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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 98:

Everyone is still looking for Neha...

Even Anand has started helping them

Neha is still walking on the side

Some person pushes her and her teddy bear falls...

She tries getting to it... but there are way too many people

She gives up on it and continues walking

Disha is looking but no use

Dk is in the car.....but nothing

Neha has her back turned....... and Dk passes right by her.... he doesnt see her

As soon as he passes by then she turns around

Dk goes a long distance... and finally he turns back around

He is coming and he sees something.....

He parks his car and gets down

He sees some sort of bear

He runs to it... and notices it's Nehas'!!!!

Dk: This is Neha's...

He looks around.... but cant see her

Dk: That means she was here

He has flashbacks of her and the bear!!!!!

Dk starts crying and stares at the bear.....

He also hugs it....

He gets up and drives off again!!!!

Neha's real parents are looking...

Mom: I think its our fault for bringing her here!!! We should have left her!!!!

Dad: but she's our child

Mom: Yeah but look at what happened?

Both of them are worried

Dk comes back home..... and has the bear in his hand....

Disha sees the bear.....

Disha: Dk... bear?

Dk: This is Neha's bear.....

Disha then remembers... and starts crying.....

She holds on to the bear and looks at it....

Disha: I want Neha back!!!!!!

She cries and Dk comes over and consoles her...

Everyone is worried sick about her

Neha sits in a corner....

She falls asleep....

All of a sudden she hears a noise and wakes up...

She looks and sees these tough guys...

She gets really scared....

They are all laughing and drunk and what not.....

Neha has tears in her eyes

She doesnt move a muscle.....

The guys eventually leave.... and she feels a little better

Neha hates what's going on....

Neha; I want my mommy and daddy

She has flashbacks of all the times w/ Dk and Disha

She smiles... and thinks about it

Disha is worried sick..

She doenst even go to sleep

Dk: Disha.. rest please... you havent gotten sleep for 2 days

Disha: How can i sleep.. when my daughter is wandering off somewhere.. all scared and alone..... Dont even know how she is? Where she is?? Is she okay or in trouble?

Dk is like i am also thinking the same thing... but what can we do we are helpless!!!!

They finally inform the police....

The police posts pictures everywhere.......

They also look for her

Disha is looking for her through-out the whole day....

She doesnt go home til late!!!!

Neha walks some more.....

She steals food again and eats it.....

Her clothes are dirty... and she hasnt taken a bath....

There is a hose w/ water...

She goes by there and she wets herself........

Doesnt help... but something better than nuthin

She walks and walks through out the whole day...

She doesnt know where she is going..

When ever its night.... she finds herself.... a corner....

This time its 7:00.... she gets really tired and goes to sleep

Dk is still looking in the place where he hasnt looked

Neha is sleeping....

5 guys come and see her sleeping

They smile and look at each other......

They go by Neha........

Neha opens her eyes... and sees the guys

She quickly sits up...

She is so scared .... she is shaking

One guy tries picking her up but she doesnt want to go....

They all surround her......

Dk is still looking for her.....

Dk sees some guys...... he thinks there is a fight....

He gets down....

Dk: Hey what are you guys doing???

Guy: Nothing...Why??

Dk: Nothing.....

Neha's like that voice sounds familiar

Dk starts walking towards the car....when Neha yells....

Neha: PAPA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: Neha?? (hes confused... whether or not.... he really heard her voice)

Neha crawls through the guys leg and runs.... Dk sees her and is shocked and happy

But one of the guys get a hold of her.... and has a knife in his hand

Dk: Look give me my daughter... ... i have been looking for her for 2 days now...

Guy: Oh really

Dk sneakly dials the police's number.....

The policeman picks it up and listens to the whole thing

He is trying to figure out where Dk is......

Dk: Look i finally found her now give her back.....

And while saying that he tells them where she is... and the police get right on it....

Neha bites him so hard he lets go and she falls on her feet and runs to Dk...........................

They hug to tightly... and by then the cops are there and arrest the guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk and Neha are hugging and they dont let go..., its because she doesnt want to let go

Dk: Why did you run away?

Neha: I wanted to be w/ you!!!!! Ur my daddy... no1 else is!!!!!

Dk picks her up and puts her in the car......

SAdly to say... Dk takes her to her real parents house.....

Neha sees this and starts yelling in the car and throwing tantrums

Dk is sad and doesnt know what to do!

Neha; Daddy i dont wanna be here.. please take me home....... to ur house... please...... please...

Dk picks her up and takes her to the doorstep.. and he rings the bell...

She is kicking and screaming and DK feels really bad

The mom opens the door and is happy cuz her daughter is found

Dk tells her what has happened.... they were both shocked.....

Dk puts her down slowly but she doesnt let go....

Dk: Please Neha.... this is ur house!!!

Neha; You dont love me anymore? You hate me!!!

DK is shocked....

Neha cries...

Neha; Daddy i will never forgive you if i stay here......

Dk doesnt understand what to do!!!!!

He starts walking towards the car......

Neha: (yells) I will never forgive you!!!!!!!!!!!! You dont love me!!!!!!

Dk is sad and is crying.......

Dk gets into his car looks at Neha and he drives off..........




Okay the end...............


Preview for tomorrow:

Dk: I found Neha!!!!

Disha: Where is she?

Dk: Her home

Disha is sad

Disha: What?? YOu couldnt bring her here?

Dk: I am sorry Disha...

Disha: What sorry?? I couldnt even see her....

Dk: She will never forgive me..... cuz i left her there

Dk is sad.. has tears in his eyes.... and walks off... Disha sees and gets sad!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
bichari neha, bichara dk, bicari disha

i hope the rona dhona won't last long. 😭 😭 😭


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Posted: 20 years ago
yaar silk u wrote bichari neha,bechara DK n bicari(beggar)Disha 😆 funny yaar

YAAR guli nice story indeed u r also twisting the story like our guhas

i think guhas has effected ur brain yaar so these twists n turns but nice story

keep them coming
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
wow awesome part very emotional 😭 made me cried for the some part
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Posted: 20 years ago
that was good but is made me cry
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Posted: 20 years ago
aww.. it was soo sad!! plz cont soon!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
awsome job guli444!!
hope the neha ends coming back to dk and disha!
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Posted: 20 years ago
great work 👏
today's update was very emotional 😭 n sad i hope neha reunites with her old family will the kids kushi n dhruv will go n meet neha. 😭
please update soon 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
wow its really good just got around to reading it all ...........keep it up can't wait till the next bit

Love Asian Princess
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Posted: 20 years ago
guli444......i must say ure fantastic!!!!...omg, i jus started reading this about 2days ago, i loved it toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much, its fab!!...plz continue writing, i cnt w8 to read the next part.....my hand is full of writing of wot part im on....lool 😆 ......ure doing a gr8 job, plz carry on... 😊 ...i hope there r sum romantic scene's between the 2Ds 😆

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