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Posted: 12 years ago
Un'res

Khushi came outside at night wearin Tshirt without a bra 😲

She bit him hard!! Arnav has created a sex monster🤣!! She is frankenstine😆

loved them togather as usual...it was superb

now about the hicckey 😲

that was so unexpected!!!

Everyone knows he is seeing a girl and they are intimate

they'd never think it's khushi

If they ever find him with khushi they'll think he fooled around with her😲

I loved loved loved Akash here

Why did you make them know?

Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arnav's business acumen is gone for a vacation! I hope in thoda waqt his senses return!

This Khushi has become paagal but cute, now that she knows that Arnav-ji is in love with her! Hence she can't contain her happiness within herself nor the passion!😉

Arnav didn't even have pain killers and wants Khushi by his side even when rest of the people are crazily taking care of him!

Khushi feels bad she couldn't do anything to lessen his pain but doesn't realize her presence is more than enough for him!

I loved that pink on Khushi!😊

The mighty Arnav Singh Raizada is tongue tied for the first time in front of his family. How will he get out of this situation now?

Precap: Yes yes, jealousy is needed here!

PS: There is 'something' about this story that will keep me waiting to read further for the next 15 days! Hope all is well at your end!😊

PPS: Will miss the updates every alternate day!

Edited by Nexus_13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a fortnight without say??😭
how i m going to survive??
omg what an update farah di...
did u make it more special coz of ur leave??
i loved those cute romantic moments..and their making out..
a kiss☺️...shukar hai...2 weeks ise update ko bar bar padh ke guzaara kar lege...
di gonna miss say...
chalo koi na..😉
enjoy ur two weeks break...❤️❤️❤️


Edited by khushboo1234 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Farah dear sorry for late comments as I was away from net for some days

Read part 51 and 52 in one go and as usual you rock girl and loving the way arnav making khushi realize how much he loves her though he is unknown to the same.

Vaadaa Rahaa Sanam

honge Judaa Na Ham

Chaahe Na Chaahe Zamaanaa

Hamaarii chaahaton Kaa

Mit Naa Sakegaa Fasaanaa

Edited by clarissajohn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
A fortnight's break! How will we survive without SAY? Anyway, see you in two weeks. Have a nice time.
Loved the update. Loved the kitty bit. Khushi has acquired a new nameafter Red.
Khushi bit him and then the whole family asking about the hickey and the new girl in his life was hilarious.
The realization that Arnav loves her more as he tended to herwound while she didn't was lovely.
One thing I must commend you for is your taste in clothes. I just love the dresses you choose for Khushi. They are so beautiful be it a Hello Kitty pyjama or the lovely dress she wears in this update. I love it when you take pain to find pictures of these dresses and post them. This helps up to visualise the characters.
For he first time in his life Arnav is jealous of someone. The precap will keep us waiting and wondering through the next two looong weeks.
Edited by 1chilly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res for today

Sorry farah when I posted comment for last updates its is in the same page and without knowing that I reserved a spot. So this is for today updates

So what will arnav say who is the girl nannav

Im eager to know the answer you know

The way their relationship is progressing is mind blowing

About precap I think it high time arnav should try o find out answer and im scared as even if he recognizes he is in love, whether he will accept it.

Chup tum raho chup hum rahe
Khamoshi ko khamoshi se
Zindagi ko zindagi se baat karne do

Aankhon mein kho jaayein aankhein
Bole haatho se haath
Baahon mein chhup kar
Saason se jaise dole raat
Ungliyon ko ungliyon se
Mausmon ko shokhiyon se baat karne do😃

Nahii just read about your leave . jaldi aaao🥱
Edited by clarissajohn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey farah i hv no words for todays update!!!👏👏 its mindblowing...n as arnav n khushi r thr u hv made it sizzling hot!!!😉...i can undrstand it must b realy difficult to update every day...enjoy ur break...but do update as early as possible...as we all r so addicted to d story!! tc...


vibha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm so Humbled that you dedicated a whole chapter to me! Thank You so much. :)
I'm dancing in joy!

Thanks for the PM.

.. And did I say I'm completely overwhelmed?! :)
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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".. Bhoolne ki koshish ki, par bhoola nahi paaye.. "
- This line was a distinct shadow of the famous Telepathy conversation which Arnav and Khushi had during the Kidnapping track.. Yet it perfectly fits in this situation,as usual!

