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Posted: 12 years ago

PART=10
"kehaten haii lakh chupaye dill ke baat..per kise na kise tarah samne aa he jati hai."


SCENCE-PRESENT SCENCE
IN SANJEVANY HOSPITAL

(sameer dragged ayesha outside the hospital)
.
Sam to ayesha-ayesha ye sab kya tha,or tum arjun se es tarah kaise baat ker sakti ho,
(ayesha in angry mood)
Aye-Kyun nahi ker sakti,esliye ke vo mere senior hain ya esliye ke vo apke dost hain,
(sameer peased his teeth)
SA-Ohh just shutup ayesha,
tumhare baaton ka arjun ko kya aser huya hoga..
vo pehale he riya or apne bachhe ko leker pareshaan hai,or uper se tumne...
Aye-per maine galat kahan kaha sir,aaj riya ke jo halat hai,kahin na kahin arjun sir en sab ke jimedaar(responsible) hai,
vo shultan to arjun sir ko marna chahta tha ..
per riya..
(not able to speek more),
ayesha tried hard to control her tears but not succed..
sameer put his hand on ayesha shoulder...
dont warry ayesha riya ko kuch nahi hoga..
(ayesha wanted one shoulder to remover her some pain..she hug sameer..)
Aye-sir vo thik to ho jayegi na,
(sam pathes her back)
Sa-dont warry ayesha riya or uske bachhe ko kuch nahi hoga..
aye-hop ehsa he ho sir verna i cant face my baba..i promise him ,i can take care her

(Riya n ayesh's father r good frs..n same riya n ayesha to,
when riya is only ten years she lost her all family..
so ayesha ke father riya ko apne sath le aye..but ayesha's mother not like her more..so she comlete her study in hostal..
n after that she shift in mombai n join resurch desk..very soon she is part of etf..)

Sa-ye tum bhi janti hoo ayesha esamain arjun ke koe gali nahi,hum officers hai .
or hamare kae dushman hai,
rawte to bus apna pharj (responsibility) puri ker raha tha,or riya apna,
Aye-realy sorry sir per main kya karti,riya ko es halat main dekh ker mujh


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Posted: 12 years ago

Mujhe maaf ker dijiye sir,
(Sameer stil hugging ayesha)
Sa-its ok ayesha ab hamen hospital ke ander jaana chahiye,
arjun ko es waqt hamari jarorat hogi,
Aye-voo sir voo..
sam-abhi bhi kuch problem hai,
Aye-vo sir apne abhi bhi mujhe..
(Sameer understand what she wanna to say n imedeatly remove his hold)
BOTH GOES INSIDE HOSPITAL
~~
Flash SCENCE
Riya stood in one corrner n tryed to wipe her tears that was continusly coming her coil black eyes,
.
(Shree n chotu goes there n saw tears in her eyes)
Sh-Ri tum ro rahi ho, kya phir se us samjhe samjhayo ne tujhe danta,
Dont warry ri hum hain nai,
Cho-Haan riya shree sahi keh raha hai,
tum to janti hi sir ke nature ko,
ek pal main kya ker dain kise ko nahi pata,
(riya wiped her tears n turned to face both)
Ri-guys tum dono bhi na, main thik hoon,or kisane kaha main ro rahi hoon,
Or vaise bhi, arjun sir ke liye main apna makup thode he kharab karongi,
samjhe ya samjhayon..
all start laughing..
riya left that place n goes washroom..
(but somthing is cook in shree's mind)
Shree to chotu-chotu hamen kuch na kuch to kerna padega es samjhe ya samjhayon ka,
Ch-yaan baat to to sahi keh raha hai shree,per mujhe to khane ke alava kuch samajh nahi ata,
Ye khane ke khusbo humm
kitani yami khushabo aa rahi hai,
(Shree in bit angry..act as arjun)
Haad hoti hai chotu laperwahi ke yahan main arjun sir or riya ke baat ker raha hoon,or tujhe khane ke padi hai,tumhara dhayan kahan hai,ager age se ehsa kiya to,samjhe ya phir se samjhayon..
Ch-sorry sir sirrr vo maine jaan bujh ker nahi kiya,kya karon khane ke khushabo charo taraf phehli hai.
both giv hiify..to kaise the mere acting...
Sh-anyway chotu hamen kuch to kerna hoga...or mujhe pata hai ke mujhe kya kerna hai..
(Shree explain his plane)




Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Sh-kuch samjhe ya samjhayon..
CH-Are waha shree kya dhasu idea hai,tera dimag to bilkul arjun sir ke tarah chal raha hai,Main to samajh gaya per ab arjun sir ke samjhane ke baare hain,
per mujhe ek baat ke dout hai,
sh-kon se baat chotu

