The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21! - Page 53

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
congrats for your results
it was really emotional
loved the way how sameer and mr rawte threatning the doctor
riya lost her memory...she forgot the loving side of arjun..she is nw scared of him nd he's heart broken seeing her like that
poor ariya feel bad for them
precap sounds interesting
thanks for the pm
continue soon
can't wait read the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congraaats for the results my dear...!!
👏
And the update is,as usual aweeesome...!!!
Loved every word of it...
Each time I read your update,I forget everything else and its only the charectors in my mind for a few days...
That's the magic your words are creating...
Keep up the good work...!!
And the way riya was scared of arjun,ts really sad...
Hope she will gain her memory soon...!!
And btw,what tool you were mentioning in the surgery part...??
We ppl usually cuts the body structures around the bullet and pulls it out with an artery forceps if its not deep...
And the case is different if it has penetrated deep into the body...!!
And the surgery is done under general anesthesia and the patient is usually intubated and will b already on mechanical ventillator support...
It would hav been more convincing if his heart rate dropped during the procedure...and medicines were given to stabilise the heart...
As I am from the medic side,such points caught my attention...and these r only suggestions dear,I respect your efforts as a writer still...!!!
And please do update soon...!!
Waiting is the hardest part...you know...!!!


And thank you sooo much for the pm...!!!
Edited by mithramahi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally i came across this ff, it z really best one of ariya ff . am very new to this IF, and i didn't read much stories
but this z the best one i came across. thanks for the pm , thats y i come to knw about this ff
and read it in 1 go ,i don't knw hw to say how much i liked this ff ur writing, i can't really xpress in my words,

upto chapter 2

i love Riya's character. Riya's selflessness ..
Always helping others. But she is strong too. After what Arjun did to her she still love him.
Even she was drugged she calling Arjun sir!!!!
amazing
Arjun he was so too rude to her but but y?why should he be so harsh to her.wanted to slap him wen he misbehaved with her
He does care for her.Even she is drugged she calling Arjun sir

chapter 3
i felt sorry for riya...i feel like to kill sik
the way riya confessed her love that too in her worst state...and arjun's concern,
left tears in my eyes
amit z too nice

chpter 4
riyaaa, i don't have words to say, after all thease things happen to her she still trust him and she said that
"I knew you would come to save me,"
and arjun taking care of riya, thats so sweet,


chapter 5 and 6
Vidyut Jamwal as "SIKANDAR" ...wow i also lov him
2nd time arjun go through all thease, poor riya and arjun's helpless
oh,Sikki talking abt roshni...nw i understood y arjun rudely behaves with riya, feel bad 4 him

Feeling really bad for Riya hw she scared $how much dat incident have affectd her mentally
still she trust him blindly...love her charactor

chapter 7
arjun guilty 4 wot he had done 2 riya,
atlast team got a clue,
hmmm dekhte hai kya hoga future mein
riya mrng work without any noice so sweet of her and once agin shows hw much she cares for arjun
ariya romance in kitchen ...wow!!!superb..
chapter 8
loved amit's antics and cute dialouges
"Exactly! The lion's den!"i loved this response of amit
ha ...ha.. she is comparing herself with arjun and he caught her on doind that
it was very nice, really riya z too too innocent

etf finally caught sikkander, now hope riya wil be back in safe soon


chapter 9
the scene in plane when arjun ask pilot to take his cloths was good,and sikender,i wanted 2 kill him,
arjun and kaka's bond was really good and loved it,
and feel very sad that after so much effort they couldnt found riya. any ways overall it was awesome update


chapter 10 & 11
Arjun actually said sorry to Riya... she was so surprised...
amit & his broken tooth...he z so sweet
riya hurt herself oh noo...




i don't get the access to chapters 11 to 15😭😭,but still i read the remaining 2 chapters, can't help with my curiosity


chapter 16

hhho, sikkander,bohot chalak aadmi tha , hw he tricked with a body double
and finally arjun killed sikkander, so relieved, butariya both hurt too much riya mentally hurt. and arjun physically too
riya lost her memory too . ohh so much complications
it was very much tensing one

chapter 17

feel sad for arjun , he wanr=ted to go to riya but she z scared of him,
both are cared for each other, and riya z scared of him , and arjun can't do anythng
their helpless conditions,,,,,,feel really bad

riya z believe in arjun that if he was there nthng wil hapn 2 her. loved it
he can't even tell the truth, wot will he answer about she don't having any injuries

waiting for nxt update
👏big clap for ur writings
🤗🤗big hug for the pm
thank you so much




i really wanted to read the chapters i missed which are in blog,
i don't even knw what to do, am new to blog actually,
i requested for the access there, plz add me too
anu931331@gmail.com
z my email id
i don't know actually wot i should do in blog so that i get it,
so plz help me


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Posted: 12 years ago
sry i was a little late in reading so late cmmnt well thnx 4 d pm dear n d update was superb...! Haash ariya finally survived bt poor dey arjun in so much pain bth mentally n physically n riya she only remembrs d bad side of arjun shit...bt i hope she'll soon get 2 see d lover boy side of him n precap seems interestng even aftr riya forgot every thng bt dis nightmares dosn't leaves her mind. Hope everythng gets f9 early :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing muskaan...!!!
very emotional update indeed
poor arjun...he was in so much pain
ria forgot everything after her marriage..!!!
now real test starts for arjun how would he b able to take care of her wen shez so afraid of him..!!!
very well written..!!!
please update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Muskaan...Finally u back...
N Congratulationz for ur ersults...May GOD bless you always..

