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You're such a sweetheart!! Aww, love you!
*sigh* The chapter *sigh was so *sigh* GOOD! 😆
I mean, of course, there are so many people writing about ArShi getting together, going on dates et cetera, but you make it all sound so real! It's closer to our everyday lives, I mean, I can place myself in Khushi's place, and that makes it so much believable and all the more enjoyable... I love how you use the little flashbacks.. Just simple, small instances, but they carry meaning. And again, something that must have happened to many of us.. You happen to know the hot guy and the friend goes *Facepalm*! *wink*
And that little muddled answering-the-question bit was adorable! Oh, Khushi's such a lovable mess around him!
And the kiss! Oh, the kiss! More of them, please. :p For a first date, it was really nice. :)
And off to bed you go. Rest, and take care.
Love,
Mav
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