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gud job and hope u hav fun in India!!
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THAT WAS GREAT
HAVE FUN IN INDIA!!!!
LOVE NAAZ
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Part 81

Dk and Disha are cuddled up in bed and the alarm rings.....

Disha turns it off

Disha: Dk.. get up.. you have to go to office...

Dk: Yeah yeah!!!!

They are stuck together!!!!

Disha: Come on Dk..

Dk: Disha.. its only 8 and besides its not like i have to be there on time!!!

Disha: Dk... come on!!!

Dk: Disha.. please!!

He comes closer and starts kissing her on her neck

Disha: Dk!!! You always start!! Come on stop it and go and take your shower!!!

Dk: No!!!

Disha: Dk i am warning you!!!

Dk: Disha... ur so mean!!!

Disha: I Know!!!😃😃😃

Dk: I dont feel like getting up!!!

Disha: Well ur gonna have to!!

Eventually he gets up!!!!

They both get ready and the guys leave for work...

The kids go to school

In the afternoon..... there is a moving van outside........

Disha, Preity, and Sia come out and they are getting new neighbors....

As usual they are being nosey.....

There are only two people.... A sweet gal.. by the name of Poonam..

They see her come out...... and then.... they see something.....

They look and there is a man on a strecher!!!!! All three of them are shocked!!!

After a couple of hours... the gals go next door...

They come inside.... and Poonam sees them

Disha: Hi....

Poonam: Hello?!😕😕

Disha: We saw the moving van.... so we wanted to meet our new neighbors....

Poonam: Oh you live next door?

Disha: Yes!!

Poonam: Well.. Nice to meet you.. My name is Poonam!!

Disha: I am Disha.... and these are my sister-in-laws... Preity and Sia...

They all say hi to each other

Poonam likes them.. and she gets comfortable w/ them!!

Poonam: You are all nice people.....

Disha: Well if you ever need anything... never ever hesitate to ask.... we are right next door!!

Poonam: Thanx a lot!!

Sia: I hope you dont mind me asking... but who was that man...??

Poonam: Oh that's my husband....

Preity: Husband??

Poonam: Yes... he is a coma!!!!!!!!!!!

All three of them are shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: Coma????

Poonam: Yes... he got into a car accident last year and he went into a coma!!!

All three of them are sad!!😭😭😭

Sia: I am sorry!!!

Poonam: Dont worry about it!!

Disha: Anyways.. we better leave now... if you need anything... just let us know!!

They all leave.... Poonam starts unpacking some thing and keeps an eye on her husband..... whose name is Anand!!

The gals go back into their house and tell Dhruv (Senior) and Sum....

Both of them were shocked hearing about it!!

The gals start cooking dinner.....

The guys come home from work......

They all eat dinner!!!!!! and they finish The gals go back next door...

Dk: Where are you going??

Disha: Next door...

Dk: Why??

Disha: WE have new neighbors...

DIsha tells all three of them the story!!!

The guys decide to tag along!!

Poonam is unpacking still and everyone is watching....

Disha: Poonam???

Poonam: Disha you?

Disha; We came to see if you needed anything!!

Poonam: No i am fine!!

Disha introduces the hubbies.....

Poonam: i will be right back!!

She goes and checks on Anand!!

And she comes back out

Disha: Do you need any help?

Poonam: No i have everything under control.....

Sia: You look really tired!!!! You need to take rest!!!

Poonam: i will!! Later!!!

Disha: Did you eat dinner??

Poonam: Not yet!! But after this is done.. i will make something!!

Dk: You need to eat something!!!

The guys help her like rearranging the furniture and things ....

Poonam: Its okay!! I dont need any help!!!

Suraj: You shouldnt do this by urself!!!

Ved: Yes!!!

Preity goes and gets some food for her!!

Disha and Sia help her w/ the kitchen stuff afterwards the place is done!!!

Preity comes back w/ food

Poonam: Arre.. why did you take the trouble?

Preity: It was nothing!! You need to sit down and eat!!

Poonam keeps going back and fourth checking on her husband!!!!

Everyone leaves for the night!!!!

Dk: What a sweet girl!!

Disha: Yes... she takes good care of her husband..... But the poor thing is all by herself...

Dk: Yeah thats true!!

Couple of days later:

The gals come next door but this time w/ Sum:

Poonam: I dont know how to thank you guys for everything you have done!!!

