them
awesome dear


thanks di😆 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




little bit confused...

Geet really forget them or just pretending because she is hurt...

thank God she is alright...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


thanks dear😉
oops i confused u😕 😕😕
she is pretending
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rose.Mahek22

nice part


glad geet got her senses back

and is not gonna talk to maan and NT ...

hmm.. confessing her deeds to dev

waiting for next

thnx for pm dear

post soon

Thank a lot😆 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: valli30

emotional update

geet reacted to pari and she is fine know
she ignored maan and NT
but any one would have reacted in the same way maan has reacted
ok they deserve it and she is angry on them but jaldi se patchup kardo teeno ka 😃
eargely waiting for next part
continue soon

thank u😆 😆 😆
u wana patch up soon😲 😲
atleast wait fr 3-4 updates
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Posted: 12 years ago


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PART 20

Naintara and maan was shocked beyond limits..She didn't forget them but never wanted to realize them or react to them,..

How could my own sister be immune to my talks..Have i done such a deep cut in her heart??My chotti is not even ready to say me as jiji..She is mentioning me as her..Why she is not recognizing me but dev??

Naintara sank into the floor interpreting that now her chotti truly loaths her..Maan who was yet to come out of the shock that geet is not responding him saw his bhabhi falling down into the floor and rushed to her side..Dev who was hugging Geet saw the very same scene and rushed towards her side'

"Naintara Naina get up..Naina " dev was shaking her shoulders but her gaze was fixed on geet who by now has rested comfortably on the fluffy pillow and relaxing herself as if some burden is out of her heart after confronting her jiju..

Geet was acting so cold towards her which she was not able to accept..

"Bhabhi don't wry please" maan was comforting her but his eyes alredy teary from the ignorance of geet..

Nurse came inside and made them move out due to the noise ..As soon they are out..

"See the result of ur actions with ur own eyes..ur chotti the girl who you bought up is beyond repair..She is talking with me but not you..What made u act so heartless that she is broken this much..my love blinded u nah..Unacceptable..

Maan is this enough of geet's breakdown or do you want to give her some more punishment..where there any words you left out to scold her if so do that too she would be lifeless completely" dev said sarcastically and moved out..

It was evening when beeji and dadi came with pari to see Geet and give her food..Geet was sleeping due to sedatives and just opened her eyes'

As soon they entered the room pari tightly gripped dadi's hand to see geet with all those instruments still attached to her..Geet saw her scared face and flashed a smile towards her..

"If not for you pari I would not have returned back..there is nothing left for me to lead my life..I really feel bad to make u cry that much..i so much wish that u could not have loved me this much so that my soul could have long back drifted my body and reached my parents where may be I was allowed to be truly loved by them.." Geet's self thought was disturbed by a soft caress on her cheeks..

She looked up to see Dadi caressing her cheek instantly geet joined her hands infront of her

"Maaf kijiyae dadi..i have been so stupid to think bad of jeju and thought fr a revenge"

Geet's eyes were welled up again but dadi wiped those tears got hold of her joined hands and shook her head in a no..

"Now no more explanation or pleadings..i want you to be happy always dear..Dont stress urself'the mistake is on both sides ,lets forget everything and live happily" saying this she kissed geet's forehead..

Dadi was unable to see get in hospital such way..A girl who was so happy on realizing the truth s now hospitalized..She sat on the couch in the corner of the room and relaxed her hyperventilating heart on thinking of her elder bahu's and pote's act..

pari who was holding dadi's hand now got on her toes and sat beside geet..Geet let out a chuckle seeing the way pari is geeting on to the bed with those tiny chubby legs..

Beeji who was seeing the convo of dadi geet now made the soup ready and came to the other side of geet..caressing her hair she asked..

"Geet puttar how are you now??Are you having any pain??"

She didn't get any reply from geet instead saw her helping pari to sit on her lap..Pari throwed her arms around geet and kissed her face'.

"Maasi baby was afraid ..You know??" she asked cutely

"So masi's baby was afraid..y baby??" geet said with a little smile..

"Massi u were sleeping fr three days continuously nah..so oly.."