Ch-yaahi ke kya rathor sir or arjun sir es baat ko manege..
Sh-bas to dekhata ja chotu..
--
IN ONE ROOM ALL ETF R TOGETHER DISCUSING ABOUT CASE-
.
Ra-Kuch samajh nahi aa raha bina kise ko pata chale hum apne case ke investigation kaise ker sakte hai,
Ar-rathor hamen kuch ehsa kerna hoga jisase sabhi ka dhayan..kahin or laga rahe or use bich hum sab ke room ke talashi le lenge..
(Loll gud luck for shree,he he waiting for one chance)
Sh-sir mere pass ek idea hai..
n looking in arjun's direction..
Ra-kuch bologe ya phir arjun ko he ghurate rahoge..
Sh-sir yaha engazement ka function hai..or gana bajana to chalta rehta hai..
to ager hall main dance program main bussy rahege to hamra kaam asan ho jayega..or es gher ke longo ko shak na ho,esiliye mujhe lagta hai,riya or..
Ra-or kya shree jaldy bolo..
Sh- humm vo sir ager arjun sir ko bura na lage to arjun sir or riya ko bhi use dance function main shamil hona..
(all limits r brock his paisence ,bit lout)
Ar-kya bakbaas ker rahe ho shree,tumne ye soncha bhi kaise,
Rathor take shree side..
Rawte shree thik keh raha hai,or hamare pass dusara koe option nahi,
n its my order so u dont hv any choise..
arjun left that room..but before leaving he once time look riya in bit angery mood..
(Shree n chotu comes near riya)
both says together -Riya baby now enjoys with ur samjhe ya samjhayon..
Ri-ohh shut up shree ,enjoy my foot ,dekha nahi kaise ghur rahe the..unka bus chale to mujhe khade khade he maar dale,or tum keh rahe ho enjoys...
--
all members searhes clue n riya n arjun attand dance




Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

IN HOLL-All house memeber, geust r bussy in dance function..
Waiter moving here n there..to serving dring n soft drink..
Arjun stood in one corrner..
but his mind is moving somwhere else..
he ming is driffted in his wedding function..
scence-
1-arjun mandap maim baida
n waiting for roshani,
2-he put jaimal on her neck n she to..
3-He took her hand in his hand..
lot of his n roshani's memory running in his mind,
He took sampian n sip ..
he hold rosh hand in his hand..n promise her
Ar-Rosh hamesha sirf or sirf tumse he pyaar kerta rahonga,
he comes out his past memory when he heared his name..
Ar-tum yahan..
Ri-sirr i m sorry main sach keh rahi hoon..ye sach hai maine ye kaha tha ke main shadishuda..per maine apka..
but this time he didnt say any think..
n wanna to left but spotlight fall on them..
(Ohh ab agali baare un dono lucky cuples ke hai)
arjun sip all his sampian..
n dragged riya to dance floor..
~~
PRESENT-
sameer n ayesha sit on hospital beanch..
n arjun stood near window..
Sameer stood n goes near..
Sa-kya sonch rahe ho arjun,
But arjun didnt reply..
rathor put his hand on arjun shoulder..arjun jerked with pain..
Ar-Ahhh.
Sa-arjun kya huya tum thik to ho na..
Ar-main thik ho sam,dont borther about me..
sameer saw his hand n feel same liquid..
Sa-ohh god khon ,eska matlab tumhen choot lagi hai,
(Nurse Nurse sameer caled nurse)
Ar-kahha na sam main thik hoon,
Sa-arjun bachhon ke tarah jid maat karo tumhen chot lagi hai,
dekhayo mujhe,
(there was a long wound on arjuns chest,the shirt is black thats why all fail to recogniesd his wound)
~~
flash-
Arjun took riya's hand n phushed her toward him,
riya looks im arjun's eyes,
his eyes fil with mix expression,angery some sadness ,Riya was confuse..
BG Song start,
TBC-
SO HOW WAS TODAY PART...


Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
me first to comment
lovely update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for any mistake..
i will update next part after watching arjun..
realy sorrryyy if i disspoint any one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
dissapointed not at all dear
it was as expected dance sequence is there waiting
and in flashback arjun is wounded wwhat hapn to him
lovely update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update... waiting for Ariya dance... Arjun s hurt nd bleeding nd he dnt evn notice dat... aww
Hey why r u saying sorry???? u dnt dissapoint anyone... continue ur writing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice.cont.soon.dii.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
y sorry!
ulta humhe aapko thank u bolna chahiye for such a good update!
waiting for Ariya dance...!
loved sameer and aisha scenes!
Arjun injured aur use feel bhi nahi hora...
loved the way u kept sis bonding between aisha and riya nice!!!!!!
waiting for next update!!!!!

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