ARIYA FF:Kya yahi pyaar Hai...???(Thread two link add)

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Ar-Riya kuch chahiye tumhen..she just nodded in negative..
arjun show riya to her room..
yes her room..her seperate room..

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present-
SCENCE-ARJUN HOUSE
Arjun took one toy..that was he already brought for his child..
arjun house..
papa promise u that day baby but papa failed to protect u n ur mom..
tumhare mom bahoot achhi hai baida..
vo apke papa se or aap se bahoot pyaar kerti hai..
per mujhe nahi pata tha ager hum dono main se kisi ko choos kerna pade to vo mujhe karegi..
just bez to save my life..
but dont warry ..
i promise kuch nahi hone donga apko or apki mama ko...
He goes inside riya's bedroom..
n many past scence thinks again flashes his mind..
TBC---
Beautiful romentic ariya moment..
choree tease riya..
one good news...
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sorry jayada lamba ho gaya..
not find stop point
i kno i kno sad tract tha past main..
but no warry coming part is romentic or full of fun..
or present main bhi kuch hone bala hai...
mast ya bore jaldy jaldy batana..
plllzzz ab bata bhi doo..
etane nakhare achhe nahi..
verna hamen bhi nakhare karna ata haiii

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kgmu

@kgmu

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#412

read in one go

this update super se bhi uper tha

loved arjun concern for riya n her baby

story is moving in r8 track

u hav beautifully potrayed the inner turmoil of arjun

love it dear

last but not least

update soon

Edited by kgmu86 - 12 years ago

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

Loved this part... Arjun's concern for Riya nd his babay ws so touching... oh so Riya chose Arjun over their baby nd protected his life... continue soon

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

Awesome
so riya n arjun k shadi hi hi gayi..
Arjun care fr her n cute baby too...
The masii aaggrrr..
Uski toh aisi ki taise..

I wish dono bach jaye .
I cant see them like this..
N arjun ko dobara tute hue nhi dekh sakti...

Awesome , full emotion n tragedy.
Loved it.

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Krinal

@MissC

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Amazing update 😃

Arjun telling Riya's maasi that Riya is pregnant with his child was too good

The way Arjun married Riya was different but really nice

Loved Arjun's concern for Riya and their baby

You've wonderfully described Arjun's disturbance from the situation

What happened that Riya had to choose Arjun between their baby?

The story's getting more and more interesting in every update!

Can't wait to read the next part

Update soon 😊

Edited by krinal5chhayal - 12 years ago

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Shanafr

@Shanafr

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

Nice part piya love it thank you 🤗 and love u

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

me again late in comment... 😳
read both the updates together...
they were super duper...
part 61 was awsum...
it was beautifully written...
fb was awsum... loved arjun's concern for her... present scenes were very emotional... feeling sad seeing arjun's condition...
part 62
it was awsum wow...
finally ariya married... loved how arjun made her understand everything...
hate that masi of her... riya ko kitna kuch suna diya... achi bolti bandh ki arjun ne...
arjun feeling was very beautifully portrayed... his concern for riya and their baby was wow... loved his promise...
omg so riya sacrificed to save arjun's life... :o
was seriously wishing ki update khtam na ho... 😃 but ye stop ho gya...
but precap is very interesting...
continue soon... eagerly waiting for the next part...

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

👏👏👏

love this..

perfectly potrayed Both feelings..

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ashmi

@ashmifebaa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#419

Super update...
Arjun+riya=''kismat connection''...
Love these tooo part...
Wo tho sad hai, par so touching past hai...
Mera mann bi khushi aagayi...
Jaldi update karo naa...
And don't forget pm senting

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#420

hi piya🤗...read all the parts together😃😃😃😃😃😃... awesome yaar...too good so arjun took his responsibility...n maried with riya...😃😃😃😃😃😃😃...riya is so selfless😃😃😃😃...instead of all that happened she dont want to hurt arjun...😃😃😃 n the masi😡😡...achha lesson diya arjun ne usse😃😃😃 loves shree chotu's concern for riya...update soon