"Oh meri pyari se baby masi was dreaming about princess cinderalla.."Pari mouth opened into a 'O'

"ha ha now close ur mouth baby"

"Masi how was she looking like"

"As beautiful as my pari"

"Acha'but masi promise me you will not sleep like this anytime hereafter"

The little girls care n love made geet eyes welled up..

Beeji who was watching all this said " pari get down from ur massi's lap..she will be having pain"

Pari was about to get down but geet made her sit properly and said"how can I have pain pari..i had became resistant to all the emotions nah..thanks to ur mom ,beeji and ur so called chachu'" geet said with a smile and beeji realized geet is angry on them yet..

So she made geet face her by turning the shoulder sat besid her caressing her hair and said "Geet puttar am sorry'I never meant to utter those words..Come eat this soup.."

"Its high time u stop showing ur concern"

Geet with a stern look at her slowly removed beeji's hand from her hair and turned towards pari and said "pari baby did u have ur dinner?"

Pari nodded yes and said "massi from tomorrow ill eat with you..Today I was shho hungry" pari said keeping hands on her tummy..

"Oh my gud girl.. Now can u feed massi??..See massi canot eat nah??" geet said showing her needled hand with a sad face..

"Oh yeshh masi" pari got the soup bowl from beeji hands and started to feed geet..

Dadi was all the while a mute spectator looking at the way geet was hurt by beeji..And the way geet ignored her beeji..She could clearly see the worry lines of beeji but she could not do anymore because she deserves it..



Sry fr grammatical and spell erors😳

Continued below😳 😳 😳
Edited by Rami92 - 12 years ago
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Its been one week after that day and geet was still acting strange to beeji.maan and naintara.She never acknowledged them and the three now understood the irrepairable damage they have made to her..

They have tired cajoling her..Atleast if she listens to them they could cajol her but she never listens to them when they speak..It was decided that she would be discharged but it took a great effort from dev and dadi to make her accept to stay in Km'

Still geet was not able to walk she was using a stick to support her and doctor advised her complete bed rest...It was the next day she reached Km and she was walking towards dining area to have her dinner..

Dev was feeding pari who was sitting on the dining table..She was still angry on her ma and cahchu fr behaving rudely with her massi..And even dev was upset ,speaking rarely with them only when the situation arises..It was dadi who was maintain the house and consoling everyone when they feel bad..Altogether Km looked like a haunted mansion..

Geet sat in the chair and was having a normal talk with dev when naintara served her dinner'

"Naintara keep her more she loves to eat this aloo puri nah??"

"Haan beeji" smiling she kept two more puri in geet plate and said "Sinve you love this I myself made this Choti..You would eat like a ogre when I cook..Do you remember those days choti" nanitara fondly conversed with geet..

Geet moved the plate and shouted "Nakul kaka"

"Ahan geet baby am coming" nakul shouted inturn coming from kitchen and served her dinner which he prepared 'In the past 1 week of geet's stay in KM made her close with almost all workers of KM befriend her and they loved the childishness of geet and fondly called her geet baby..Only with them years after she was so care free..

Looking at naintara he said "sorry bhabhi geet baby was asking me to prepare the dinner and I couldn't deny her "

She just nodded her head saying him she is fine..Even dadi and dev was shocked by geet's act now..They never thought she could be this much stubborn but they couldn't say anything..Maan preferred silence with geet..After dinner of pari dev made her sleep in the room and came out'

Geet finished her dinner and was moving towards the room and slipped by the carpet and was about to fall.But before the fall she landed in maan's arm..

"geet could not you be little safe..what would have happened if you had fallen down..Can't you take someone's help" he shrieked on the thought of she getting injured..She balanced herself and removed his hands..

"Nothing much would have happened..there is nothing more to happen with me.. And I believe in this mere stick than to belive someone from here" saying this she was rushing towards her room but was stopped by beeji's voice..

