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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorrryyy...
For late comment..
But ur update was fab...
I loved this virat...
Plz
plz
plz
continu soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haila...kyuuu? But u said double updt na...chal koi nahi do ur studies...bubye
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Haila...kyuuu? But u said double updt na...chal koi nahi do ur studies...bubye


i tell then i will updated...
But after some time... U read in morning...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Heniluvnia

Sorrryyy...
For late comment..
But ur update was fab...
I loved this virat...
Plz
plz
plz
continu soon...


thank u so much...
I will try...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaia99

virat is totally crazy for manvi.i love this virat a lot hope manvi also start to love him.plz zaldi virat ko manvi and viren ki truth bata do.


thank 4 comment...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update ... yeh pagal na jaane aab kya karega!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-16
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Virat turned back towards her angrily..
M-maine kaha na mujhe koi baat nahi karni..nd she again walked towards decorations..
V-murmuring-don't test my patience..
Maanvi come near to worker..
M-dekhiye..thank u so much ki aap meri help k liye yaha aye..lekin Hume aapki help ki jarurat nahi hai..aap sab ja sakte ho..
That designers looked at virat who walking towards them..maanvi followed their gaze nd saw virat come towards them..
M-waha dekhneki jarurat nahi hai..ye mera kam hai..aur main tai karungi ki kya kaise hona hai so ab aap jaiye plz..
V-koi kahi nahi ja raha hai..he said from back nd come besides to her..
V-straightly-tum log kam chalu rakho..to maanvi-aur agar koi abhi yaha se jayega to woh tum ho..chalo..nd again hold her wrist nd dragged her out of garden..
M-pulling her hand away-kya kar rahe ho chhodo..mujhe tumhari koi help nahi chahiye..chhodo mujhe..she try to not walked nd free herself..
he stopped nd looked at her angrily..
V-help to tumhe Leni hi padegi..chaho na chaho..aur Maine kaha tha ki mujhe kuch baat karni hai..he said with looking at her intensively look..
M-lekin mujhe koi baat nahi karni..jo chahe karlo..main tumhare saath kahi nahi ja rahi..nd try to pulls her hand back from his hold..
V-maanvi stop this nonsense okay..varna..he said angrily with passinote eyes..
M-varna kya?..bhoolo mat tum mere saath koi jabar jasti nahi kar sakte..aur nahi apni baat manvane k liye koi manmani..main tumhari koi private property nahi hu..she said angrily but in low voice..she was tiered from his pagalpanti..she want that he leave this all nd moved on his life but she didn't knew why but he was not ready for that..
After hearing all this virat got more angry..he pulled her close nd bent himself little down nd picked her up by her stomach with his sholder nd hold her one hand around his neck nd his one hand holding her on his sholder..her stomach leaning on his sholder..like she was hanging on his sholder..
M-surprisely-virat..kya..kya kar kya rahe ho..she try to jumped down but before that he starts walking..she try to pulled herself down nd free herself but no work..he was walking he cannot affected by all this..
M-try to hit him then he loose her-virat..kaha le ja rahe ho..niche utaro mujhe..
But he ignored nd walked towards store room which filled with decorative stuffs..
He opened the door nd walked inside nd make her stood on her feel with jurk..
Maanvi feel relief nd looked around the room nd saw he moved towards to door nd abt to locked the door..she scared nd rush towards door..
M-try to pussed his hand from door-virat kya kar rahe ho..chhodo..
Virat angrily locked the door nd hold her both wrist nd pussed her back..with this she stepped back..nd then he pulled close nd pinned with door nd sticks her hands with door hear her head..she didn't calculate the whole scene nd within second he come in front of her..just little away..maanvi who closed her eyes with sudden action opened her eyes slowly nd found him staring her passinotly nd intensively..she scared as he come close to her face..
V-main kya kar sakta hu ye tum achchhe se janti ho..aur meri baat manne k ilava tumhare paas koi option nahi hai..he said angrily..
Maanvi gulped as he come close to her..
V-aur kya kahe rahi thi tum?..haa ki tum meri property nahi ho..come more closer-property ka to pata nahi tum sirf meri ho..sirf meri..
She froze there with his hot gaze..
M-hardly say-mujhe Jane do..
V-smile in anger nd leaning close to her ear-jab itna darti ho to mujhe Asi harkat karne pr majboor kyu karti ho..nd starts rubbing his face in her hair..
She try to move her hand but he tighted them with behind door..
M-feel shiver inside her every cell of body-vi..virat..
V-smile-lekin koi bat nahi isi bahane tumhare karib ane ka moka milta hai..nd moved his hands from her hand nd hold her by waist nd pulled her close..she imigeatly placed her hand in between them on her chest nd try to puss him back..
V-pulls her close nd digging his face in her neck-aur tumhe chhune ka..
Maanvi feel week in front of his action..she breathing heavily..
M-virat..chh..chhodo mujhe..
V-kyu?..main to sirf tumse baat karna chahta tha lekin tumne hi to kaha tha ki chahe Jo karlu meri baat nahi sunogi..he said passinotly with nuzzling her skin..
M-she feel his steps going to up-tears slips from her eyes..she scared by his intention-achcha..ab main main sunnugi..plz ruk jao..ahh..she scream little as he tighted his grip around her waist nd pulled her close..
V-with nuzzling her earline-pakka..?
M-tight her fist who was on his chest-nodded in yes-haa..
He smiled nd kissed on crook of her neck..she tighted her eyes nd bit her lip..she shiver badly with his kiss..she skipped her heart beat at that moment..
He smiled nd move back nd moved his hands away from her waist nd take just one step back..he looks at her stood in froth of him..maanvi feel his move back nd opened her eyes nd saw him front..she stoped back nd pinned herself with door..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yesss im the first...
Pleasee continue soon..
I really cant wait for your next update..
This update was good yaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
ab isse kya baat karni hai ...
manvi shudnt be soo weak infront of him ...she shud be strong ...
really awesome update ...👍🏼
pata nai kya baat karni hai ...

update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb updt...virat kissed her...awww...cont soon

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