About the uipdate..
Well as usual fabulous awesome update...
Aww Riya lost her memory of the loving side of Arjun n there sweet moments...Soo sad...
But Arjun is there then y fear..😆...
Arjun was in so much pain😭.Felt bad for him...
Riya got scared of him but then her innocent questions ..that was soo sweet..
In this condition she was soo concerened about him...But Arjun cam't do anything on that tym..He was helpless...
In short evry scnee as awexomely n brilliantly written...👏
Hats off to u..😊

Update Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear
just read the whole thing in one go...u won't believe but I came across this ff at around 10 pm at night yesterday and just to finish it off...the itching curiosity didn't let me sleep till 4.30 in the morning😳...and its only and only you to blame for it...u r one hell of a talented writer with the capablity to grip ur readers. I was stuck to this story like a glue...it was only because my head was paining by morning that I had to sleep without commenting at the same time...but I m doing it now...par yeh kya yaar...u have omitted five most important chapters...and it made me literally mad...gosh, I read five pages of comments to know what exactly happened in between so that I could relate to the 16 and 17 chapters.😆
okay coming back to the story...first of all amazing plot and very meticulously framed and written...every chapter...every scene...the flashbacks and present were blended beautifully, never making you feel anything lacking👍🏼...secondly, the characters...awesomly carved out characters, positive as well as negative...I mean...I actually got enraged at sikander without knowing exactly what he did with riya, but I got some hints through the comments of others😉( me smart, huh😃)...sameera and amit are the two side characters which u brought out wonderfully...I could feel the innocence of amit around riya and arjun and the brotherly love of sameer was so beautiful👏
okay, so finally coming to the two major positive characters...arjun and riya...well arjun was very appealing as the angry young man type cop...agressive, ruthless and somewhere in the starting( until his pov was introduced regarding riya) animalistic...was spell binding. I just thought...whats your problem, dude...??...I mean is he blind to ignore riya like that, but then when arjun's feelings were highlighted, I was like AWW...I felt so bad that he couldn't express his real feelings to riya before she fell into the hands of sik....all in all a true macho😎.👏
riya, what can I say about her...she is adorable, bubbly...sweetest and most lovable person in the whole ff...even more than amit. her child like innocence and aptly described softness inside out was the crux of her character. she is like the complimentary other half of arjun in literal sense...a simple yet gorgeous girl with so much love for her husband was something out of the world...very beautiful character🤗
n the one only villan...sikander...gosh, I have never...never dfelt so much hatred which I felt for him in the movie force, when he killed that first officer and his girl friend in their group so brutally, I don't know why but from that time I am a bit prejudiced towards this man in the cruelty department😆, so u had a upper hand there😉...but I could imagine by the comments that he was no less here, so I guess u get 10/10 there for his character👍🏼. but I have a small tiny miny complain...why did u let him abuse riya like that infront of all, I mean I wanted him to be thrashed so badly...some what like john did in force...( use kahin tangwa deti😈), but nonetheless, very strong character😊
okay, I guess I have blabbered a lot here😆, but Ican't help it...I feel like talking to someone ...u know sharing this story...so what best than the writer herself😉...hats off to u gal for ur lovely work...do keep writing like this👏

dia

P.S.- if possible plz provide me with ur blog invitation so that I can know the extent of sik's sickness and curse him some more😆...but seriously, I would love to read it fully.
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is awesome update bechare ariya felt bad for them she is so innocent juno ne pehle jo bhi kiya ryu ko woh sab yaad aaraha hai(i mean the juno which hated her & forcing himself on her),Arjun realized she remembered the dark side of him. But not the side of a lover.Riya looked at his eyes, so full of love.. But then the crashing memory of his harsh words came into her mind, STAY AWAY FROM ME!! She remembered him shouting and got up and flinched back fearing he would get angry on her touching him.,these words were very heart piercing dear riyu ko hi sab se zyada suffer karna pada hai ,sam is a true friend loved it ...precap seems interesting what dream it is?kyun chillayi woh is tarah ...waiting for next part...cont soon love u update soon thank for pm...well done keep writing...👏...ashu
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! riya is now suffering from memory loss... that's sad... i wonder how is arjun going to bring riya out of the fear since she remembers the bad side of him and not the good side... that is kinda horrible... i am sure arjun is feeling more bad than what the words could describe... but i am glad that arjun has his friends and father to help him out... i really hope that riya doesn't make it harder for him... please update soon! i can't wait to read more! totally excited! hope there will be something good in the next update... this update had left me feeling bad for both arjun and riya.. i just don want to feel the same again! =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aapi... Hum logon ko dhamkiyan to dete hi ho... Aab to story ke andaar bhi Mr. Rawte aur Rathod se bechare doctors ko dhamkiyan de rahi ho!!

Aaww...poor baby Riya! She had forgot her all the sweet memories with Arjun! She only had the memory of Arjun's dark side? Poor soul...

Bechare Arjun...! His physical and mental condition is in a very bad condition...

Ohh noo...now what everyone will ans to Riya's ques????

Continu sooon Aapi!!!

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