"Stop there geet..What do you think on yourself..We are sorry for what we did ..But it does not mean u could walk on us..Here ur sister is trying hard to pacify u and ur insulting her and the same with maan too"

Geet who was till now showing her back to everyone turned and shouted in top notch'

"OH YEAH THEY DID THE CORRECT THING AND I AM DOING BAD RYT??WHAT THE HELL U THINK ON URSELF JUST FOR FEW DAYS AM IGNORING UR ELDER DAUGHTER AND IT PAINS HAN ???WHERE WERE U WHEN SHE SPOKE THOSE WORDS TO ME??U WERE STANDNG STLL RYT??NO NO NOT STILL U EVEN SCOLDED ME..

OH YA NOW SHE IS REPENTING I SHOULD FORGIVE HER??SHE IS COOKING ME MY FAVOURITES AND I NEED TO EAT IT?? I DON'T WANT ANY FAVOURITES OF MINE COOKED NOW..I ONCE LOOKED FORWARD FOR THOSE SIMPLE THINGS'BUT NOT NOW..THERE WAS A TIME I ACHED FOR A WORD WITH ME WHEN I RETURNED BACK HOME..DO U KNOW HOW MUCH I WAS LEFT TO FACE THE EMPTYINESS WHEN I RETURNED HOME FROM WORK??BEEJI HOW COULD U BE SO PARTIAL??AM ALSO UR DAUGHTER RYT??U WERE ALWAYS TENDING TO HER NEEDS..DID U EVEN SAT WITH ME FOR A FEW MINUTES AND ASKED ME HOW WAS MY DAY??DID U KNOW WHAT ALL I FACED IN THE SOCIETY??DID U KNOW HOW MANY GUYS APROACHED ME WITH A BAD EYE??"

By now geet was completely in tears her words were choking..Dadi came by her side "Shhh geet you don't have to say this..Go and take rest.."

"No dadi I cant hold anything more in my heart I want to vent them out..i could not be any more selfless..For once in my I want them to know what pain they have given me.."

Dadi simply nodded and geet continued..

"What were u doing beeji when I was working all alone,u were siting by ur elder daughter I accept she was not well but as soon pari born she was ok ryt??she started living her lyf by that time u could have spent some time with me??where were you beeji??even now u support her have u once asked her why she was rude to me on that day??Do you once said her hat she was wrong on scolding me that day" geet was shaking beeji shoulders..

Beeji bowed her head down nodding a no'

"But we love you chotti" naintara interrupted..

"Ha ha chotti???Who is it didu???Oh ya u once use to call me that way ryt???Where u calling me by that word for these many years. Ya u called me one day 'do u remember when was ut??It was the day u asked permission from me to visit hoshaipur to search on jiju..Was it my fault that I did not mention u about jiju..How could u blindly believe ur devar didu'Didn't u once think about me ??I was worried fr ur health didu..

I was thinking what if jiju would have remarried and would have betrayed u??U couldnot undergo that didu..i know u would break but as soon I gotta know about jiju love towards u I rushed to you??? but u blamed me???"

She was unable to control her sobs yet she continued.."Now u said u love me didu..Did I ever say that u ppl didn't love me??It was that u ppl love me but never considered me..never thought of my feelings,never considered my existence,never cared what would I feel,never bothered about me..U was the one who bought me up like this but don't u think that u should be there fr me always..Why didn't u cared about me fr the past years didu.the only thought u had was on jiju..What about me??did u know how much I was aching to having a sister chat with you??Where was our old days gone didu??U have entirely forgetten ur sister and entered ur own life didu..taking care of pari talking with beeji thinking of jiju was the only work u did..Not a day u sat beside and asked whether I was able to manage this biggest burden of life..not a single day u waited fr me to return home..Should not u kicked ur devar for using such cheap words on me..Am I such a cheap girl didu..??"

The pain she was suppressing for years had bursted out..she never thought she will break up like this one day'Naintara could do nothing than to cry.She knew her sister was aching fr simple things but they never gave her..They never treated her like the young girl of the house..She was been burdened..

Maan was standing still seeing geet break down in front of him..HE know knew the reason for her grief which he witnessed in her eyes..he now understood the pain she went through..He felt like stabbing himself million times for uttering those words to her.it had made a deep cut in her heart..They never realized what they have spoken..

