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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jannat.Khadija

Waaao... Riaz Khan entry is sooo cool yaar.
Make Arjun soo jalous that...that... Wo jalke poora rakh ho jay!!

Haa...haa...haa...!!!

Jokes apart, vry nice updt Piya..

CONTINUE SOOON!!!


Thanks janat...
are ehsa mat bolo arjun ke liye...
phir mera or riya ka kya hoga...lolll he he ..just wait for today night
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Priya my dr...
dont say sorry..
exam r most importent then pther thinks so just chil..
n thanks dr
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: devildiva21

me again late in comment... 😳
its becoming my habbit now...😳
the update was superb...
abhi to riyaz ki entry just hui hai... aur arjun ka ye haal hai to aage kya hoga... 😆
movie name mast hai teri mehbooba meri... 😉 ekdum fit h arjun riya aur riyaz pe... 😆
awww arjun was tensed for her... loved his concern...
but ye alarm ka secret kya hai???
precap is interesting...
continue soon...

Thanks dr n its ok...
hum kuch to hai..just wait for coming parts...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Coming update regular nahi mil payenge bez of my exam-
Back with next part hop u like..thoda lamba hai..
plz bardash ker lena---

PART=21A
"Etane karib se pehali baar dekha hai..."


SCENCE-*present *
Arjun took alarm clock n stoped..before he do anything his mind again drifted in back memory..
the past which he spent with riya..riya arjun rawte his wife ups baas naam ke.
.
---
flash-
Arjun puts his both hands on the wall n he blocks her all possible way to escape from his hold.
.

he angry on her bez she hide the truth or even more she told him lied..
arjun leaned his face closer to her n looked her eyes as wanna to read his Q's ans..
Arjun pov-
why word stuck on his mind... whyyy..??
why ya shayad mujhe usne etana huk bhi nahi diya ke vo mujhe apni life ke fesalon main shamil ker sake..
Why..?
its hurt him more but he didnt know why..?
ye why ek paheli baan ker
reha gaya jise solve ker pana day by day mushkil hota jaa raha tha..
That was hurting him more..
.
Why she dont wanna to share her life with me..why she didnt say or told me once..
.
she can feel his closer presense..
she looking him without blinking her eyes..
The way arjun looked her..
the way he continusly stairing or may be lost her eyes..its realy tough for riya..to controled her heat beats..her chest moving up n down as she tried to controled her heart beat..
.
Arjun is stil angry on her..
he moves more closer to her as more as posible..
their chest almost rubbing..
.
they can feel or heared each other heart beat..
if arjun comes even more closer to her then Its tough for him to stay away..
their lips r just few inches aprat before his lips touches her soft lips he stop himself n stil maintaine his angry look..
.
Arjun hits his hand on a wall to wanna to controled or composed himself..
.




Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Riya fearly closed her eyes..

After few minute he spook-

Dont closed ur eyes riya ,looked at me..just looked at me he again hits his hand on the wall..
.
Riya feel his hot breath on her face..n his lips almost touches her..may be he is very closed to her..
.
Tumne mujhase jhoot kyun bola he again ask..Why riya..?
.
she feel scared hv no more guts to looked him..
not bez he is angry..she is scared the more closeness ofhis..
not bez she dont wanna his closness yes she madly wished..
.
her heart beat is moving fast n fast n fast with each passing seconds..
.
she breathing heavly but manage to speek..
Vo o vo ooo ar arju ..unn si..rr vo main kal ...Raat Raat mein..
She closed her eyes n spook in single breath..
vo main kal raat apko sab batane vali the per..
Ar-per kya riya..
She turned her face away her eyes is stil closed..as she felt shly..
her cheks change crimson red..
Arjjun notics her blushing face..
Why she is blushing..??
then he remind the reasion
behind her blush..
---
flash back scenc of riyaz movie-
Etf office lunch time-
Ch to riya-Riya tune kya soncha..
Ri-kis baare main..
Ch-kis baare main kya matlab kal raat to bataya tha riyaz khan ke movie ke baare main..
she makes sad face n say
Ri-chotu tujhe bataya to tha..
main nahi jaa paongi..
Ch-but why..?
Ri-mujhe nahi lagta ke arjun sir manege..
tum to jante ho unhen ye sab pasand nahi..
.
Are ager arjun sir ko nahi pasad thats not meen tu bhi nahi jayegi..
Shree shouted from behind..
n sit next to both..
Ch -yahi to main kabse samjhane ke koshish ker raha hoon ..per ye..
Sh to ri-Tujhe to riyaz khan bahoot pasand hai na..or tune abhi tak uski koe movie miss nahi ke to ab..
Riya-haan shree i m crazy about riyaz per arjun sir unse kya kahongi,
.
Sh-unse kehane ke jarorat kya hai shree said with smark.
.
Ri-Matlab




Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Sh-matlab i hv one plane..
Tu rathore sir se bolana ke teri tabeeyat thik nahi hai..
tujhe gher jaa ker rest kerna
hai,or chotu ne to pehale hi choti le rakhi hai..
.
tu gher jaa ker ready ho jana or chotu ke sath movie dekhane chali jana..its simple..
Ri-no way shree main arjun sir se jhoot kaise bol sakti hoon..
.
Sh-maine kab kaha to arjun sir se jhoot bol,maine to rathor sir se..
shree n chotu giv hify..
--
In conference room-
Arjun sitting as usal his fav chair n siping his cutting chai n rathore sit his side..
.
Riya hegitatly enters the Con room..
Riya comes near to rathore..
Rathore rolled his eyes up..
Kuch kehana hai..
.
(Arjun looking her with his corner of eyes)
Ri-sir vo mujhe lag raha ke meri tabiyat kuch thik nahi..
to kya main gher jaa..
Ofcouse why not..Rathore reply..
arjun stop sipping his chai..
n stood imediatly..
Riya r u ok..main tumhen gher drop ker deta hoon,
Ri-no sir vo main chotu ke sath chali jati hoon,vo bhi gher jaa raha hai..
arjun wanna to shout but controled..
jab maine kaha ke main dropker donga to..
Ra-rawte kya beker ki bahas ker raho ho..
chotu droop ker dega tum kaam per focus karo..
chuto n riya left together leaving behind warried rawte..
(loll riya kuch to arjun ke baare main soncha hota..)
---
Outside theater-
outside theater lot of male female fans r gather.
Riya was very excited ,she is jumping like a kids,
Waoo Chotu riyaz khan ane vala main first time use etane pass se dekhogi,
she weared short red sleevless dress,
jusrlt like doll..
.
Ch-just chil riya tabhi to tujhe yahan leker aya hoon ,he weared white sot..
.
he is also to excited ..
Riya lina bhi to hogi na..vo kya mast acting kerti hai..
.
One car is stoped-
Riyaz khan n lina car se bahar ate hain..
all fans shouted their name..
.
Ups ye moblie ke batery ko bhi abhi dead


Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

ho gaya she pouted her mouth ..ager es bich arjun sir ka phone aya to..
but vo mujhe kyun phon karenge..
vo to mujhe mis bhi nahi ker rahe honge..
She make a sad face,
Ch-riya kya huya..chotu put his hand on her shoulder,
she nodded in negative, give her smiles n said kuch nahi chotu..
--
on the other-
Arjun was restless n warried for her..
vo thik to hain na,achanak se riya ke tabiyat ko kya huya..
mor main to ekdam thik the..
he wanna to focus on work but all vain..
finaly he took his moblie n n pressed her no.
"the no u hv dailed is switch off plz tried after some time"
he cut call n again dialed..
he called her sixteen times but every times he got the same ans..
dam riya ka no switch off kyun aa raha hai..
vo thik to hai nai..
he wanna to go but shree comes n give him some files..
.
Sh-Sir ye kuch importent case file hai,ager aap dekh lete to..
arjun again sit his chair..n start his work..
but bich bich main he tried her no.
--
on the other both enjoy riyaz movies..
Ch-Riya movie ka promo kaphi interesting hai ..
Ri-riyaz khan kitana cool or handsome lag raha hai..
Ch-haan or lina bhi..
both-teri mehbooba meri dialog kitana soot ker raha hai riyaz per ...
both brust out with lough..
--
on the other-
Riyaz lina ke sath baita tha n riyaz ke pA (shiv) next to him..
Riyaz apni pA ko eshara kerta hai ke tum yahan se jao..bez he wanna to spent some private time to lina..
.
His pA smile evily n left there..
Riyaz slid his hand n hold lina hand in his hand..
lina givs him litle smile,
after few minute he put his hand around her back..
she feel uncomfortable ..
.
he leaned closer to her n wanna to kissed her lips..
but she pushed him away n give one tight slap..
.
how dare u touch me..she yelled,
U bi** tumhari etani himmat riyaz khan the superstar per haath udhaya..
ab dekha


Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

tumhen es movie main main roll kon deta hai..
he comes out fustrated to the theater ..
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on the other arjun coudnt
focus on work..
pata nahi vo thik hogi ya nahi..
i hop riya ne time per medicine le li hogi,or dinner kiya hoga ya nahi..
He again tried her no.
but again switch off..
Finaly he dialed landline no..
.
per koe phayada nahi..all vain ..
Ye riya phone kyun nahi uda rahi..
Arjun looked his wrist watch..
abhi to bus 9:30 huye hai,vo etani jaldy nahi soti ..
phir vo phone kyun nahi uda rahi..
kahi kuch gadbad..
arjun imediatly stood his sit n run toward parking area..
shree shouted from behind..
but arjun did not listen..
vo jald se jald gher pahoonchana chahata tha..
he drive his suv madly..
.
ohh shit sab gadbad ho gaye ager gher jaker arjun sir ne riya ko nahi dekha to..
Shree muttered..
shree imedeatly dialed riya's no but its swichoff..
so he dialed chotu's no..
--
Chotu -Riya hamen jald se jald tumhare gher pahoochana hoga..esase pehale arjun sir pahoonch jaye ..
both runs toward the parking area..
Sudenly she hits with somone..it was nonother then riyaz khan..
at the same time somone shoot riyaz ..
but bulet riyaz ko nahi lagti bez when riya hit him ,he lost his balance n fall down the floor..
riya give him her hand but before he hold..
Chotu shouted riyaa chalo jaldy chalo..
she left the riyaz the same posstion n goes with chotu..
(loll etana asan nahi arjun ki riya ka haath pakadna)
--

Arjun stoped suv outside his house without waisting any time he opened door with his key..
he run first toward his bedroom..
Arjun opened her bedroom door..
he is breathing heavly
Arjun runs inside n hug her tightly in his arms..
.
--
few minute before
arjun ke ane se pehale, chotu droped riya to her house..
she goes inside her bed room n tried to change her dress,
she open



Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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her dress ,so she opened her back zip..
but sudenly she felt somone hug her tightly ..
she wanna to push him..
But when she felt he is non other then arjun..
--
arjun tightly hug her his heart beat is stil ireguler Riyaa tum thik to ho na..
his breath almost tickeled her n his lips almost brushing her ear..
Arjun parted that hug n again n cubed her face..
Tum thik to ho na..
Riya's eyes becomes moist to saw lot of conserned for her in his eyes..
without giving her any times..arjun leand his face closer to her n kissed her,
her eyes widened n shock,
she stood there n arjun kissed her softly..
Arjun wanna to poured his all conserned n lv that he felt for her..
he moved his one hand
behind her back n pulled her toward him,n caressed her waist lovingly,
arjun moved his one hand litle up on her back..
n touched her bare skin felling his cold hand on her warmth skin,Riya gaspered n n arjun enters his toungue hungry n desperates for her...she saw his closed eyes and she easly saw lv. lv. n lv for her..
riya tightly closed her eyes when she feel his tougue inside her..
its gonna be tough time to controled herself..
she wanna to feel him..
soon arjun left her slowly as he felt her getting out of breath but stil holding near to him,
her cheeks become hot with shyness..
arjun again pulled closer n kissed her..
she held him for the support,
she wanna to respond him back..but the same time she feel scared..
She slipped her hand from his chest to his neck..
loll poor she her that action brought arjun comes to reality..
He imedeatly remove his hold but riya stil holding him..
Riyaaa..arjun shouted..
She opened her eyes n looked him confused experess..before she ask anything,
Arjun left there n goes imdeatly his room

fb end
in arjun office
arjun move away n left there
TBC
MAST YA BORE?


Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome this is simply great fantastic Ar-haad hoti hai lapervahi ke riya per tum...i miss this dialouge so much alarm raaj...
kya hai woh raaz update soon 😊thanks for pm ...ARSH

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