Arshi SS: Hidden Meanings Thread 2# Epilogue pg13

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Barkah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

I loved the epilogue...
Happy ending...
I hope you will come up with another great story 😊

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Iru...I know I'm very very late so here goes the long comment 😃

Ok I am going to comment as I go on with reading the chapters.

Prologue:

It sure is interesting...Khushi's character is lovable. Varun is your typical college boy' the fact that he is stupid is a loss on Khushi's part. You made SRK Khushi's Dad? 😆 Iru sorry, but I have to laugh upon that...but you are the author..and as an actor I'm sure you have given some thought before thinking of him as the character. Arnav...well, he is the silent types with a mystery as well. you had me when you said in search of a person . I'm sure their lives are intertwined.

P.S. I love the banner.😊

Part 1:The usual banter between two love birds...but what do I see...someone keeping an eye on Major Anand's family? Who could it be? And the introduction of a stoic Arnav. What next? off to read...

Part 2: So Khushi's father is protective of his daughter…who wouldn't be? And Arnav had a teddy bear… I smell something fishy in here. I guess Arnav is a secret agent on a mission to save someone…but for that I shall have to re😕ad the next chapters.

Part 3: All seems hunky dory…but as the chapter ends, you leave us with a cliffhanger…people with knives attacking Khushi? 😲

Part 4: Arnav's the knight in shining armour…but who's Ananya?😕

Part 5: Rohan's the villain…haw! Yeh main kya padh rahi hoon Iru?

Chapter 6, 7,8: Arshi's first convo, Bunkilal (Lolz) the dramatic save by Arnav…straight out of a Bollywood movie. And then the rabba ve moment..aww!😳

Chapter 9, 10: Introduction of Ananya…I'm glad you're doing it in parts...helps to keep the suspense. And Arnav talking with Khushi's Mom was interesting. You also cleared the doubt about the teddy bear.

Chapter 11: That was sure a curveball that you threw on us; Sumith is also a villain? And killing his own daughter…he sure is wicked.😡 The Arshi interaction was heartening. The nail enamel praise was a LOL worthy moment😆

Chapter 12 A and B: Intense fight scene and the subsequent lovey dovey moments.😳

Chapter 13: Rabba ve! Could anything be better than that?

Chapter 14: Prom night! And the confession was much needed too but how will it proceed further?

Chapter 15: So Arnav's finally come to know the truth about Sumit…hmm; over to the next part.

Chapter 16: You killed Arnav😭…I haven't read the epilogue but I'm hoping that my conclusion is wrong.

Epilogue: Mere jaan mein jaan aagayi😃..Arnav's hale and hearty..all's well that ends well.👏