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Moumi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Omg my god...
wow..love it dear...
Continue soon yrrr

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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~~PART=1~~~
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story basicaly depend on ariya's life..
all CS r same in arjun show..but in my story riya is also alive..n no aysha right now..future main keh nahi sakte..
its based on uncondional lv..

SCENCE-Sanjeevani Hosptial outside OT-
one man is sitting on the bench,closing his eyes..
n praying to god,
his wife is inside operation theater..n operation is stil going on..
~~~
Flashback-
it was first day of arjun in etf..
finaly Raghu sir convence arjun to join etf..
bez
(plz dont join this to show i will changes many things n scence..i just wanna to show how arjun n riya meet..but its similer as show)
his doughter is kidnaped by sultaan..
n arjun is only hop..so finaly arjun say yes to raghu sir..
Ar-dont warry sir apki baiti sahi salamat aap ke gher pahuch jayegi..
IN ETF OFFICE--
Rathor-dam it comissoner sir ko kya lagta hai..ham es case per akele kaam nahi ker sakte mumered to himself.
Shree-yr chotu ye sur ko kya huya,ye etana gusse main kyun lag rahe hai,
Chotu-haan shree baat to tu thik keh raha hai.
kuch to hai ye sir etana pareshaan lag rahe hai.
Ri-guys tum dono ye kya ker rahe ho,
jaldy jaldy kaam khatam karo ,verna sir ko to tum jaante ho,
Sh-riya tum he sir se kyun nahi poochati akhir baat kya hai,aaj se pehale to vo kabhi etane gusse main nahi lage.
Ri-guys tumhara dimag to thik hai hamesha tum mujhe he kyun bali ka bakra banate ho..ager tum dono ko daant khane ka shock hai to tum dono jayo.
Ra-shree chotu kahan maar gaye tum dono ke dono..
jaldy yahann ayo hamen comissioner sir se milane jana hai,
or haan riya tab tak tum paper work comlete ker ke rakhana.
Ri-ok sir
(Making sad face)
trio left for comissioner office.
Ri-|talking to himself)
rathor sir ko ehsa kyun lagta hai,ke main paper work ke alawa koe kaam nahi ata

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Riya taking deep breath n started his work..
Riya my dr apne kaam main lag jao,ager sir vapas aa gaye or tumhara kaam nahi huya,
to tum to gaye samjho,
pata nahi vo kon saa case haijisko leker sir etana pareshan hai,
riya talking long breath,n stated her file work..
after half an hours she some one in rathor cabine..
she stop working n put file on the table..
she took very light step..n marched toward rathor cabine,
she saw one man is searches somthing,
Ri-mind pov-
ye rathor sir ke absence main sir ke cabin main kon hai,or ye kya doond raha hai,
she took her gun n hold tightly in her hands n marched toward that man,
riya pointed gun n says
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Ri-tum jo koe bhi ho,es waqt rathor sir ke cabin main kya ker rahe ho,
koe hoshiyari karne ke sonchana bhi maat,ager hilane ke koshish ke to tumhare liye achha nahi hoga,
chup chap apne hath uper karo or meri taraf turn karo,
the man turn imedeatly n riya hv no idea when he sneched her gun,
Man-pehale gun to thik se pakadna seekho ,phir jaa ker mujhe pakadna,
riya wanna to snached her gun again,but she cant succed,so riya show him her jodo n karate..
Ri-riya giv one kick but the man hold in mid,she again move her hand wanna to give one punch..but this time man hold her hand tightly n twisted her hand from behind..n pulled her toward his..now riya back tuches his from bord chest..
Ri-leav me ,i say leav my hand,u dont hav any idea who i m,
Man-achha main bhi to janon tum kon ho,
the man tightend his grip
Ri-Ahh ,.hh leav me..samjhe tum ,tum bachoge nahi ager mujhe kuch ho gaya,main
ek etf ..
befor she completed rathor shouted from behind..
Rawte chode use..
ek din bhi nahi guya tumhen aye or ate he ladna shuro..
ager etf ke saath kaam kerna hai to apni ye saari adaten apne gher rakh ker ayo,
ab khade khade muh kya dekh raho ho..jise tum

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Jise tumne pakad rakha hai vo meri officer hai,
arjun remove her hand..
riya run toward rathor n start complaining arjun,
as a daughter complain her father about her bad frs..
Ri-sir thank god app time per aa gaye ,ager aap time per
nahi aate to pata nahi,ye mera kya haal kerta,
Ra-riya
rathor wanna to say somthing but riya did not giv any chance,
Ri-sir aap ko pata hai,ye adami aap ke absence main,aap ke cabine main kuch dhund raha tha,per kya ye mujhe nahi pata,
finaly rathor able to speek..

Ra-riya relex ,or ek minute chup raho,
Ri-per sir
rathor giv one sut look...n riya stop her talking,she rub her one hand using other hand..
Ra-ho gaya tumhara ager tumhara ho gaya ho to kya main kuch buloon
riya nodded her hand n look toward that stranger
he looks muderious in riya..
at any moment if he got a chance..then no one can stop his to kill her
so she move behind chotu ,just wanna to hide herself from both rathor sir n that unknow stranger..
chotu wishper slowly in riya's ears..riya ye kya ker rahi the tum..u dont hav any idea vo kon hai..
riya lift her eyes up to maintain her eyes level n ask chotu..
tum to ehse baat ker rahe ho jaise,ye koe acp ho,or aaj se hamare sath ese etf main kaam karengen..
Sh-wao ri tumhen to sab pata hai,
RI-what..? no ooo u just kiding na..
what r u doing guys..rathor shouted..
all says together kuch nahi sir..
i meen i m sorry sir..
rathor moves his graze toward arjun,
Ra-i hop arjun ke ab tumhen ek team main kaam kerna aa gaya hoga,or ager nahi aya to etf main kaam kerne ke baare bhul jana..
arjun stand there very quit n his cool style..with cros folding his arms across his chest
Ar-ho gaya ya kuch or kehna baki hai,
maine apna joining later tumhari table per rakh diya hai.
or behtar hoga ager ham en bekar ke behas ko chod ker kaam ke baat karen

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

So how was part one..
sorry if i bor acctualy i wanna to show each n very angle..
jise tarah show main arjun ke antry n then riya ke sath chemistry start huye the..but dont warry show ke tarah nahi likhongi...i will show u different sytle hop u like...
so plz leav ur comment its realy importent me to know..how was that part..
n i meen should i conti next
part or not...