ARSHI FF: ~PAWN cr~(BFTW3)#5 V.V.IMP Pg170 14/04

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Katelyn

@Katelyn

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#1021

Fantastic update on Chapter 12, Appy!! 👏 I feel so terrible for Khushi! This is just too sad and emotional especially when she fainted and nobody was there to help her! 😭 Mrs. Gupta managed to fool ASR!! 😡 Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

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srilathas

@srilathas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1022

What a heart wrenching update dear!!!!!!!! great and apt for the story line!!!!!!!!!!

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esamoe

@esamoe

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1023

awesome update glad payel is modern in this ff. Poor khushi another MU.GG cannot be called a mother she's sick hate her. Waiting for the day khushi finds out and leaves.

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Jay

@Sharaa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1024

jus now all chapters in one go...

Amazing appy...

or should i say, it felt heavy on my heart as if something constricting...

Khushi, so naive, innocence personified...

Arnav, i cant hate him much too... his life seems to be hard for him from when his father left...

GG,Single chudail , masterminded RG for her greedy...wat to call her that ****bag...

omg, she is shameless one to say as woman...

jus possing feminine parts grossly doesn't say WOMAN...

Woman stands for their selflessness,unconditional love...

May be,Nani, Anju,Mami r judgeable...

loved ur style of writing...

jus now catching up with ur ffs...

Payel is diff scenerio here, so mature,modern ...omg sexually compatibilty b4 marrrige😲

my heart goes for Khushi much...donno how she'll survive after knowing truth...

waiting to know whether she stands with strongheaded r jus break into million pieces, unable to come up...

Arnav Khushi encounters jus scarce me while reading, still this takes this as punishment foe disclosing their privy...
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btw, this is real story based...???😲 😲 😲

may god always with that poor soul...

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kriti_angel1819

@kriti_angel1819

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1025

Just started reading and it simply amazing
Have a lot of respect for to choose the topic
It's sooo emotional I wanna cry and it simply wow!
Hope you continue very soon
I hope that Khushi will stand for herself one day

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luvkkgasr

@luvkkgasr

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1026

Oh NO...

the moment it seems der relationship is improving a bit dat b**** GG comes up and ruins everything...😡😡😡😡😡

if only i could kill dat GG... being a woman and a mother to her own daughter, she is hell bent on ruining her daughter's life... she deserves to die a painful death... 😡😡😡😡😡

Awww... Khushi shared some of her pain with Payal and bcoz of dat she has landed into huge problems with Arnav...

Arnav,.. kya karu main isska... one moment he is so sweet and d other moment he is such a dog to Khushi... 😡😡 he gets blind whenever he is angry... and due to his anger Gawwwddd knows how much he hurts our poor Khushi.. 😭😭😭😭

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luvkkgasr

@luvkkgasr

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1027

I so want Khushi to leave dis good for nothing Arnav NOW... like really NOW... 😭😭he doesn't and would never deserve her... he is not worthy of her in his life... 😡😡😡

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fatousha

@angel_prachi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1028

oh it was just superb Appy di awsomee poor khoushi she was so innocent arnav ko kab patachalega feeling sad tooo she is just sooo sad..:(..cried with khoushi today...

Appy di pllzz plzzz jaldi jaldi update karna ur magical world of arshi make us smile nd happy so muchhh uu create just a splendidas time for us..love uuu..:)))...

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Anupa Lahiri Ellard

@Anupa28

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1029

This is so painful. My heart cried out for poor Khushi. Hopefully Arnav comes to know about the truth and regret this.

As a writer a big shout out to you for bringing out all the emotions so well.

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Bhuvana

@NASAKE

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1030

OMG... Appy I Love u dear for this beautiful n unique story... but please please please post the future stories regularly... plz plz plz cant wait for future story... thx thx thx a ton dear...

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