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Reet !

@Amour_Reet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: AliceT
Marked!! 😊

thank you dear !!

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Reet !

@Amour_Reet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: maanmeet1
Awesome,...maan is concerned for her n now she knows dat...he was right when he got angry...geet was doing it for her classmate bt she knew he was nt wrong...

She knows der is something more to wht Arjun shows,...loved der conversation, her getting angry or j when dia is vd maan...

Indirect appreciation...loved everything...

thank you dear ...!
she could see the concern ...! she suspects him but have no reason to ...lets see what happens

keep reading dear!

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Reet !

@Amour_Reet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: -memorable-
don't you dare discontinue this FF
am loving it..although not as much as ILWE (no offence, this is my all time favorite) but its gripping on me
and a teacher-student bonding 😳

haha...loved your honest reply dear !!

thank you so much !

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Reet !

@Amour_Reet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

hey frens i m too tired now ...will do the rest of the replies and pms tomorrow
good night india !

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anupam

@shining_moon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

OMG...!!...reet u r here...??...on IF...!!...I can't believe it...!!

I can't tell u how much I waited for u...n u have started a new ff...haven't read yet

will read as soon as I m free...right now have to sleep...kal uni jaana hai

g nt

love

anupam

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-memorable-

@-memorable-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

but why two different names ? 🤔

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640638

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

I have to applaud you for your writing Reet. You could have made 3 to 4 updates out of this one update and yet you chose to put it all out here without making us wait. Thanks for that.

There is so much push and pull here and it is so fascinating to watch. Both the characters and their minutest reactions are captured so beautifully by you. If I mention a few scenes and not the others, don't think that I did not like the others. I loved when he walks in to find her cleaning up and putting his things right. There is so much ownership in that gesture by Geet for him. The annoyance he feels when she is drifting off into la la land and the chalk hitting her forehead had me smirking at the insecurity he feels. Can't contain himself can he?😆 Then banishing Dia with just a brusque query😆 I love how you are portraying them.

The background story, the flashback was eye opening to her character and his. He did come back with another name. Why was he using another name to begin with? More to come as we look into his characterization soon.

Please open a topic on Geet Forum and post all these parts there. We could seriously use an excellent story like this there. I am sure you will quadruple your readership in a few days as everyone knows you there. I know writers who post stories on two forums. Just put a connection link that you have transferred the story there...

Its past midnight here and I have to be up in 5 hrs to go to work so I'm off. Eagerly awaiting more.

Thanks for updating Reet! Great story!

Edited by had2bu - 12 years ago

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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

that was one lovely update...glad to know maan is arjun...but the mystery surrounds behind maan not returning back...seems to me a MU...

at this juncture geet is harbouring all negative thoughts...i hope they instead being at each other's throats , take a step ahead towards their blooming relationship...

the student teacher dilemma has been captured with subtlety and portrayed bang on...
loved the update

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

No... We know who is Maan...lol... Awesome part i can understand geets hesitation ... He is her teacher end of day...
So geet dada lied to her about maan... Arjun think geet forget him... Hope their misunderstandi will clear out soon...

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baisakh45

@baisakh45

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Posted: 12 years ago

#160

i think geet's dada is villain here.waiting to clear the misunderstanding.definitely we know who is maan.anyway loved it.when will you start updating your ILWE?this is my all time favourite ff.i am in love with ILWE.