"1 KP.. 2 KPs.. 3 KPs.. " - This particular scene was infinitely sweet!.. And ofcourse unexpected for Arnav.

Khushi surpassed Arnav, in physically demonstrating their deep love, in this update! ;)
"For Khushi, this was the first time... secured in the knowledge that he loved her too and may be due to that added connection.. " - This line perfectly gave a clear insight to Khushi's psychology.

Khushi was wanton. True. But at the same time, it was more of her way of celebrating her new discovery.. that Arnav loved her as much as she loved him,if not more..
The fantastic thing about you describing their reactions to each other's touches was how intricately you described the feelings of Khushi at that particular moment. It has more feelings involved than just a random kissing scene at the middle of the night. It just makes it so real.

"Khushi sank her teeth.." was so,so unexpected..
Arnav calling her kitty because of her 'Jungli Billi' like way of loving him and his line "and to think , I actually made a fortune selling clothes to woman.. Unbelievable!" were examples to show that he has a very wicked sense of humour.. and definitely a sharp wit.

Arnav is acutely observant of Khushi.. He saw her fear of dark, with his eyes, when he found her looking here and there in the dark.

It must have been a sweet morning pleasure for Arnav to find Khushi in his house.
Anjali's sudden asking that whether the creep bit him also, was spot-on. :D

The description of Khushi comparing her love with Arnav's love was greatly written. But somehow, I feel that love shouldn't be compared.. It cheapens the very beauty of Love.
Arnav, inspite of surrounded by hovering "mother hens" fussing over his injuries seeks the solace of the one person who gave him a single bite.. This is so sweet. He is just so much obsessed with Khushi!

Akash saying that he deserved to punch Karan , and Rohan seconding his thoughts were Awesome. This proved that they can be fierce when situation demands other than being always the quintessential sweet brother and lover. Akash and Rohan's this hidden side surprised me,big time.

"Nannav! Mere bhai! Thats a hickey.. " and Akash's sudden Eureka moment when his doubts were confirmed made me roll on the floor laughing!

Khushi's way of correcting NK's "chaal" into "haal" , seemed ironical because she was the one for Arnav's hickey-wala "haal"..

So Akash keeps a keen watch on his Bhai. He noticed that small smile creeping up in Arnav's face and also didn't miss the smallest of the fact that, he wore a Prabal jacket and went somewhere,ditching the La Mode Wrap Up Party. Whoa!
So many facets of this reticent and seemingly shy brother of Arnav!

"This is interesting! Do tell me Arnav Who is the.. ermm.. affectionate girl?" - The first question that popped up is, Does Rohan suspects Khushi to be the affectionate girl?
Rohan's gesture and way of using the word "Affectionate" made me think that perhaps he is, a little bit aware of this.. Also in one of the previous chapters, Khushi had asked him about Arnav..
I always love reading about Rohan.. His character is a palette of all the shades of a balanced human being. Once, he is the fiercely protective brother who has a dangerous cold fury raging within, to break the jaw of the guy who dared to try ruining his sisters.. Then again in the same time frame he is a teasing friend , light-heartedly inquiring about his friend's latest date.. His act of throwing an arm around Khushi is so brotherly!
Despite being best friends with Arnav, he is starkly opposite to him. He isn't at all extreme but his every gamut of emotions is assorted out in a distinct way, which he displays them in the right time.. And this makes him so real.
The characterization of Rohan is so fabulous that sometimes it pleasantly forces me to wish for an elder brother like him!

I truly feel for Arnav. :D
He was caught off-guard in a rare "bechara" moment!! :D

The whole family is in for a shock, when they will find out that the girl whom Arnav is seeing, is Khushi..

P.s.- Khushi's dress was cool!
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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As soon as he came, Shyam has started popping his snake head in Arnav and Khushi's relation.. But I suppose his presence will effectively invoke another side of Arnav - that he can be jealous.
.. And as Khushi pointed out, it can do good and make Arnav realize that he is in Love!

(On a side note, this is completely a new idea - that Arnav is jealous of Shyam.. It is always shown that he is jealous of NK, by default.. But Shyam nah-uh! He always suspects Khushi in a wrong way when it comes to Shyam.)

Khushi is dropping hints here and there for him to realize.. But his "Harvard wali Dimaag" has suddenly become, dare I say, tubelight! :D
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago

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