"Geet it was in my anger i.."

Maan didn't complete his sentence geet stopped him by her hands..

"Am not gonna say naything to you maan..What will u do when my own blood did not believe me or support me..What I have to do with you??WHO AM I TO YOU??"

Geet asked him the same question as he asked her in the station..

"Geet please hurt me ,scold me vent ur anger on me but don't be this way geet" maan pleaded her holding her hands and taking her face in his hands.."

She disentangled from himself "No maan don't touch me am a b**** ryt??do you know what the simple five letter would mean a girl??do you realized the filthy stare I got back from ppl who was standing there when u said those'What I have got to do with you..Am sry fr involving u in my crazy revenge..Revenge saying this she gave a sad chuckle..that word doesnt have any meaning now..The one who is revenged and beyond repair is me..I have to Thank god for showing the love and care which ppl have around me..Thinking about the needs of everyone I was living my life but now I understood that I need to be selfish'"

"Geet please don't say these words..I truly Love you"maan again got her into his embrace..

"LOVE Don't give me any shit maan..Leave me ..I SAID L.E.A.V.E ME" hearing her roar maan left her abrubtly..

"LOVE..NO lover will accuse her lady love as gold digger or bitch but u did that..Was I the one flirted with u in the office??was I the one who asked pari to call u mausaji??was I the one who came to your room in the night..I said those words in the office bcoz dadi said me you were in true love with me and only I can make u professional and when u talked about responsibility I got my anger and uttered those words..Ya for those words I uttered I got my punishment.And don't claim to LOVE me..I DON'T LOVE YOU..Do you get me I. DON'T .LOVE .YOU" she said balancing herself by leaning on the wall..

"I'll understand if you don't love me. But I will be heartbroken. You are all I ever dreamed of and hoped for. You are much, much more. Please know that I didn't think I was mean-minded. But I realize I am. I don't want you to put your arms around me and say it's all right, that you forgive me. I want you to be sure that you do, and my love for you will last as long as I live. I can see no lightness, no humour, no joke to make. I just hope that we will be able to go back to when we had laughter, and the world was coloured, not black and white and grey. I am so sorry for hurting you. I could inflict all kinds of pain on myself, but it would not take back any I gave to you..Am sry geet .."

He said this and made his way to his room could not able to meet her eyes which has only hurt for him..

Naintara and beeji already left to their room..They cant accept the fact anymore..We will never know the effect of our doings until it hits our own face.. Dadi helped geet to go to her rrom and retired to her room..Dev was least interested to face anyone so he took his car keys and went out..

It was next morning and everyone resumed their job until they came to know a certain girl is missing.evryone were searching their entire mansion but all they could find was a piece of sheet in her room..

Jiju,

Am sorry.jiji Sry dadi...could nt stay any more here..Am going'Don't think ill end my life..it was given to me by pari and I don't want the little soul to be broken.Ill live somewhere with my pride and self respect attached to my name..

Pari ll not ask for me anymore..i have already talked with her..take care of her on my behalf..Kindly allow me to talk with her whenever I call her..The amount I have sved till now is in my cupboard take that and give to Mr.khurana for the stay I made here..

p.s.I am not a gold digger

Love

Geet

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Edited by Rami92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
party time 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳me first after so many days
amazing part
loved it
geet said all that was in her heart
naintara beeji maan deserve this
geet left KM
everybody shocked
Edited by preeti555 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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editd dear...

wowowowowowowowowowowow suchhh aaa big big big big walllaaa update...bttt...wi an update lik thzzz dear...reali it made me go lik thz :-(:-(:-(:-(:-(...happie in side tht geet has open up completly...so tht her burden has been lessen..nd reali had tears in ma eyes...she has been hurt reali bad...bt leVing rm...reali a mattr of thing which i dnt ever expect dear...hope soo all these things ll be sortd out soonnn...waiting up fr ur next update...

a scl thanks fr potraiting pari in such a many as v love...<3<3<3<3
Edited by satana - 12 years ago

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