Vignettes - 17. Metamorphosis - Page 3

Res...will come back later to wax lyrical on the update..
Wow...such an lovely update.I really like how you depict the closeness and atoot vishwas of Arnav-Khushi relationship.Also like how you involve the entire Raizada household in your story...be it Anjali di, nani or even Laxmi.The evolvement of Arnav and Khushi while retaining the inherent innocence and jhalliness of Khushi and the ruthless business persona of ASR with the besotted husband is what is remarkable.Keep it up Aparna...will wait eagerly for your next peshkash..

lovely update

Originally posted by: abavi

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Aparna, the moment I saw you online on a sunday, I knew you are gonna update... I was right wasnt I😉

Hunny! you did it again... This was much much much better than the track that the CVs adopted to show us that Kushi bitiya can be very much Kushi- and still go and prove to the world that she is Mrs.ASR...

I loved this update- because this was what I had been telling when I was seeing the Mrs.India track... They wanted to show just the same.. But ended up irritating a lot of viewers- I kept telling my other friends there- there is a lot of potential for the track to win if they adopted Kushi to sophisticate herself and host parties for his clients- And now you bring it alive with your narration...

Wow girl!

You pull in Akaash and Payal as much as possible.. Liking it!

I have told you before, I am telling you again, I appreciate your way of suggestive writing- I am not comfortable with writing explicit romantic stuff... that has to be left to the reader to imagine... that will eventually appear more romantic when we let them imagine things than to explicitly tell them - this is what they did!

Hey I am improving aint I? such long comment- for the first time for a OS!

I am putting in a "ditto" for Abavi's comments as she practically said all that I wanted to say. Loved the transformation of Khushi into Mrs.ASR and loved the way you have penned it down here. And loved the way Akash and Payal are still there and they are the perfect foil to Arnav-Khushi. And rest all abavi has already said it in the above comment.

Awww this was so cute! She may be Mrs.ASR for the outside world, but she was still the old Sanka Devi for him and the family, after all, he fell in love with that very sanak, didn't he?

Loved it Aparna :)

mann this is herat touchingg. :)

Such a lovely OS, everything was portrayed nicely,Khushi wanting to change herself but not in the way society demands, but in a way that she can make herself as well as her husband happy. Payal also joining forces was great and finally both the sisters were able to surprise their husbands😊 when Anjali disclosed what led to the transformation of his wife he only thought that he might have unintentionally made her feel like she should change herself to adopt to the high society but that was also cleared by his sweet wife itself. You convey the love and the understanding between the couple very well and not to forget other inhabitants of the Raizda house are used much more better than CV did!

just awesome! fantastic😃😃😃. fabulous writing as always. didnt expect anything less from u😊😊

As usual lovely nd beautiful :)

That was a wonderful Vignettes! She kept her khushiness alive, while being the perfect Raizada!