Disha: It was our pleasure!!!! Poonam.. i would like to meet our wonderful mother -in-law!!

Poonam takes her blessing!!!

They talk and chit chat!

Sum has to go somewhere w/ Dhruv so she leaves

Poonam: You guys are so lucky that you have a great mom-in-law!

Disha: Dont you have one?

Poonam: Yes... but because of her i am here today!!!

All of them are shocked!!!

Sia: Why?

Poonam: Me and Anand got married 2 years ago.... but i dont know my mother-in-law didnt like me..... and she kept on causing trouble between me and anand

Note: Anand is in a coma!!! He is in the room.... and the door is open.... He maybe in a coma... but he can hear everything!! but cant react!! so everything Poonam is saying he can hear!!!

Poonam: Becuase of that me and Anand were constantly fighting and fighting...... I dont know what my mother in law's problem was!!! And it was on the verge of our marriage breaking!!! Then... Anand got into a major car accident.... and he was in a coma.... and because of that... My mom in law.. became even worse and she kept on getting mad at everything little thing and she blamed me for everything about the coma, etc.... The doctors told me to take Anand home maybe he might get better....


The gals are shocked

Poonam: I got fed up w/ everything and i decided to move!! I know he will get better!!! i have full faith..... But the one thing that bothers me was.. that day of the accident.. we had a major argument and he left and then thats the last time he spoke to me..... and ever since then i havent heard his voice!!!

The gals get teary!!

Anand has heard everything.......... but poor guy cant do anything.... there is 1 drop of tear going down his cheek!!!!

The gals go and see him... and they just look at him!!

The guys come and see if their wives are there and they come and see him... as well....

Disha insists to have dinner at Poonams place and everyone agrees..........

Everyone has dinner at Poonam's house!!!

Poonam summarizes the story and tell the guys!!

At Radha's house:

Sameer tells everything to Radha on what Nisha said.... and Radha is relieved that Nisha has forgiven her but its Amar she is worried about!!! Sameer has tried to convince him but Amar is still very angry!!

Nisha: Amar... do you love me?

Amar: Of course i do!!

Nisha: would you do anything for me??

Amar: You name it and i will do it!

Nisha: I want you to forgive mummyji!!!!

Amar; Nisha!!!!!!!!

Nisha: Please!!!??? for me!! For my sake!!! i know you are angry..... but come on... we have to move on!!! Forget about it ...

Amar: But Nisha.. the things she did!!

Nisha: I know... but grown ups make mistakes too and we have to forgive them!!

Amar decides long and hard... about it...

When he turns he sees Sameer and behind him is Radha....

Nisha is happy to see her.... but Amar is like 😕

Nisha gives him signals to go up to her....

Amar is like... do i really have to type of look!!

After about 5 mins...Amar forgives his mother and everyone is happy!!!!!

Then Amar smiles!!! But they are still going to stay there... .Radha doesnt mind.. as long as his son isnt mad at her!!!😃


Rohan's house:

Anjali is 8 months pregnant.......

Anjali is eating... and all of a sudden there is pain and she starts screaming

A: Rohan.. take my to the hospital....

Everyone is shocked and they rush her into the hospital.....

The Docs are looking at her... Meanwhile Dk and Disha come....

Doctors say that they have to deliver now...... so they get ready.....

They tell that to everyone

After another 30 mins...... Anjali delivers a baby boy!!!! He's a premature baby.....

Doc tells the good news to everyone and they are all relieved.. Both mother and son are doing good!!!

Dk's a mama.. thats so cute!!!😆

The baby will have to stay for a couple of days.. cuz it is a little weak.. but everything else is fine!!!

Rohan is thrilled that he's a father!!!!

Dk and Disha go home and give the good news... and everything is okay!! cuz they were all tensed!!!!!!!!!!!!

Next Door:

Poonam is there next to Anand and is just talking to him.... she doesnt know that he can hear... and she just starts crying and telling him about how she misses him!! etc...

All of a sudden her mom in law comes and starts yelling at her again for no good reason and she says that if anything happens to him she wont spare her!!!! And because of her he's in this state!!!!

Poonam is just shocked and sad!!!! Anand has heard!!!

Her mom in law leaves in a huff😡

Poonam comes back and starts crying again!!!!!!!!!!

Poonam: I need you Anand!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please come back to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭

She starts to break down................. and Disha comes in and sees it and consoles her!!!

Disha: No... Please dont cry!!! Have faith everything will be alright!!!!

