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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda


Wow yaar awesome update...

Too good yaar...
Pleasee update soon...
I really wanna see Virman romance with the same passion from Virat for Manvi... Pleasee dont change our Virat...


thank u so much..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: manvilover18


interesting precap plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update soon waiting...


i m updating in some time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb precap kushi...omg...angry virat...eagerly waiting for the update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Virat ne aab iski pitayi kyun ki?? Eagerly waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-14
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Maanvi make sameer to went to school bus nd hurriedly reached at hotel in texi..she reached at hotel nd meet to everyone nd starts working..nisha already reached there nd working for mahendi function..maanvi joint her nd make everything prepare..she still thinking abt virat nd also abt sameer nd her convo in morning..she secretly looked around for him..she come to knew that he was not there..he went out for some work..she take relief breath nd starts working easily..bcz of its ladies function no men are present there..she finished mahendi function nd come out from hotel for some work nd talking with someone phone abt some work related to marriage saremony..haldi saremony starts after some time..bride go for some rest nd fresh n up..
She just walking towards parking where some tempo drivers waiting for her..she come at themwith nisha nd talked with them nd told nisha to takes all stuffs from them nd transfer them in marriage hall with help of workers nd pay to the driver..nisha nodded nd again maanvi walked toward marriage hall before haldi saremony she has to complete all decorations in marriage hall..almost all preparations are done but some flowers are not come yet which she want for decorating the mandap..so she was waiting for that..she abt to walked towards checking huldi saremony preparation when she suddenly stop nd saw her car stood in front of parking line..its looked different..like someone make her clean nd polish..she hang up the phone nd walked towards her car..she reached at her car nd saw one white rose on car with her car keys..she picked up the keys nd rose nd understood that who was he..virat..she put rose on car back angrily..just then she heared him..
V-pasand nahi aga?
She imigeatly turned nd saw him behind her..she get surprise to see him..this time he didn't looks as he looks always..he looks little worried nd sad..
V-with weak smile-bola na..pasand nahi aya?
M-confusing-in mind-why was he so cold?..what happening?
M-she gave him confusing question look by raising her eyebrows..he understand what she means..its strange that without any relation or commitment they mostly understand eachothers changing behavior..
He finally gave up nd come in his real attitude nd certain look..
V-woh..mujhe tumse maafi mangni thi..i..i..
Maanvi saw him struggling with something..
M-maafi kis liye?
V-woh..looks down-main nahi janta ye kaise ho gaya..maine use thik kar diya hai lekin phir bhi..nd he closed his eyes..i..m...i m sorry..finally he said..
Maanvi surprised..why he saying all this..
V-bas ek minute..nd he looked behind nd indicate to some one to come forward nd again looked at her..
Maanvi moved little nd saw one man walked towards them..she get confuse nd surprise..he was her one on best artist to decorat the mandap nd she was trying call him bcz she needed him bcz of decoration..the man reached at them nd stood their..maanvi get worried to see him..he was injured badly..his hand was broken nd his head also bandaged nd some other injuries on his face..she also saw that he was scared..she cannot get the situation..just then she saw him secretly nd hesitatly looked at virat nd imigeatly looked down..she turned towards virat nd saw him looked at that guy with deadly angry looks..she getting worried..she again looked at man nd she can saw that he was damm scared nd shivering with virat's gaze..she imigeatly looked at virat..
M-shocked nd worriedly-ise kya hua..aur ye chhote kaise lagi?..virat kahi tumne..lekin kyu?
Virat try to control on himself..
V-angrily looked at man nd gave him same deady look-tumhe kuch kahena tha..he whisper with crussing his teeths..
Maanvi looked at them surprisely..
Man-damn scared-mem..woh..plz mujhe maaf kardijiye..woh galti..galti se aapki car pe saman shift karte hua mujhse ek chhotasa screach pad gaya tha..i m sorry..he said with looking down nd shivered in front of him..
Maanvi understand whole situation..she feel bad for him..suddenly she heared sound of slept..her eyes gotten wide as she saw virat hit him..
M-virat..she shouted..
V-holding his collar-chhotasa aur galti se?..akhe nahi thi Jo itni badi car dikhai nahi Di..he said more angrily like abt to kill him..
M-virat leave him..now..she shouted..plz chhodo use..
Virat heared her..nd threw him away..
M-to man-tum jao yaha se..abhi..nd he left..she knew this time if he stood near him..he make him broken to see his anger..
She heared him..
V-try to calm down-woh..tum chinta mat karo Maine tumhari car thik karva Di hai..us par ab koi screach nahi hai..
M-turned towards him angrily-tum samajte kya ho apne apko?..kyu mara use itna?
V-angrily-usne tumhari car ko khrab kiya tha..kaise chhod deta..
M-frustrate..with anger-virrrat..ek car k liye tumne use itna mara..pagal ho kya?..kya use marne se sab thik ho jata..ho sakta hai galti se ho gaya ho..aur tumhe pata bhi hai tumne kya kiya hai..tumne mere best worker ko mara hai..ab main apna baki ka kam kaise karungi?..pura mandap wohi decorate karne vala tha..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Virat ne aab iski pitayi kyun ki?? Eagerly waiting for the update


read the update...
U will knew...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alicemath

Khushi jii...plzzz update soon...plzzz!!


hey...
I m just 21...
Jii? Sounds weired...

I updated..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yaminnthida

superb precap kushi...omg...angry virat...eagerly waiting for the update...😊


thanks...
Nd
i updated...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh good Virat is totally crazy.. Manvi will be more worried now.. I guess Virat will help her to decorate the mandap.. Loved the update.. Thanks for updating Khushi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
😆 Virat kya yaar ek chote se scratch ke liye bechare ko itna peet dala
Mujhe laga its sumthng serious 😛

Virat sach mein pagal hai
Bt i also find this sumwat cute😛
Dunno manvi iss pagal ko kaise handle karegi

Nice update khushi

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