The Fading Butterfly: T2: CH 23 & IMPNOTE UPDATED ON PG 111 Oct21!

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

amazing post...i have commented on it there...

cont soon!

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

first i wanna to say...!!
congratulaton muski for ur second thread...!!
i will ye thread kabhi over he na ho...!!!
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as usal awesome awesome update..!!
u realy grate narrate the doc n arjun scence..!!
ohhh my poor arjun...!!
i realy feel sad when arjun cried..!!
i lv that dialog when arjun say i want everyone here for 24 hours..!!
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ohhh flash back was very saddd...!!'
i wanna to kill that sik...!!
ohh my poor baby...!!
how she defeat herself..!!
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why kaka stop arjun..!!
ten twenty punch neaded in on time..!!
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what happend to riya..
why she behaving so childish..!!
but i lv her deemand..!!
but stil scar..is sik do anythink more wrong..!!
hop she get well soon...!!
thank u so much muski for such a grate update...!!
day by day..i m adectiveee ur fff...
update soon..dr cant cant wait for next part...!!

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Congrats on new thread!!

Great update...

Continue soon

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Congratulations on the new thread :)

amazing update :) loved it

the hospital scene was amazing :)

loved the way arjun was getting mad at the doctor...

loved when rathore asked him to follow the rules and he denied :)

feeling bad for the poor doctor... he was so scared of arjun... arjun slapped him ouch..

god Sikander didn't even spare the doctor... he kidnapped him as well and threatened to kill his wife

sikander is so disgusting 😡 how could he do this? he tried to molest riya 😡

and then he asked riya to hurt herself?

i was crying when you wrote about how she stabbed herself :(

he is such a heartless person.. he asked doctor not to give her the full medication as she gave him only half entertainment...

felt so bad seeing arjun in that condition in hospital 😭

love how arjun asked rathore to stay in the room till riya gets better and his dad too... awww he really cares for his dad..

arjun's bonding with kaka is really sweet :)

flashback scenes were nice...

awww she decided to make his favorite chocolate cake for their 6 month anniversary...

oh so that's how that sick Sikander kidnapped her...

he kissed her forcefully 😡 disgusting...

felt so bad for riya :( poor girl

finally riya is conscious :)

awww how sweet his dad had put pillows around her so she won't fall from the bed :) he even did that for arjun when he was little..

omg riya was so bold 😳 she first asked him to kiss her and then say i love you

and then she asked him to make love to her

riya really loves him a lot

why did she say that i have no time left?

why is riya behaving like this?

precap seems scary..

arjun told sam everything that riya said...

and omg arjun sets Sikander free 😲 that is the biggest shock

eagerly waiting for next part

continue soon

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suklapanja1

@suklapanja1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

hi, i send you a mail id . i am a new reader. your story is awosome. but you dont send me the part11.

do you think i am not worthy for it?

i send you again my mail address. if you think it is right to send me the story. then send it

suklapanja1@gmail.com

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Prakrithy

@Arya1991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Uffo! My pyaari si dhamkee Queen.

Waise. Yeh update was interesting.
Kyunki on one side you answered so many questions...
and on the other hand, you've left us with many more doubts.

I hate Sik.
Truly, completely and thoroughly.
Ugh.
Disgusting, vile, inhuman, merciless, heartless freak of nature.
Kaaka shouldn't have held Arjun back.
Sik deserves to have a fate worse than death. At Arjun's or Riya's hands.

And. What did he do to Riya?! Why is she behaving so oddly?
Her demands are so unlike her. God. What the hell did Sik do to her?!

So many unaanswered qs.
And.
Such an intriguing precap.

You force I me to say this each n every darn time...
I'm most definitively, positively looking forward to reading your next update.

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

awww...awww awesome update
congrats for the second thread
thanx so much for such a amazing chapter
loved sameer nd arjun conversation
so happy tht riya is fine...bt why is she behaving like tht
did sik do anything wrong her
the flashbck was so amazing
hate thte sik guy hes so cruel
precap...sik free
why is arjun letting him go
eagerly waiting for the next chapter
continue soon

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sana khan

@sanakhan.khan16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

congo for the new thread...

awsm,brilliant,fantastic,mindblowing,v.good,mast.dhasu ab ise se zyada words mjhe yaad nahi aate hai (specially story read karne k baad or agar tumhe yaad hai toh add it yaarrr...)

if u could understand ma silence na den i would hav defntly posted a blank msg bt unfortunately for me u dnt...

cmng to d story.

arjun broke dwn tat was unbelvabl n tat doc pity on him n love d way arjun cared for his father n tat bloody ba****d hate him toh the care hw dare he kiss her seriously i really want to kill tat fu****g bas***d,i wanted to tore tat kamina lyk a tissue ppr n bu**sh**t man the precap was damn so scaryyy yaar did he really assault her i really dnt want tat to hppn to our swt doll n tat want to ny more masala to sik n riya story yaar...

plzzz save riya yaar y the hell she was talkin lyk tat she cant die,she cant broke down,SHE BELONGS TO ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE ...n cant take nymore cruelty wid her

hw can he kiss her i jst hate tat scene/part ab plzzz isse zyada or kuch mat karo bakhash do riya ko or arjun ko bhi plzzz ise zyada plzz kuch mat hone dena i cant bare a single scene b/w riya n sik(kamina) hate himmm...

sry if ny of ma word hurt u n plzzz the next part update soon...

Edited by sanakhan.khan16 - 12 years ago

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playagame

@playagame

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

hii muskan thnks for sharing ch11,but i don't recieve any invite or link for ch.12..plz help me as i m a mobile user...waiting 4 ur invite..

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beatrice_89

@beatrice_89

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

hi congrats for new thread. fab update as always, and dhamki is back well loved the way you put it. thank god riya is safe and arjun is happy. though the precap is a bit scary. felt pity for that poor doc, he was soo scared. continue soon

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