Poonam cries on her!!!!

Disha: Here i have brought you some food!!!!!!!!

Poonam: I am not hungry!!!

Disha; YOu have to eat something!!!

Poonam: I will!!

Disha: Poonam i have been noticing.... you havent been eating properly....

Poonam: How can i??? I cant do anything when i see my husband like this!! Look at him!!

Disha calms her down...........

Disha: I know... you have been working day and night non stop for his sake!!!! Even you need to take rest!! You know.. one of us can always come and watch Anand... you need to go to sleep... look at ur eyes!!

Poonam: I am fine!!!!

Disha: Be honest.... how long have you slept for?

Poonam: Well since this had happened.. i only get about 5 hours a sleep every night!!

Disha; What???? You need to go to sleep!!!

Poonam: I am fine!!!

Disha suggest that they have a bhajan at her house...... Poonam agrees and the next day thats what they have!!!

Everyone is there and they start!!!! Even Suhas and Vijendra along w/ Azuba come!!

Poonam is praying and is praying for Anand to get better!!!!!!

Everyone also prays for that as well!! They all want Anand to get well.... and they all like Poonam and thinks she is sweet!

Everyone leaves afterwards........... Poonam is falling asleep sitting on the couch... The gals notice and they let her fall asleep... and they cover her w/ a blanket!!! They watch Anand.. and they stay there!!!

Afterwards... The gals take turns.. cuz someone needs to be home... and cook dinner and stuff.... so Preity stays..... and then they alternate!!!

Neither of them care! About doing this... so thats good!!

Poonam wakes up and realizes that she had dozed off for about 5 hours and she gets all worried

Disha is there

Poonam: Why didnt anyone wake me up?

Disha: Because u need ur rest!!! You dozed off so me, sia and Preity took turns coming in and out.. and watching Anand for you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Poonam: But.. why did you do that?

Disha: Because... we are good friends!!! And here i brought you dinner!!!

Poonam thinks that these are truly good people that God has sent from above!!!

Disha leaves

Disha goes into the kitchen and makes herself.. a chocolate sundae

She takes it into her room

Dk sees

Dk: Disha... not again!!

Disha laughs!!

Disha sits next to Dk...

Dk: Where's mine?

Disha: Oops.. forgot!!

Dk: Ur going to have to pay for that now!!

Disha: How?

Dk: Give me that!!

Disha: No its mine!!!

Dk: You sound like a little girl!!!

Disha: SO??

Dk laughs!!

They both split it and Disha feeds him and they both enjoying...........



Okay you guys night night!!!!!!!!!!!! 1 down 1 to go!!! tomorrow will be my last update b4 i leave on sat!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭


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Posted: 20 years ago
👏This was a very wonderful update!!!!😊Have fun in India!!!! We will miss you!!!😭
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Posted: 20 years ago
awww how cute! gr8 story! guli i will truely miss u!😭! have a safe trip n hope 2 hear from u when u return!! have fun!!!😊
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it was awesome as usual

thanks ..........................

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good going and we all u miss u so much hope u have a wonderful journey to indiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa alvida
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Part 82

Disha wakes up in the morning..... and she wakes up Dk...

Disha: Come on Dk wake up!! Hurry up!!!

Dk: Where are you going??

Disha: I am going to check on Poonam

Dk: Hey.. what abour ur husband???

Disha: Well... ur up now get ready!!!

Disha leaves!!!

Dk: Disha... (calls her and gives a nod)

Disha goes next door and sees Poonam praying and DIsha sits next to her!!

They both are praying....

Poonam opens her eyes and sees Disha..

Poonam: Arre Disha.. you??

Disha: Yes me!! i came to check on the two of you!!!

Poonam: WE are okay!!!

Disha: Thats good!!

Dk comes out of the shower and gets ready...

Dk: She still isnt back yet.... but she will come back!!!! (cuz b4 he leaves he kisses her goodbye)

Dk is about to leave in 2 mins...and is just making sure she has everything!!

Dk comes out and is walking up to the car

Disha looks and the time and tells Poonam she has to go..

She runs out and Dk is walking towards the car and before Dk reaches there Disha is there!!!

Dk: Oh so you made it after all????

Disha: Of course!!!!!

Dk: So can i get into the car?

Disha: No.. arent you forgetting something??

Dk: No!! I have everything!!!

Disha: Dk???

Dk: What?? I have everything!! i dont need to do anything

Disha is sad and Dk can tell... he puts his things in the car.... and is about to sit in the car...... but stops....

Disha; What happened?

Dk kisses her!!!

Dk: You thought i forgot???

Disha: No... (Yeah right)

Dk: (laughs)

He leaves and DIsha goes back into the house!!

Poonam is just praying and praying.... 24/7 for Anand....

She just talks to herself... but Anand is listening!!

Later that day Dk comes home... Disha isnt there....

The guys bought their wives Diamond necklaces... and they are like Whoa!!!! They are all different but they look similar...... but they are nice and expensive!!!

Dk leaves the room and Disha comes in and sees the box she opens it and sees it.. but then closes it and tells herself.. she will act surprised!!!! 😆😆😆

Disha goes next door again and consoles Poonam cuz she is crying!!!! 😭😭

She stays there for a while

Dk comes back and can tell that Disha has saw it.. they way he could tell was the way he put the box... and he noticed that it was moved a little!!!!

He opens it and picks it up and looks at it.... he wants to add something on it.. so just takes the necklace and puts it in his pocket... 😕

Disha comes back and looks at Preity who has already put it on.... and DIsha is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: (to herself) Isnt that mine???? What is she doing wearing it?

Disha goes into her room and opens the box and sees that the necklace isnt there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: Why would Dk get her something like that???

Disha is confused!!! 😕

Later that evening... Disha is still thinking about the necklace and is all bitter!!!!!

Dk notices that something is wrong w/ her!!

After cleaning up .... Disha comes inside the room and Dk is there on the bed

Dk: Is something wrong Disha??? You seem upset about something?

Disha: Who.. me...?? why would i be upset???

In that sarcastic tone...

Dk: Oh come now!! something is bothering you!!

Disha: Matter of fact yes something is bothering me!!!!!

Dk: What??

Disha: I saw Preity today.... and she was wearing a necklace!!!!!!

Dk: So??

Disha: Well i saw that in this box!!! what was she doing wearing it?

Dk: (To Himself): OH so you thought i bought it for her... and when you didnt see it.. you became suspicious???

Disha: Why arent you saying anything

Dk: Well.. um..

Disha: Well um.. what??? Why did you buy her such an expensive necklace... you thought i wasnt going to find out about it??

Disha turns around and has her back to Dk with her arms folded........

She just keeps going on and on and getting mad at Dk

Dk is just laughing 😆

And Disha is still babbling.....

After... Dk takes the necklace and puts its around Disha and Disha is shocked and stops talking!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: What did you think?? I bought that for her??? Disha.. sometimes i can never understand you!! We all bought one for our wives!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And by the way i knew you peeped.. cuz the way i put the box wasnt like that when i saw it again!!!!!

Disha blushes and is embarrased!!!

Dk: Disha.. sometimes you are unbelievable!!!

Disha turns around and hugs him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

Poonam is there staring at Anand................

All of a sudden.... Anand closes his eyes and Poonam saw that and is shocked......

She calls the doctor and the doctor comes...

The gals notice it and rush next door...

Doc tells her to go outside... but she refuses... the gals take her out... and doc is observing him

Soon... Anand begins moving his hand....... and very very very slowly he opens his eyes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Doc has noticed that he is out of coma.........

Anand: (very very low voice and softly) Doc??

Doc: You are out of coma Mr. Anand!!!

Anand has a smile on his face!!

Doc opens the door and Poonam rushes in.... like crazy

Poonam sees Anand and they stare at each other for a long time........ The gals are next to her!!!

Anand: Poonam?????

Poonam is shocked and thrilled and is crying...... and the gals have figured out.. he is not into coma...

Poonam comes closer to him and sits down........ and they both smile at each other!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and Poonam is crying away like crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Okay i will cont.. my last and final story 2nite!!!!!!!!! My last one b4 i leave!!😭


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Posted: 20 years ago
Hey guli....I haven't read your entire story...just teh last scene...and I must say u really do a lot....like writing everyday...that is very sweet of u to take time and write it...they are long great ones......u have a very special talent that not eveeryone has......and u should be proud of it...its too good yaar....Keep it up....if if were to write everyday ..meri to death hi hojaati😆.....good job....u should be proud of yourself😃

Bomby!😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
u have a great story guli444
i agree with bomby u have a very special talent that not everybody has (including me)😉
well have fun
im gonna miss ur stories😭
bye
love naaz

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